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Post by DEVIL WANTED on Dec 6, 2018 19:20:52 GMT 5.5
DEVIL WANTEDHELLO BROTHERS,
IS Story me Sab kuch hai Jaise..
EX:- ACTION, MAGIC, ROMANCE, THRILL, SUSPANCE,...
YE STORY 3 CHAPTERS ME LIKHI JAYEGI......
  
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Post by DEVIL WANTED on Dec 6, 2018 19:30:01 GMT 5.5
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Post by kabir on Dec 6, 2018 19:33:11 GMT 5.5
Welcome bhai . we are waiting 4 update ...
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Post by DEVIL WANTED on Dec 6, 2018 19:44:42 GMT 5.5
CHAPTER:-1st
INTRODUCTION.....
Main (Hero)-- Rudra Rajpoot {Ek behud stylish handsome, 6 pack body fair color blue eyes. .Apne Mom, Dad ki jaan. .Age 18
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Vikaas Rajpoot --Hero ke DAD. { inka khud ka businese hai. Bahut hi mahant karke ye mukaam paya hai. Paise ki koyi kami Nahi Hai. city mein sabse Top mein Naam aata hai inka apne bete ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai.. ..Age 42 }
Nirmala Rajpoot-- Hero ki MOM. { She so beautiful gorguse Lady. Age 40 ki hai par lagti siraf 32 ki hai. Rudra Inki jaan hai. ..}
To Brothers Story shuru karte hai....yeh kahani hai shuru hoti hai Dilhi se.. Rudra apne kamre mein so raha tha...Aisa lag raha tha jaise vo bahut bachain hai ac mein bhi pasine se poora lathpath. .Use Sapana aata tha ki vo Ek aisi jagah bhaag raha hai jaha uske piche Ajib se dikhne wale jeev the, Jinhe Insaan toh nahi keh sakte bt Insano jaise do pairo par Bhaag rahe the.
Rudra lagtaar bhaag raha tha ki achanak Uske samane ek white roshni dikhti hai, vo us or baagta hai vaha paunch ke piche mudkar dekhta hai toh vo drinde vahi kade hai or Aage nahi aa rahe the.
Rudra jab aage dekhta hai toh uske sahmne ek bahut hi sunder rajkumari ki tarah Dikhane vali Ladaki khadi hoti hai. Rudra Us ladki ko dekhta he rahta hai,vo Usame kho sa jatahai.
VO Ladki white Roshni se chamak rahi thi. Us ladki ke maathe pe EAGLE ka taatto bana huya tha jo same Rudra ki peeth par bhi tha.
Ladki...... Rudra Is tarah ghabrayo nahi, ab samay aa chuka hai, teyar ho jayo Rakashak banane ke liye.....
Usi vakht ladki And roshni gyab ho jati hai. Rudra piche goom kar dekhta hai toh vo Drinde paas aa rahe the, Darinde Abhi Hamla karne he wale hote hai ki Rudraa Ek jordaar cheekh ke saath uth jata hai..OR Haafne lagta hai.
Use yeh sapna Bachapan se lagatar aa raha tha, Par Bachpan me kabhi, kabhi aata tha. but kuch mahino se lagatar aa raha tha. Aur kafi dara bhi raha tha.
Rudra thoda pareshaan ho jata hai. Uski cheekh sun Uski mom bhaagi aati hai Dekhati hai ki Unaka beta Passene se latpath hai. Vo Uke paas jati hai
Mom...... beta kya Phir se vahi sapana Aaya.? Rudra ha me garden hilata hai. Mom use hug kar leti hai..
Mom...... beta ghabrayo nahi ye sapana Aise he aa raha hai.
Rudra ki mom ke face par tantion saaf dekhi ja sakti thi, bt Vo show nahi hone deti...
Mom use fresh hone bhej deti hai aur khud Neeche Breakfast Ready karne chali jati hai.
Rudra bhi fresh hone chala jata hai.. Fresh ho ke vo neeche aata hai or dining table pe baithe Apne Dad ko Gud mrng wish karta hai or hug karta hai..
