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Post by vickey1211 on Jul 11, 2018 19:03:42 GMT 5.5
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Post by kadir on Jul 11, 2018 23:10:04 GMT 5.5
waiting for next update
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Post by kabir on Aug 8, 2018 16:26:05 GMT 5.5
friend , aap apni story continue nahi karenge ?
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Post by kabir on Sept 11, 2018 17:33:33 GMT 5.5
keya e story ese hi adura rahega . agar koi is story ko continue kar 6akte ho to plz is story ko continue karo . bahat a6si story he ……..
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Post by arjun7271038711 on Sept 12, 2018 7:11:36 GMT 5.5
story band ho Gaye hi
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Post by rishi360 on Nov 10, 2018 21:14:52 GMT 5.5
Are jab story complete nahin Karna tha to suru hi kyun kiya.... complete to kya iska ek percent bhi complete nahin Kiya...
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Post by Pradip on Nov 28, 2018 7:32:51 GMT 5.5
[font Update 9 Wakt ki karwat sab ko badal deta hai aur yehi badlaw jindigi ka ahem hissa hai.Aise hi din bitte gaye aur Donon bade hote gaye.Aab to ish naamkaran ghatna ko 4 saal bit chuke the.Janha Arohi apni titli si swabhab leke ghar me khusiyon ki phulon me apna rang bichhar ne lagi thi wanhi Rajveer apni pariwar ki anch me duniya ko dekh raha thaa.Angelina ki panat me usne jannat ko paa gaya thaa.Arohi to Rajveer se kabhi alag bhi nahin hoti thi.Har choti choti baaton ka woh khyal rakh rahi thi.Rajveer ki totla juban ko Arohi badi asani se samajh jaati thi.Har raat woh uske pash hi soti thi.Angelina se suni hui kahani Rajveer ko sunati thi.Har baat me sirf Rajveer ka hi jikr karti thi jaise Rajveer ki Maa ho.Ghar me sab apne bachhon ki ish tarah ek dusre ki pyar ko dekh najar utarte the.Jab Arohi school chali jaati thi tab Rajveer gumsum sa betha rahata tha.Woh Arohi ki best friend uski teddy bear:D se sikayat bhi karta ki "tuchse gutta ho kal meli didi kul(school) tali gayi tuje main nain tolunga" kaha kar ushe marne bhi lagta.Darwaje se yah dekh kar sabki hasi Putti jaati.Angelina ushe jaise taise mana kar apne pash bitha kar apni kam karti thi.
Aise hi dekhte dekhte kese aur do saal bit gaye pata nahin chala.Aab to Rajveer bhi Arohi ki saath school jane laga thaa.Rajveer aab dekhne me cute sa lag raha thaa.Jo bhi dekhta yahi kahata kitna pyara bachha kash mera bachha bhi aisa hi dikhta.Sab najar laga rahe the Rajveer par lekin Arohi aur Angelina ki pyar aur sneh ush par kisiki najar tak nahin aane dete the.Nili anken gol komol chehera fairy face wow kya bataun pura chocolate boy har koi ushe pappi dene ko chahega.Aab to in donon ko har baaton ka thodi thodi samajh aane lagi thi.Subah ki suruwat donon ki bhag dod se shuru hoti hai aur Rat ko donon Apni mummy Angelina se kahani sunke soo jaate the.Lekin ek baat aab dheere dheere in logon ko chintit karne lagi thi.Arohi jab saath hoti to Rajveer to khus hi rahata lekin jab Arohi ush se dur rahati school jaane ki bajah se,picnic school tour ki bajah se ho jo bhi bajah se ho jab Arohi Rajveer se dur rahati to Rajveer ko chidhcidha fill hota tha.Agar bohot pareshan ho jata to gusse se me apni ghutno ke bal beth kar jor se chillane lagta.Ek baar Arohi apni school ki koi tour ki bajah se char din ke liye ghar se bahar gayi thi.Ram bhi apna business tour pe pahale se hi out of city gaya hua thaa. Rajveer ko jab ye baat pata chala to woh bahot dukhi ho gaya.Do hi din gaye honge Arohi ko tour me jaate hue khudko sambhal ne Rajveer ke liye muskil ho gay.Ek Arohi to thaa jo naa ki uska bachpana ko samajhta balki uske saath bachhi ban jata magar do din se Arohi ko naa dekh pane ki bajah se andar se chidcidha fill karta.Ghar me beth kar ball se khel raha tha ki woh khidki se bahar chala gaya.Woh dhundte dhundte nahin paya to room me beth kar gusse se chillane laga. Uske aashpash ki chijon jaise kanch ki khidki glasses photo sates chur chur ho kar tutne lagta.Rajveer ka yah haal dekh kar ek pal ke liye to Angelina khud dar gayi lekin tabhi uski dimag me Gurudev ki baat aa jaati hai.Woh foran Arohi ko video call karti hai aur phone Rajveer ko pakda deti hai.Phone par Arohi jab Rajveer yah haal dekhta hai to sehem si jaati hai.Thik subah hi Arohi aake ghar me hajir ho jaati hai.Rajveer Arohi ko kaske gale laga leta hai aur phut phut ke rone lagta hai.
