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Post by ritima on Nov 17, 2018 8:41:49 GMT 5.5
Ye story meri fev story h jisko ETERTAINER JATT ne likhi h mai bs isko yaha post kar rahi ho ager aapko achi lage to isko continue karungi
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Post by ritima on Nov 17, 2018 8:42:53 GMT 5.5
Update 1
Raghuveer aur mohit ek dusre ke bhai ki trah hain in dono ke pita business partner the unhone apne bachon ko ek hi school mein dala sath padte huye dono mein gehri dosti huyi dono mein pyar itna jyada tha k dono ne shadi v ek hi mandap pe ki shaadi k ek saal baad raghuveer k ghar Raj ka janam huya aur usse lagbhag 1-1.5 mahine k baad mohit ki patni Geeta ne Priya ko janam diya ..dono parivar bahut khus the unhe laga k unke bache v unki dosti ko ek alag mukam par le jayenge par unka yeh sochna kitna sach hoga yeh to ane wala waqt hi batayega..
Abhi bachon ne puri tarah hos v nahi sambhala tha k Raghuveer ko business k liye UK Jana pada ..WO apne pariwar ko lekar wahan chala gaya kionk mohit ka ghar uske ghar ki bagal mein tha to mohit aksar ja kar dekh ata tha vese saf safai k liye naukar rakhe huye the
Waqt beet raha tha bache bade ho gaye ..aksar mohit aur uski patni UK jakar unse milte the Geeta Raj ko bahut pyar karti thi wo use apna hi beta samjti thi or aksar apne ghar mein usi ki batein karti rehti thi..Priya ko najane kion aisa lagta k Raj usse uski mummy ko cheen lega ..wo use man hi man apna sabse bada dushman samjne lagi thi..najane age chal kar kya hoga yeh to waqt k garabh mein chipa hai..
Dusri taraf Raj kafi hasmukh aur cute sa tha wo hamesha apne chehre pe ek pyari si muskan liye gumta tha ..WO kafi mota tha aur uske dost usse motu kaha karte the..Lekin WO kabhi bura nahi manta tha...
Waqt beet ta gaya aur Raghuveer ka business v UK mein settle ho gaya tha...us sal Raj ke 8th k exam hone wale the to unhone socha k exam k baad wo wapis India laut jayenge..usne ye khabar apne pariwar ko aur Mohit ko di sab bahut khus the sabse jyada Raj khus tha kionk usne kabhi apna ghar nahi dekha tha isliye wo kafi jyada exited tha..
Par ek sakhs esa v tha jise ye nahi pata tha k wo khus ho jan dukhi aur wo thi Priya ...ek taraf wo khus thi uncle aunty a rahe hain jine wo kafi pyar karti thi dusri taraf uska sabse bada dusman Raj isliye wo thodi gusse me thi aur udaas v..fir usne socha k akhir yeh uska desh hai dekh legi us English murge ko...
Akhir kar wo din a hi gaya jiska sabko besabri she intzar tha Raj k exam khatm ho chuke the aur unke India Jane ki tyari v ho chuki thi...
Jis din unhe wahan pahunchna tha to Mohit aur Geeta behad khus the wo airport pahunch chuke the unhe receive karne k liye ...jaise hi unko airport se niklte dekha to Geeta ki ankhon me khusi k mare ansoo a gaye wo bhagti huyi raj k gale lag gayi ye dekh kar Sunidhi ki ankhen bhi bhar ayi aur Mohit aur Raghuveer k chehre pe muskan a gayi Sab ek dusre se mile aur itne mein Sunidhi boli
Sunidhi: Geeta Priya nahi ayi kahin hamse naraj to nahi.
Geeta:are kaisi baatein karti ho wo mujhse naraz ho sakti hai laikin tumse kabhi nahi.
Sunidhi: fir wo ayi kion nahi.
Geeta: are wo apne doston k sath trip par gayi huyi hai kus din bad lautegi.Maine toh use kaha tha rukne ko par usne kaha hai k ake mil legi uska program pehle se fix tha
Sunidhi: are yeh to ashi bat hai ghum fir legi.
