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SAAJAN Nov 6, 2018 10:42:49 GMT 5.5 discoverscience, smarty, and 1 more like this

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Post by anandsngh12 on Nov 6, 2018 10:42:49 GMT 5.5

Ye Story Yaha Par Xp se aage post kar raha hu...

Previous updates PDF me post karunga...

Jab ye khabar shamshan ghat me sadhna me baithe ek aghori ke pass uske chelo ne pahuchayi to vo ek dam se khada ho gaya…..

Aghori—Divyaaaaaa……..iska matlab vo bhi…..hahaha

Ab Aage………..

Chela 1—vo koun swami…?

Aghori— uski ek amanat hai is narpati ke pass…vohi loutana hai usko….mujhe pata tha vo yaha jarur ayega…

Chela 2—vo bhi apka shisya hai kya swami…?

Narpati—nahi re….baiju…bas mere guru ne marte samay ek anokhi cheez dekar kaha tha yahi uska intazar karu…..yahi uski karma bhumi hai….use yaha aana hi hoga…..aaj mere guru ki baat sahi huyi…

Baiju—aap yaha kab se hain swami…?

Narpati—90 saal se yahi isi shamshan me dera hai mera..

Narpati phir se apne dhyan me baith gaya.....

Ham sabhi veer ke ghar pahuch gaye....bunglow shandar bana tha....akhir Brijnath neta jo tha....

Avni poore raste mujhse hi chipakne ki koshish karti rahi lekin mere pass divya ke baithe hone se mann me darr rahi thi…..divya ko chhune ka result wo dekh chuki thi

Veer—ab aage kya irada hai, raj…kaha admission lena hai

Mai—tu bata

Veer—tum dono bhi bhopal me hamare college me hi admission le lo.....hamara bunglow bhi vahi hai to rahne me koi problem hogi nahi....

Avni—ha raj bhaiya bilkul theek kah rahe hain....vaise tum kya kahti ho divya..

Divya—Jaha bhaiya admission lenge mai vahi lungi

Mai—chalo done ham dono tumhare hi college me padhenge..ok

Avni—thanks raj….uummm….aaaaaaaa

Mai—kya hua..

Avni—divya se hath touch ho gaya….vaise isko problem kya hai..

Mai—pata nahi….

Avni divya ko apne room le gayi aur mai veer se baat karta raha….aaj bhi bilkul vaisa hi hai…ekdam saf aur naram dil ka

Thodi der me Payal didi ka phone aa gaya vo apna pravchan sunati rahi….unka band hua to ruchi didi ne baat ki lekin sanjidgi se….

Dono se baat karne ke baad hamne sath me lunch kiya

Ye veer ka gaon ka bunglow hai…jiski dekhrekh naukaro ke jimme hai…pass me hi inka farm house bhi hai…. Jise sabhi jante hi honge…

Veer—arey yaar chalo aaj kahi ghumte hain…mai bhi yaha nahi ghuma aaj tak…

Avni—kyo na jungle me camping kare aaj night…

Avni (man me)—achchha idea hai jungle me mujhe raj se maza lene ka mouka bhi mil jayega…vaise bhi aaj bahut mann kar raha hai jabse raj ko dekha hai….

Divya—nahi..nahi….ham kahi jungle vungle nahi jayenge….

Abhi ham baat kar hi rahe the ki veer ke vo dost bhi aa gaye…to veer ne unko bhi puchha

Veer—kya bolte ho tum sonu…

Sonu—guru maza a jayega kasam se….hai na monu

Monu—mai to ready hu...

Anil—ye sahi nahi hoga kisi ke liye…uss jungle me bahut se khatarnak janwar rahte hain…upar se aaj amavas ki kaali raat bhi hogi..

Mohan (gaon ka dost)—anil sahi bol raha hai guru…uss jungle me jo bhi aaj tak gaya vo jinda nahi louta….lash tak nahi mili poori…

Anil—log kahte hain vaha bhoot pret ka vaas hai….

Sonu—mohan kya ye sahi hai ki uss jungle me koi purana khandahar haweli bhi hai…

Mohan—ha suna to maine bhi hai…lekin kabhi koi jata nahi jungle ke andar din me bhi…

Monu—tum dono darpok aur andh vishwasi ho…aaj ke science ke yug me bhi aisi bato par bina dekhe yakin karte ho….