Rajveer - Didi kanah chali gayi thi aap mujhe yanha akela achha nahin lag raha tha.
Arohi - koi nahin betu aab main aa gaya hun naa chal dubara tujhe akela chodke kanhi nahin jaungi main.
Rajveer - wada..
Arohi - Pakka wala wada.
Aise hi jab bhi Rajveer gussa hota Arohi usko sahal deti to apne aap uska gussa shant ho jaata.Kuch din baad Rajveer ka birthday Aane vala tha.Rajveer ko apne birthday ke bare me kuch bhi yaad nahin tha lekin uske pariwar vale thodi na bhul sakte hai.Besabri se intejar kiya hua din bhi aaj aa hi gaya.Aaj raat barah bajne ko sirf 5 minutes baki the.Sab milke Rajveer ke daraje ke pas pahonchte hain aur darwaja khul kar jo dekhte hain unke ankheen phati ki phati rah jaati hai.Dar ke mare kampne lagte hain.
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Post by Pradip on Nov 28, 2018 7:38:18 GMT 5.5
Update 10 Sab milke Rajveer ke daraje ke pas pahonchte hain aur darwaja khulkar jo dekhte hain unke ankheenphati ki phati rah jaati hai.Dar ke mare kampne lagte hain. Veer ka body hawa me jhul raha thaa aur uska sharir ko ghera banaate hue 10 shaktion ka gola jo pure kamre ko chamaka rahe ghum rahe the.Koi bhi himmat nahin juta paa raha tha Veer ke pash jaane ko.Sab bas ankheen phad kar Veer ko dekhe jaa rahe the.Angelina aur Dadi to rone lage the Veer ko aise sthiti me dekh kar.Zindigi me shayad hi aisi baaton ka koi yakin karen lekin inka kya ye to live dekh rahe the woh bhi apne bachhe ke saath.Sab Veer ko dekh hi rahe the ki Arohi kab Veer ke pahonchi kisiko ko pata hi nahin chala.Angelina ki najar jab Arohi par padi to uska dill aur bhi ghabra gayi.Ushe dar thaa ki Arohi ko bhi kuch ho naa jaye.Janha kuch der pahale sab Veer ki birthday ko le kar bohot khus wanhi aab sab ke chehere me khouf ki chhaya umand raha thaa. Dekhte dekhte Arohi veer ki najdik me pahonch gayi.Apni haath ko Veer ko chune ki ichha se Veer ki taraf badha di tabhi sabhi shaktion ki gola Jo Veer ki shareer ko ghera bana kar gol gol ghum rahe the;Apas me takrane lage aur phir ek bada sa aakar me badal kar (ek football ki tarah) ek ho gaye.Kisiko kuch samajh me nahin Aa raha tha kisiko bhi apni ankhoon par bharosa nahin ho raha tha ki woh jo dekh rahe hain woh sach hai.Angelina to beshos hone ko thi Dadi unhe jor se pakde darwaje ke pash khadi thi.Arohi weisa hi apni haath badhate hue khadi thi.Dekhte dekhte woh shakti ka gola Veer ki sharir me prabesh kar gaya aur veer ki sharir chamakta hua hawa me hi ghumne laga aur phir dhadang se bad par gir gaya jish se sab ki chinkh nikal gayi.Arohi bhi wanhi farsh par behos ho gayi. Subah ko Arohi ki ankh dheeme dheeme kholti hai.Ankhen malte hue nind se jagti hai to khud ko apni mom dad ki kamre soyi hui paati hai.Baju dekhti hai to baju me Veer besudh ho kar soya hua thaa.Achhanak ushe sab kuch yad aane laga.Kal ki andheri kali raat sabki man me ek kali chhap chodke chali gayi thi.Arohi Veer ko uthane jaise hi ushe hilane ko hoti dekhti hai ki Angelina aur Dadi bed ke niche bed par sir tikate hue so rahe the.Veer ko kya jagayegi woh sidha niche utarke Angelina ko jagati hai.Angelina jaise hi neend se jagti hai Arohi ko apne pash sahi salamat dekh uske gale laga leti hai aur uski chehere ko betahasa chumne lagti hai. Angelina - Tu thik to hai na Arru? Arohi - haan maa main thik hun par hum sab yanha