Yeh Sab baten karte huye sab ghar pahunch gaye driver ne unsab ko utar kar gadi garage ki aur badha di Raj jese utra toh wo apne ghar ko dekhta hi reh gaya ek alishan bangla tha ..main gate ke andar guste hi ek bada sa garden tha ek taraf pool bana huya tha aur bichkar mein ek alisan do manija mahal jaisa tha...jaisa hi wo ander ghusa to ek wada sa haal ek kitchen chaar rooms attach bathrooms 1st floor v ground floor jaisa hi tha ghar dekhne k baad Raj ko uska kamra dikhaya gaya Jo uper wale floor par tha uske mummy daddy ka kamra neeche ....Raj to kafi Thak gaya tha wo jaker apne kamre mein so gaya...
Mohit aur uski patni v sham ko ane ka bol kar chale gaye...
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Post by ritima on Nov 17, 2018 8:43:36 GMT 5.5
Update 2
Raj sham k 6:30 utha fresh hone k baad wo neeche aya to dekha k uski mummy aur Geeta aunty hall mein baithi batein kar rahi thin
Raj Geeta dekh kar bahut khus hua
Raj: hlo aunty
keh kar wo dono k pair chuta hai aur Geeta k bagal mein baith jata hai
Geeta: hlo beta kaise ho tum.
Raj: bilkul theek hun ap btao kaisi ho
Geeta: main to tume dekhte hi thik ho gayi thi..aur btao UK mein hume yad karte the jan yahin ake yad aya k main v tumari koi apni hun.
Raj: nahi aunty main to apko roj yad karta tha akhir ap ho hi itni ashi aur mujhse kitna pyar karti hain aap :
Geeta: aur btao tumhara result kaisa raha 8th ka.
Raj: kafi asha raha aunty
Geeta: chalo main to yahi chahti hoon k tum khub padho aur apne papa aur uncle ki tarah ek kamjab insan bano...
Raj: aisa hi hoga kionk mere saath meri do do maaon ka ashirwad Jo hai .
Geeta: tum kitne pyare ho Raj isikarn main tume itna pyar karti hun .
Yeh kehkar Geeta ne Raj ko gale se laga liya aur uske sir pe hath phirane lagi..Raj ko bahut asha feel ho raha tha usse aisa mehsoos ho raha tha k mano kismat uspar bahut meharban ho jo usse ek nahi do do maa mili thi
Sunidhi kafi Time se unko dekh rahi thi
Sunidhi: bhai tum dono bas v karo mujhe pata hai k tum dono kafi time baad mile ho par koi meri taraf v dyan do main konsa kisi dusre planet se ayi hun..
Sunidhi ki baat pe teeno hasne lage fir Raj bola k wo apne room mein ja raha hai aur wo apne room mein chala gaya..sunidhi aur Geeta dono niche baithi hi batein karti rahin akhir itne time baad jo mili thin
Lagbhag 8 baje Raj k door par knock huya
Wo sayad ander so raha tha kus time knock karne k Raj ne uth kar darwaja khola to dekha k samne ek 20-22 saal ki sunder si gore rang aur ashi height ki mast figure wali ladki khadi thi..
Ladki: gud evening sir
Raj: gud evening ap kaun ho
Ladki: sir mera naam Rita hai aur main apne ghar mein kam karti hun.
Raj: OK apko koi kam tha kya.
Rita: ji wo apko Geeta mam ne bulaya hai..
Raj: OK ap unko kehna k main thoda fresh ho kar aya
Rita: OK sir
Itna keh kar wo ladki niche chali gayi aur Geeta ko raj ka message de diya ...