Anil—to tumhi batao isi jungle me vo adbhut roshni wali ghatna do baar ho chuki hai…jiski gawah poori duniya hai…..kitne hi bade se bade scientist..tantrik aaye aur chale gaye lekin kuch pata nahi chala…tab kaha gayi thi tumhari science….

Veer—dekho tum logo se maine raay mangi thi….apas me ladne ke liyenahi kaha samjhe..

Avni—divya pls maan jao na...

Divya—nahi didi.....ham vaha nahi jayenge...

Avni—tum jisse sabse jyada pyar karti hogi tumhe uski kasam...

Ab divya phans gayi thi….avni ne aisi kasam de di ki jise todna matlab apne pyar ko ruswa karna...jo vo kabhi nahi kar sakti thi...lihaja majburi me na chahte huye bhi usko ha karna pada.....

Sabhi ki sahmati ban jane se ham sab sham 4 baje jungle me camping aur hunting ke liye nikal gaye…

Divya bilkul mujhse chipak ke chal rahi thi…na jane kyo aaj usko koi na koi anhoni hone ka darr lag raha tha…

Uska mann bahut vyakul ho raha tha aaj…rah rah kar uske mann me sapne me kahi gayi Pari ki baate yaad aa rahi thi…isiliye vo apne saajan ka hath jor se thame huye thi….

Jaise jaise jungle pass aata ja raha tha uske mann ka darr lagatar badh raha tha….

Raj ke mann me bhi bechaini ho rahi thi lekin vo ise apne mann ka vaham maankar use ignore kar raha tha…

Aaj in logo ke alawa bhi is function me dur dur se aaye logo me se kuch camping ke liye to kuch khazane ki lalach me jungle ja rahe the….

Sabhi is baat se anjaan ki aaj ki ye kaali raat unke upar koun si kayamat lekar aane wali hai…wo kal ka suraj dekh payenge bhi ya nahi….

Vahi dusri taraf………

Ruchi aaj commissioner ko apna resignation dene ke liye police station se uske office ke liye nikal hi rahi thi ki ek admi aa gaya vaha…

Ruchi—chandan tum…?

Chadan—ji madam….mujhe malum hai aap resign karne ja rahi ho….lekin meri baat sunne ke baad shayad apka irada badal jaye….

Ruchi—kyo aisa bolne wale ho tum….

Chadan—raj ko maarne ki supari rajendra ne The Bad Man ko di hai….vo kitna khatarnak hai ye mujhe nahi lagta ki apko batane ki jarurat hai….

Ruchi—uss rajendra ko to mai jinda nahi chhorungi …..iska mere resign se kya sambandh hai…?

Chandan—yahi ki TBM apna shikar karne is samay Rajgarh pahuch chuka hai…

Ye sunte hi ruchi ke hath pair kaampne lage….apne bhai ko khone ke darr se uski ankhe bahne lagi….vo achchhe se janti thi ki TBM kitna Maha Harami hai….

Usne fauran Raj ko call laga diya…Raj us samay sabhi ke sath jungle trip par nikal chuka tha…Ruchi naam screen par dekhte hi usne call utha liya…..

Raj—haa..didi…

Ruchi—betu tu kaha hai abhi….

Raj—Jungle ghumne ja raha hu....kyo kuch kaam hai didi

Ruchi—tu kahi nahi jayega....turant vapis aa...tujhe meri kasam hai betu

Raj—hello...didi...awaz nahi aa rahi...hello...hello

Ruchi (jor se)—betu tu gudiya ko leke urgent vapis aa

Raj—hello...hello...aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

(actually raj paidal chalte huye baat kar raha to uska dhyan niche nahi tha tabhi chalte huye wo ek patthar se uska pair takra gaya jisse wo chilla pada, mobile me network bhi nahi tha)

Ruchi (jor se ghabra kar)—betu...hello....hello

Ruchi ne phir se bahar nikal ke no. Dial kiya...

Lekin no response aane laga...’’this no. is currently switched off or out of coverage area, pls try after some times’…

Ruchi ne 4-5 baar try kiya lekin har baar yahi jawab mila

Ruchi (anshoo bahate huye)—nahi….mai aisa hargij nahi hone dungi….mai apne betu ko kuch nahi hone dungi.... mai aa rahi hu betu….tu ghabrana mat..