Dad.....kaisa hai mera sher beta.
main...acha huu dad. Aap sunaye kaise hai.
Dad...main theek hu. acha beta yeh batayo Aage ki kya palaing hai. kya karna chahte ho study, ya, london wala Busines sambalo ge. jo Abhi start kiya hai.
Main.... Dad Abhi to mene Apni study bhi complete nahi ki hai. Aur vese bhi Maine abhi kuch socha nahi hai...
Mom.... yeh Aapne subah-subah kya laga rakha hai. Abhi to vo apni study complete karega. Aur abhi se bete pe kaam ka boj mat daliye. Use Usaki college life Enjoy karne do..
Dad.... (thoda darte hue) bhai Maine kab kaha ki, Abhi kaam kare. main toh siraf pooch raha hu.
Dad ki haalat dekh me musakra raha tha....
Dad..... Musakra kyu raha hai, jab teri Shaadi hogi tab pata chalega.
Maine Muskarate hue Nasta kiya Aur Mom, Dad ko bye kahke bahar nikla.
Car mein baitha he tha ki Mera mobile baja. jab number dekha toh Mere face pe Ek smile aa gayi............
CONTINUED..........
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Post by DEVIL WANTED on Dec 6, 2018 20:00:42 GMT 5.5
UPDATE - 1
Yeh thi Meri jaan
TANU.. {Iski Age bhi 18 hai. dikhne mein bahut hot nd sexy...Jitni sweet hai usse jeyada sharmili Aur Shaant hai.}
Maine call pick kiya.....
Main--Hello JAN kaisi ho. GOOD MORNING.
Tanu-- GOOD MORNING Rudra, Main theek hu .TUM ghar se nikle ya nai.
main..Ha Tanu Ghar se nikal chuka hu, bs aa raha hu.okkk seea..
Tanu... okk jaldi aayo or phone cut ho geya main 10 minte bayad ek alishan ghar ke aage ghaadi roki.
maine tanu ko call kiya and bola bahar aa jayo main bahar khada hu
Tanu ki family bhi hamari family jitni hi rich hai. Uske dad ka businese hai.. Tanu bahar ayi. Jaise he Maine Tanu ko dekha . dekhta he reh geya punjabi salvaar suit or vo bhi black. oh my god kya Lag rahi thi, main toh jaise kho sa gaya tha. VO mere pass ayi Usne muje hilaya tab main duniya main vapis aya. .
Tanu..... Rudra kaha kho gaye.
Main..... jab aisi sunder si pari mere sahmne khadi ho toh khud socho mere kya haal hoga. Tanu blush karne lagi.
Tanu. tum bhi na. Phir usne muje hug kiya. kya batayu jab gale lagi to aisa lag raha tha ke yeh pal Yahi ruk jaye... Phir Maine Uske forhead pe kiss kiya or ham alag huye. ...
Tanu.... to bolo janu kaha le ke ja rahe ho...
Main..... tanu pehle ham movie dekhege fir aage ka baad me sochege...
Dono nikle movie dekhne maine car park ki or mall me chale gaye mall ka Manager khud Aaya mujhe recive karne. Kyuki ye Mall Tanu ke Dad ka tha. vo hame cinema ke vip room mein le ke gaya... pahle hamne movie dekhi Phir Maine apni jaan ko shoping karvayi ...shoping ke bayad Main aur Tanu ne mall ke cafe me lunch kiya ...
ham jaise he bahar aaye Maine Tanu ko bola ki tum gate par ruko main car le kar aaya. Jaise he main gate par pahuncha to dekha kuch ladke Tanu ko ched rahe the, vo Ladke Tanu ki puri body par haath laga rahe the. Main car se bahar aaya aur ja ek ladke ko piche se uski nick(gardan) pakad li.
Pta nahi mughe kya hua, gusse me mere haath uski gardan par kasate chale gaye or sath he uski Gardan(neck) se tarak karke hadi tutne ki awaaz aayi. and vo ladka neeche gir gaya. OR mar gaya.