15-20 minute baad raj fresh ho kar aya usne normal se t shirt aur shorts pehn rakhe the
Usne dekha k aunty hall mein baithi hain wo unke pass gaya aur Usne geeta k pair chue aur bade pyar k sath Geeta se use bulane ka karn pucha
Raj: aunty apne kion takleef ki koi kam tha to phone kar deti main a jata vese v main apke ghar ane hi wala tha
Geeta: are nahi beta mere ko koi kam nahi hai tujhse main tujhe apne sath ghar lene ayi thi taki tum apna dusra ghar dekh sako...aur han aj k bad kabhi apka ghar kaha to mujhse baat mat karna wo bhi tumhara hi ghar hai..
Raj: sorry aunty aj bad yeh galti nahi hogi
Itna keh kar usne apne kan pakad liye to Geeta uski masoomiyat dekh kar hanse bina na reh saki
Geeta: OK ab chalen aur han apni mummy ko bata do k tum aj rat ka khana wahin kha kar aoge main aj tumhare liye apne hathon se khana bna kar khilaungi
Raj OK keh kar apni mummy k room mein chala gaya uski mummy Naha kar ayi thi aur apne Baal sambar rahi thin
Raj: mummy
Sunidhi ne door ki taraf dekha to raj khada tha
Sunidhi: kya hua beta wahan kion khade ho ander a jao
Raj: nahi mom main to apko btane aya tha k main aunty k sath ja raha hun aur dinner karke lautunga
Sunidhi: OK beta jao phir aunty wait kar rahi hongi
Itna sun kar raj bahar aya aur Geeta ke sath uske ghar ko chal diya....
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Post by ritima on Nov 17, 2018 8:44:08 GMT 5.5
Update 3
Raj aur Geeta wahan se nikal kar Geeta k ghar ki taraf chal diye..kionk dono ghar sath me hi the to dono jaldi hi wahan pahunch gaye...
Jese hi raj wahan pahuncha to usne Charon taraf nazar ghuma kar dekha to wo ghar v usse apne ghar jaisa hi laga to usne Geeta se is baare mein jan Lena chaha..
Raj: aunty dono ghar toh ek jaise hi hain..aisa kion.
Geeta: beta tume pta hai na k tumare papa aur uncle aik dusre k bhai jaise hain to unhone ne aik jese hi ghar banwaye hain...
Raj: ohh yeh kitni achi baat hai...
Aise hi batein karte huye wo dono ander chale gaye aur hall mein baith kar batein karne lage ...
Itne mein Geeta boli k mainkhana banati hu tum yahin baith kar TV dekhlo...Raj TV dekhne laga aur Geeta khana banane chali gai...abhi thodi der hi huyi thi k Mohit ghar a gaya...wo Raj ko dekhte hi khus ho gaya
Mohit: are Raj beta kaise ho
Raj ne Mohit k paon chue aur ashirwad liya
Raj: main thik hun uncle aap btao kaise ho
Mohit: main to ek dum badhiya hun aur sunao kaya chal raha hai:
Raj: kush nahi uncle aunty khana bana rahi hain aur main TV dekh raha tha...
Mohit : isliye main v sochun k itni ashi khusbu kahan se a rahi ab pta chala k yeh to madam apne bete par pyar luta rahi hain.... bhai hamen toh kabhi naseeb hi nahi hota inke hath ka khana...kabhi hamara bhi khyal kar liya karo...
Mohit ki baat sun kar Geeta kitchen se hi boli...
Geeta: are mera beta itne salon baad aya hai....uske liye khana to bnaungi hi....ap ka kya hai aap to uske liye koi gift v nahi kharid sakte....
Mohit: are itna gussa kion kar rahi ho....main to majak kar raha tha aur ye akela tumhara hi beta nahi hai mera v hai isliye Maine iske liye gift liya hai ...
Itna bol kar usne nauker ko awaj dekar ander se kus lane ko kaha thodi der baad nauker ander se koi chij lekar aya jise ek kapde k ander chipaya gaya tha usne wo chij mohit ko de di....