Vo rote huye commissioner ko phone karke TBM ko encounter karne ki permission mangti hai…to uski baat sunne ke baad commissioner use ijajat de deta hai…

Ruchi turant kuch police force aur kuch raj ke gun man guards ko lekar rajgarh ke liye rawana ho jati hai…

Raste me ruchi ne Payal ko message kiya jo apni practical test de rahi thi…ruchi ka message jaise hi usne khol ke padha turant apni test copy vahi phek ke bahar bhagi rote huye professor usko awaz dete rahe magar tab tak vo vaha se rajgarh ke liye nikal chuki thi…..

Narpati ke chele jo barabar Divya aur raj par nazar rakhe huye the jab jakar unke jungle trip ki baat batayi to vo ekdam se uth khade huye aur apna trishul utha liya…..

Narpati—nahi…. aisa nahi hona chahiye……. Chalo mere sath jaldi...unhe rokna hoga jungle me jane se...... nahi to aaj ki ye amavas ki kaali raat sabko nigal jayegi

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Kya hoga aaj ki raat.. ?

Kis Kis par Bhari Padegi ye Amavasya ki Kaali Raat... ?

Kya Koi Bachega is Kaali Raat se.... ?

Kya is Raat ki Kabhi Subah hogi…?

Aur Yadi hogi to uska Manzar kya hoga…?

Kya Ruchi aur Payal Lomdi jaise Tez aur chalaak dimag wale TBM ka muqabla kar Payenge…?

Ya Phir khud TBM ke Bichhaye Jaal me Phans Jayenge ?

Janne ke Liye Padhe “Saajan” next update……..

Last Edit: Nov 6, 2018 10:53:06 GMT 5.5 by anandsngh12

krsuraj159 Junior member Posts: 227 Likes: 17	SAAJAN Nov 6, 2018 13:41:46 GMT 5.5 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by krsuraj159 on Nov 6, 2018 13:41:46 GMT 5.5 Awesome update

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Post by aj1980 on Nov 6, 2018 13:57:27 GMT 5.5

शानदार अपडेट भाई
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आप को इस फोरम पर देखकर बहुत ही खुशी हुई ।

discoverscience Full member Posts: 253 Likes: 7	SAAJAN Nov 6, 2018 15:25:18 GMT 5.5 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by discoverscience on Nov 6, 2018 15:25:18 GMT 5.5 bhai lajawaab update tha. bhai pichle do update choot gaye the mujhse toh woh mil jaayenge kya ??

mirzalover Junior member Posts: 29 Likes: 0	SAAJAN Nov 6, 2018 16:36:23 GMT 5.5 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mirzalover on Nov 6, 2018 16:36:23 GMT 5.5 Boht he acha update tha

anrohit Guardians Posts: 1,904 Likes: 165	SAAJAN Nov 6, 2018 18:00:57 GMT 5.5 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by anrohit on Nov 6, 2018 18:00:57 GMT 5.5 Superb Update Bhai ....

notylover585 Junior member Posts: 216 Likes: 8	SAAJAN Nov 6, 2018 23:32:30 GMT 5.5 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by notylover585 on Nov 6, 2018 23:32:30 GMT 5.5 jabarjast

notylover585 Junior member Posts: 216 Likes: 8	SAAJAN Nov 6, 2018 23:34:32 GMT 5.5 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by notylover585 on Nov 6, 2018 23:34:32 GMT 5.5 PDF KAHA PR H

kabir Human king Posts: 3,840 Likes: 283	SAAJAN Nov 7, 2018 0:19:28 GMT 5.5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by kabir on Nov 7, 2018 0:19:28 GMT 5.5 bhai , keya e mumkin hai ki aap story ka sara update iha pe mile . kio ki meine is story ka ek bhi update para nahi hai . all the best . take care bhai ….

spinz Junior member Posts: 8 Likes: 0	SAAJAN Nov 7, 2018 2:33:34 GMT 5.5 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by spinz on Nov 7, 2018 2:33:34 GMT 5.5 Nice update par bhai last update shayed hi kesi ne parha ho veer ka rag se milne wala update ho sakte to retype kardena

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