Ek vaar to Mai bhi Shock ho gaya, ki ye sab kya hua. kyuki Maine to siraf uski gardan(neck) kasake pakdi thi.
Baki sab ladake shock the...
Ladka2..... yeh kya kiya tune, Kya Kya v vo mar gaaya. Tumhe pata hai ki yeh kaun hai, yeh yanha ke MLA- VIKRAM DAS ka beta hai. AB teri maut bahut buri hogi, tune MLA ke bete ko chot pahuchai hai. Tughe koi nahi bacha sakta hai.
Maine turant Neeche pade Ladke ki saanse check ki vo mar chuka tha.
Main-- (Ladka 2 se) Hai nahi tha, Agar tum bhi Uski tarah Uper jana chahte ho to aa jayo.
Main Aise he khada tha ki piche se ek ladke ne meri left arm pe knife se var kiya, yeh dekh k Tanu ki cheekh nikal gayi.. Main us ladke ko pakda or uski chest pe punch de mara.
yeh punch inta jabardast tha ki vo ladka ladka paas me pade gamale(flower pot) se takraya aur vahi Behosh ho gaya.. bacha Ek ladka vo darke bhaag gaya..... Tanu mere gale lag ke rone lagi. vo kafi dar gayi thi insab se. Phir hum vanha se seedhe doc. ke pass gaye bandage karvayi......
Rudra jab 11th year ka tha tab Usake Dad ne use Martial art ki tarining karvayi thi, Isiliye Rudra Bachapan se fit tha. Rudra bachapan se padhane me bahut tejj tha aur Hamesha School me top karta tha, Is liye Use kafi Log jante the.
Uske dad ne Apna sara businese Usi ke naam se rakha tha. Kyuki Jaab Rudra paida(BIRTH) hua tha tab Rudra ke Dad ne ek cchota sa business start kiya tha jise Apni mahanat se AAJ Ek bahut bada EMPIRE khada kar diya tha. Jisaka name tha R.R GROUP OF COMPNEIS. Is liye HAR Koyi jaanta tha Rudra kaun hai.
but Rudra ne kabhi yeh show off nahi kiya ki vo Rich family se belobg karta hai ya vo khaas hai.
vo bahut he simple sweet sa banda tha. Har Ek ki madad karne wala....par Usmei ek aisi kasish thi jo be ladki uske paas hoti ya uske sath time spend karti uski taraf atrackt ho jati. har ladki jo uski taraf atrackt hoti vo apne aap ko bahut hotnes feel karti uske paas rahkar.
Back to Hero....
Phir vo dono vaha se ghar nikle.. tanu ko uske ghar chod ke apne ghar chala gaya. Tanu ko samjane par vo thoda shant ho gayi thi.
Mai Car me bas usi Ghatana ko lekar soch raha tha ki Aakhir Itani takat Mere ander aayi kanha se ki vo Ladka mar gaya.... Yahi sochate hue me Ghar pahucha.......
Ghar par Rudra ke liye Ek Surprise wait kar raha tha....
Maine Car park ki aur jaise he ghar ke Ander Enter huya to...............
CONTINUED........
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Post by DEVIL WANTED on Dec 6, 2018 20:16:44 GMT 5.5
AB UPDATE Rozana Evening me 8-9 Baje ke beech aayega......
keep read and comments.............
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Post by kabir on Dec 6, 2018 20:38:31 GMT 5.5
Bahat hi baria update hai bhai . Keep continue . all the best . take care bhai ...
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Post by kabir on Dec 6, 2018 20:39:21 GMT 5.5
We will wait 4 next update …..
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Post by DEVIL WANTED on Dec 6, 2018 21:16:22 GMT 5.5
Bahat hi baria update hai bhai . Keep continue . all the best . take care bhai ...
keep read. tack care bahi |
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Post by VIRAT SINGH on Dec 6, 2018 21:36:24 GMT 5.5
mst story h bhai......
awesome...
keep update........
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