kese?Aur aap log yanha kyun soee hui hain? Dadi bhi in donin ki baatchit se jag chuki thi. Dadi - Beta kal raat ko kya hua thaa to tumhe pata hi hai.Kal raat se tum donon behos ho aur Veer beta to abb bhi behos hai. Pata nahin bhagwan hamse kya chahata hai kyun woh hamare Veer ko itna kast de raha hai. Angelina veer ke pash jaati hai ushe pukarti hai hilati hai magar Veer hai ki uthne ka naam hi nahin le raha thaa. Angelina ki ro ro kar halat kharab ho gayi thi.Akhir ek maa hi to thi apni bachhon ko ish sthiti me dekh koi bhi maa pareshan hona swabhabik hai.Lekin yanha ek maa ki dill dawn par laga hua thaa.Dill me ajib ajib se khyal aa rahe thee.Angelina ko Dadi samjha rahi thi magar woh bas Veer ko pukar rahi thi hilati jaa rahi thi.Darte hue Angelina ne Veer ki heart beat check karne uske byne chhati par hath rakti hai."Nahinnnnnnnn"Ek chikh ke saath Angelina apni haath hata leti hai.Arohi aur Dadi jaise sadme me pahonch gaye ho.Angelina Veer ki maathe ko apni god me lete hue rone lagti hai.Aaj ek maa chikh chikh kar ro rahi thi apne bachhe ko kho dene ki dar se. Angelina -(rote hue) Betu uthjaa naa kyun apni mumaa ko dara raha hai.Dekh ye drama na me hajar baar dekh chuka hun please ye majak karne ka wakt nahin uth jaa dekh teri mumma ka kya hal ho rahi hai.Please betu uth jaa. Angelina ki ansoon jab Veer ki ankhn par girti hai to Veer ki shareer me halchal hone lagti hai.Woh kahate hain na ek bachhe ke liye uski maa ki har ek dua ,ansoon itni takat hoti hai ki bhagwan bhi vivas ho jaate hain ush maa ki murad puri karne ki. Aur tabhi achhanak se Veer uth beitha ta hai apni haathon se kan ko dabate hue jor jor se chillane lagta hai.Cheenkh itni bhayankar thi ki wanha rakha har ek chiz churmar hone lagta hai.Darwaja khidki chare table har ek chiz ek pal me hi tut kar bikhar jaata hai.Sab apne kanon me haath de dete hai.Arohi jaise taise khud ko sambhalte hue Veer ke pash jaata hai aur uska sar ko sahala deta hai tabhi Veer ka chinkh band ho jaata hai aur phir se behos ki aghos me chala jaata hai.
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Post by Pradip on Nov 28, 2018 7:39:52 GMT 5.5
update 11 Veer ka ye halat dekh sabki roungte khade khade ho gaye.Kisiko kuch sujhh nahin raha thaa.Tabhi ghar ki calling bell bajti hai.Dadi jaa kar darwaja kholti hain.Saamne dekhti hain to chounk jaati hai Kyun ki saamne Gurudev khade the.Dadi unhe ghar ke andar bula leti hain.Dadi unhe kuch kahne ko hote hain ki Guruji unhe rok dete hain. Gurudev - Main sab jaanta hun Kal Rajveer ke saath jo kuch bhi hua thaa.Mujhe uske kakhsya me le chalo. Dadi - Jo agyann Gurudev. Aur phir Dadi Gurudev ko Rajveer ke room me le jaati hain. Gutuji yanah itne saalon baad achhanak gharme woh bhi itni subah Donon Maa beti heiran rah jaate hain lekin unki dil ko ek taslli milti hai ki Aab Veer theek ho jayega.Angelina byagrata se Guruji ke pawn pad jaati hai aur Veer ko theek karne ki bhik maangti hai.Gurudev sab kuch thik kar denge ye aswashana de kar Rajveer ki taraf badhte hain.Arohi Veer ka sar ko apne god me liye ushe sahalati jaa rahi thi.Anken ro ro kar lal ho gayi thi.Gurudev Arohi ki mathe ko pyar se sahala dete hain. Gurudev - Putri roo mat.Tumhara bhai ko kuch bhi nahin hua hai woh bas gahri neend me soya hai.Ushe kuch nahin hoga.Woh to khud shaktion ka Raja