Raj kafi time se ye sab dekh raha tha...par jab usne Mohit k hath mein wo laal bag dekha to wo kafi soch mein pad gaya k ye inti badi chij kaya hai...uska romanch badta ja raha..jese jese Mohit uske karib a raha tha wo aur romanchit hota ja raha tha ...dhire dhire wo uske karib pahunch gaya aur Mohit ne wo chij Raj ki taraf badha di jaise hi raj ne us chij ko pakad kar uska kapda uthaya to wo itna khus ho gaya k pucho mat wo khusi k mare nachne laga ...usme aik guiter thi jo ek kit k ander band thi wo usse sofe par rakh kar bhag kar Mohit k gale se lag gaya aur jor jor se thanks uncle thanks uncle kehne laga....Mohit v kafi khus hogaya kionk jab ap kisi apne k liye koi gift late ho aur wo usse itna jyada khusi de to aap ka dil garden garden ho jata hai ...
Raj ki itni excitement dekh kar Geeta v kitchen se bahar a gayi wo usko kush dekh kar bohut khus aur hairan v thi k akhir Mohit ne usse aisa kya de diya jo wo itna jyada excited ho gaya...
Raj kafi time se Mohit k gale lag k uchal raha tha k itne mein Geeta ki awaj ayi...
Geeta: are Raj beta tum to sirf apne uncle ko hi pyar karte ho mujhe nahi karte akhir bola to mene hi tha inse k mere bete k liye kus le ayen
Uski baat sun kar Raj Mohit se alag ho kar Geeta ki taraf dauda aur uske gale lag gaya thodi der baad jab wo usse alag hua to Geeta boli: are raj beta akhir hai kya mujhe v to dikhao...
Itna sun kar Raj guitar ko us kit se nikal kar Geeta k pass le aya...wo guitar sach mein bohut khubsurat lag rahi thi...usse dekh kar Geeta boli: are wah yeh to guitar hai kitni jyada khubsurat hai...tume bajani ati hai kya Raj...
Raj: nahi aunty par seekhna chahta hun socha tha k 8th k exam k baad sikhunga par jahan ane k baad socha thoda time aur ruk jaun...thanks uncle aunty ap logon ne mujhe ab tak ka best gift diya hai....I love you...
Mohit: are Raj beta aisi baat nahi karte hum v toh tumhare maa baap jaise hain....
Raj: ok uncle par apko kaise pata chala k mujhe guitar chahiye..
Mohit: Are aj main aur tere papa baat kar rahe the to us ne bola k use tumhare liye ek guitar khareedani hai tume music se bahut pyar hai...jab mujhe yeh pata chala toh mene use
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Post by ritima on Nov 17, 2018 8:44:36 GMT 5.5
Update 4
Raj Mohit k ghar se nikal kar apne ghar ki taraf jane laga wo raste mein soch raha tha k uncle aunty usko kitna pyar karte hain...uska kitna khyal rakhte hain...yeh sab sochte hue wo apne ghar a gaya...ander uski mummy usi ka intzar kar rahi thi...wo Raj ko dekhte hi boli
Sunidhi: agaya beta
Raj: han mummy aap abhi tak soye nahi..
Sunidhi: mujhe kaise neend ati apne bache ko dekhe bina...
Raj: are mummy aap meri fikar mat kiya karo ab main bada ho gaya hun..
Sunidhi: mujhe to pata hi nahi tha k mera RAJU bada ho gaya hai...
Raj: aur nahi to kya ab main 9th mein ho gaya hun..
Sunidhi: are han sach beta tumhare papa ne tumhara admission krwa diya hai Priya k school mein Tum munday ko join kar Lena..
Raj: sach mummy I love you ...apko pata hai main bahut excited hun main apne naye school mein jaunga naye naye friend bnaunga..
Sunidhi: han beta jaroor aur vese v Priya hai na tumhare sath mujhe pata hai wo tume koi problem nahi hone degi bahut pyari bachi hai ...
Raj: mummy Priya sach mein meri dost banegi kya?
Sunidhi: are kion nahi banegi akhir tum dono k daddy v toh friend Love water bhai hai na
Raj: aisa jaroori to nahi na k agar hamare daddy dost hai to hum v ban jayenge..
