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Post by shusam on Aug 3, 2018 14:53:28 GMT 5.5
Hello friends Mei iss site par ek dum New user hu.... Isse phele meina koi story nahi likhi hai but mei bhi apni imaginatory story aap logo ka samna rakhna cahati hu.... Ya story ek dum kalpanik hai aur iska kisi sa bhi koi sambandh nahi hai aur na hi ya kisi aur ki story sa lee gai hai..... Mei aapko vala nahi kar skta ki roj update aayega par weekly 3-4 update aayega iska bharosa dikha sakta hu aur sath hi ya wada karta hu iss story ko pura jarur krunga agar aap sab ka sath raha to..... Story par update aaj night sa aana lagega......
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Post by king01devil on Aug 3, 2018 16:07:43 GMT 5.5
welcome dear
And congrats for new story
Waiting for first update
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Post by Shubham on Aug 3, 2018 16:41:55 GMT 5.5
welcome dear
And congrats for new story
Waiting for first update Thanxs bro.... Kya tm meri thodi help kar sakta ho ya bata kar ki iss site par font site kaisa bada karta hai Aur font ka colour kaisa badal sakta hai
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Post by king01devil on Aug 3, 2018 16:47:48 GMT 5.5
welcome dear
And congrats for new story
Waiting for first update Thanxs bro.... Kya tm meri thodi help kar sakta ho ya bata kar ki iss site par font site kaisa bada karta hai Aur font ka colour kaisa badal sakta hai Ha kyu nhi Forum ke page par sabse neeche right side me "desktop" likha hua hai waha par click karo
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Post by king01devil on Aug 3, 2018 16:50:58 GMT 5.5
Ho Gaya Kya
Aap ye sabhi chije sirf desktop site par bhi use Kar sakte hai
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chirag
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Yaar joh tumhe accha laage wahi Mera status samajh lena
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Post by chirag on Aug 3, 2018 17:30:41 GMT 5.5
c0ngrats f0r enter in the w0rld of imagination and haa for story also....,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Post by Shubham on Aug 3, 2018 18:35:39 GMT 5.5
Ho Gaya Kya Aap ye sabhi chije sirf desktop site par bhi use Kar sakte hai Thanku bro once again.....
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Post by king01devil on Aug 3, 2018 18:38:49 GMT 5.5
Ho Gaya Kya Aap ye sabhi chije sirf desktop site par bhi use Kar sakte hai Thanku bro once again..... It's OK And waiting for update
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Post by Shubham on Aug 3, 2018 18:39:17 GMT 5.5
c0ngrats f0r enter in the w0rld of imagination and haa for story also....,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Thanku bro .......
Imaginary world ka safar aapka sath hi suru hoga aur umeed hai end tak sath hoga.....
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Post by shusam on Aug 3, 2018 20:08:30 GMT 5.5
update 1
Humara brahmand crore saal phele iska nirman hua, iss brahamand mei hajaro galaxy hai jinka baramei hum janta hai aur aaj bhi na jana kitni galaxy hai jinka bara mei hum aaj bhi nahi janta hai..... Earth humara ek khubsurat sa planet jisma crore tarah ki species (prajati) rahati hai..... Humara planet milky way naam ki galaxy mei aata hai, thik issi ki tarah ek galaxy aur hai jaha jiwan sambhav hai aur vaha hajaro planet hai jisma aaj bhi hmara jaisa na jana kitni tarah ki species hai ya humsa alag bhi.....
Iss dusri galaxy ka name hai small italina cloud.... iss galaxy mei ek planet hai Leharaniya, iss planet ko iss galaxy ka education hub bhi kaha ja sakta hai...... Ya ek chota sa planet hai jaha sabhi dusra planet ka log aakar apni taleem (education) ko pura karta hai.... Ya planet jitna chota hai utna hi khubsurat bhi hai aur iski khubsurti ko char chand lagata hua hai iss planet par bana duniya ka sabsa bada school..... THE SCHOOL OF MAGICAL AND WEAPONARY ART .....
Jaisa iss school ka name hai usse ya clear hai ki iss school mei alag alag tarah ka weapon aur magic sikhaya jata hai par sath hi yaha social class jaisa singing, dancing, cooking aur bhi bhut sari alag alag tarah ki education dee jati hai...... Iss school mei padhna ka liya is puri galaxy mei situated sabhi grah ka raajya (country) ka prince aur princess aata hai..... aur saath hi mei yaha unhi rajyo ka bade position ka logo ka bacha bhi padhna aata hai....(essa kaha sakta hai ki har rajya ka senapati aur mantri aur mage(magician) (jinha raja apna mandal mei jagah deta hai) ka bacha bhi padhna aata hai)......
Issi grah sa suru hoti hai humari story jaha humari kahani ka hero ya devil Shubham rahata hai.... Humara hero aapki aur meri tarah earth par hi born hua hai aur vo bhi humari tarah ek human hai koi allien nahi.... to phir essa kya hua ki humara hero uss planet par pahuch gaya .... [Ek baat mei aap sabko bata du humara planet earth par sa koi bhi vaha padhna nahi jata tha kyunki hum iska bara mei abhi tak janta hi nahi hai]..... iss baat ka javab aapko apna aap mil jayga ki hero vaha kaisa pahucha aur vaha pahuchna ka baad bhi vo uss grah par kaisa survive kar gaya ...... Kya vaha ka environment humara planet ka environment ki tarah hi hai ya alag.... Essa hajaro saval ka javab iss story mei aapko milta rahaega........
[hello friends mera phela update aapko kaafi boring laga ho to uska liya maafi, par story ko aage continue karana ka lya story mei confusion na ho jada iss vajah sa iska plot tayar kara hai.... ho skata hai suru ka kuch updates aapko ekdum upto mark na laga par jaisa jaisa story aage badegi ya kaafi interesting hoti jayegi kyonki isma aapko har tarah ka rang milega.....] Stay tunned next update in process......
aapka agar koi sujhav ho iss story ko lekar ya meri writing ko kaisa improve kar sakta hu usko lekar to plz mjhe jarur apna coments dena.....
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