hai. phir Gurudev Rajveer ki maathe par apna haath rakhte hain aur ankhen ban karke kuch mantra paath karne lagte hain dheere dheere kal raat ki sari ghatna guruji ki band ankhoon me dikhayi deta hai.Woh khud bhi heiran rah jaate hain.Veer ki maathe par jis hisse me guruji apna haath rakhe the woh chamakne lagta hai.Kuch der baad guruji apna haath hatha dete hain. Guruji Angelina ko wo sab kuch batate hain jo woh dhyan me dekhe the. Guruji - Kal raatr swapn me hamare kul devata kuch anhoni hone ka sandesh diye the.Mujhe yaad aya ki Aaj iska janm din hai.Mujhe ish awasthaa ka pahale se hi sanka thaa lekin iska prabhav iska shareer ke liye nakaratmak sabit hua.Kal raat iska shareer me chhupe hue kundalini shaktion ka jagrat hua thaa.Woh pahale iska sharir se bahar aaye aur 10 chakron me vibhakt ho kar iska shareer ko khsyamatashali(kabil) bana rahe the.Lekin inshani nashl hone ke karan iska shareer itna sakhsyam nahin hai ki woh un shaktion ko kabu kar sake.Ishiliye ye shaktian bekabu ho kar iska shareer ko nuksan pahoncha rahe the.SURYVANS ki khoon iski ragoon me bah raha hai sirf ishiliye ye shaktian iska kuch khyati nahin pahunch payenge.Iska guru hi ishe shaktion ko kabu karne ki sikhsya denge tab tak har janam din iske saath aisa ghatna ghatega.Yehi niyati hai. Angelina Gurudev ki ish tarah bolne se aur bhi ghabra gayi. Angelina - (Rote hue) Sirf mera hi beta kyun?Ushe to abb tak pata nahin uske saath kya ho raha hai , kyun ho raha hai!Ush bhagwan ne kyun kiya aisa mere bete saath , kyun itna dard de raha hai ushe? Veer ki maathe ko sahalate - Mujhe maph karde betu.Teri dard ko kam karne ke liye teri mumaa kuch bhi nahin kar paa rahi hai.Mujhe maph karde beta,mujhe maph kar de.Aur iske saath Angelina bikhar kar rone lagti hai. Gurudev Angelina ko swantana dete hain. "Beti ishme tumhari kuch kasur nahin hai.Sab bidhi ka bidhan hai.Aur aisa sochna bilkul galat hai ki sirf tumhara beta hi aise shaktion ke saath paida hua hai aise aur bhi 10 bachhe hain jinme Rajveer ke jaisa shakti hai lekin unme hamara Rajveer jaisa shaktian mahjood nahin hai.woh sab shaktion ka ek ek hi hisse hain lekin Rajveer khud me hi ek Shakti hai.Shaktion ka Raja hai ye.Tum chinta mat karo beti Tumhara beta ko kuch nahin hoga.Woh din dur nahin jab tumhara beta ish dharti ko buri shaktion se naa sirf bachayega unka samul vinas bhi karega." Sab Gurudev ki baat dhyan se sun rahe the.Gurudev ki har ek baat sab ko jhatka pe jhatka deta jaa raha tha.Arohi jo aab tak Veer ke sirhane besudh ho kar bethi thi uski chehere khusi ka leher umand jaata hai. Arohi - Mumma bhai ko hosh aa raha hai. Gurudev - To beti main chalta hun.Mera kaam pura hua. Angelina - Par Gurudev aap achanak aaye aur achanak chale jayenge Veer hosh me aa raha hai.Ushe pura hosh aane tak theher jaaiye. Ek gahri prabhavi muskan ke saath Gurudev bas itna bolte hain"Woh mujhe naa hi dekhe to achha hai".Piche mude woh wanha se nikal jaate hain.Dadi bhi unke piche piche chal deti hai. Angelina Gurudev ke dwara akhir me kahi baat soch rahi thi ki uski kaan me ek madhur si awaj padti hai jise sunne ko har maa taras jaati hai. "Mummma"
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Post by govindsonic on Nov 28, 2018 8:32:54 GMT 5.5
Sandarrrr updates bhai
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