Sunidhi: beta isme itni preshan hone wali kya baat hai..mujhe Priya par pura bharosa hai...wo tumhara sath jaroor degi...
Raj: kya wo sachme itni achi hai..
Sunidhi: han baba ab jao aur so jao kitni rat ho gai hai...
Raj: ji mummy good night
Sunidhi: are han sach beta yeh tum guitar kahan se laye( sunidhi poochna to pehle hi chahti thi par raj ne ate hi use baton mein uljha liya)
Raj ne use puri baat bata di Sunidhi apne bete k prati Mohit aur Geeta ka pyar dekh kar bahut khus thi..
Sunidhi: ok beta ab so jao good night beta and sweet dreams.
Itna bol kar sunidhi ne raj ko gale lgaya or dono apne apne room ki taraf chal diye...
Raj ne apne kamre mein pahunch kar darwaja band kiya aur bathroom mein ja kar shower le ke bahar aya usne ek loose sa kurta pajama uthaya aur pehan kar bistar par lait gaya...dopehar ko kafi sone k karn use neend to nahi a rahi thi is liye wo aj pure din ki ghatnaon k bare mein soch raha tha...use kafi khusi thi k sab use kitna pyar karte hain...uski kitni dekhwal karte hain...itne mein use apni guitar ki yaad a gayi
Raj bed se utha aur usne apni guitar uthai usne guitar ko uske kit se nikala aur dhyan se dekhne laga use laga k uski guitar sach mein bohut pyari hai..usne socha kion na ek baad Baja k dekhun..itna soch kar wo guitar bjane laga ya yeh kahiye k uski maa Behan eik karne laga kionk use ata jata to kuch tha nahi to bas aise hi sir khpane k baad usne guitar ko wapis apni jagah rakh diya..aur fir se apne bed par lait gaya
Par neend ka abhi bhi koi pata thikana nahi tha...to wo apne ane wale dino k bare mein sochne laga...wo khus v tha aur nervous v...uski soch baar baar bus ek hi jagah par ake atak jati thi..Priya...
Wo soch raha tha k kya mummy ki bat sach hai...kya Priya meri dost banegi...
kya wo mera sath degi is nayi jagah mein...
Par wo bar bar apne bicharon ko jhatk deta aur kus aur sochne lgta ....par wo kar v kya Sakta tha sirf sochne k ilawa kionk j swaal sirf Priya se Milne k baad hi khatam hote..
Par aj tak wo Priya se mila nahi tha ya to usne sirf uske bare mein apne parents se suna tha ya fir uski kus pics dekhi thi....
Par use apni mummy ke Priya k prati bichar or uski pics mein uska cute sa chehra yad karne par Priya use ek behad achi ladki lag rahi thi ...use kuch kuch viswash jaroor ho gaya tha k Priya achi ladki hogi...
Khair usne apne man me se Priya k bicharon ko nikal diya ...
Aur baki ki batein sochne laga... Jaise uske classmates kaise honge uske teachers jyada strict to nahi honge ..
Aur uska naya school kaisa hoga kya usse koi dosti karna pasand karega ya nahi...aisi kai batein sochte hue akhir kar Raj neend k agosh mein kho gaya...
Ab ane wale dino mein kya hoga j to sirf waqt hi btayega ...khair ab yeh kahani dhire dhire Patri par a jayegi to plz dosto mera sath dete rehna ap logon k idea
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Post by kabir on Nov 17, 2018 17:58:40 GMT 5.5
Welcome …...
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Post by kabir on Nov 17, 2018 18:04:19 GMT 5.5
Wonderful update hai . sare update bahat hi baria hai . Keep Posting . we r Always with u . all the best . take care …..
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Post by arjun7271038711 on Nov 17, 2018 20:28:59 GMT 5.5
awesome update
amazing story
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Post by arjun7271038711 on Nov 17, 2018 20:29:34 GMT 5.5
welcome bhai
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Post by kabir on Nov 18, 2018 0:17:16 GMT 5.5
agla update ka intezar rahega …..
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