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Post by ritima on Nov 21, 2018 23:20:40 GMT 5.5
Ye ek or story ETERTAINER JATT ke h Jo mai yaha repost kar rahi ho.
Ye story mujhe bhut pasnd hai. Pls ager achi lage to like kare or rating bhi de
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Post by ritima on Nov 21, 2018 23:21:45 GMT 5.5
Ye story love or hate ke h Jo bhut he entertaining h so enjoy it.
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Post by ritima on Nov 21, 2018 23:23:07 GMT 5.5
And to create poll pls tell me in detail
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Post by ritima on Nov 21, 2018 23:23:58 GMT 5.5
Here is now first 2 update back to back
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Post by ritima on Nov 21, 2018 23:24:10 GMT 5.5
Update 1
Sam: hlo aunty kaisi hain ap…
Seema: thik hun beta tu bata…
Sam: ek dum badiya….aunty aj main India a raha hun…
Seema: beta vaise Toh tera hi ghar hai mujhe koi problem nahi par tu janta hai jab use pata chalega toh wo kya react karegi….wo tumhe bura bhala bolegi main yeh bardast nahi kar paungi…
Sam: are aunty hum toh thehre “BESHARAM”….hamein kya farak padta hai…
Seema: tu kabhi nahi sudhrega na…
Sam: aunty sudhrna kon chahta hai…main toh pakka besharam banana chahta hun par apki beti kabhi mauka toh de….
Seema: nalayak kahin ka…tu kabhi bada nahi hoga kya…
Sam: aunty hounga par agle janm mein ok bye aunty ab main phone rakhta hun….
Sam ne phone rakh diya aur apna suitcase utha kar apne kamre se bahar chal pada….hall mein uske mom dad uska wait kar rahe the…
Sam: oh toh janta hamare wait mein khadi hai…
Rajeev(Sam ke papa): khote Sara din bakwas karta rehta hai aur koi kaam nahi kya tujhe…
Simran(Sam ki mom): apko bhi mere bache ko dantne ke ilawa koi kaam nahi hai…
Sam: mom ap dad ko danto mat bechare ro padenge…
Rajeev: beta sochle baap hun tera jab mera din ayega toh gin gin kar badle lunga…
Sam: dad aisa din bhagwan ke calendar mein nahi hoga....
Simran: chalo chodo ab tum dono Sam tumhe lait ho jayega…jaldi karo tumhari flight ka time ho raha hai…
Fir teeno airport ki taraf chal padte hain…wahan pahunch kar teeno ander enter hote hain aur jab Sam ko ander Jana tha toh wo apne mom dad se bye bolta hai…
Sam: bye mom…
Simran: bye beta aur apna dhyan rakhna aur pahunchte hi call karna…
Sam: bye dad….apko mujhse ab chutkara mil gaya kam se jab tak main wapis nahi ata…
Rajeev: beta dhyan rakhna apna….aur ek baat sun le agar tu uske bina lauta toh Teri tangein tod kar hath mein de dunga....
Sam: yes sir…
Fir Sam apne mom dad se gale mila aur ander Jane laga….
Rajeev(unchi awaj mein): aur sun mujhse roj video chat karna….tere bina koi ladne ko nahi rahega…
Simran( halke se marte huye): kya ap bhi Sara din bache bane rehte ho….
Yeh sab dekh kar Sam muskura diya aur un logon ko fir se bye karke ander chala gaya…
Airport ki formalities karke apni flight mein baith gaya aur plane ne apni manjil ki taraf apni udaan bhardi…matlab india ki taraf….
Toh dosto ap logon ko Sam aur uski family ka into. De dun…
Sabse pehle Dad…
Mr. Rajeev khurana: yeh ek kamyab business man hain aur aj kal Australia mein rehte hain…aj kal yeh apne bete ke sath milkar business sambhal rahe hain….inki age 52 saal hai par yeh dekhne mein bilkul fit hain…aur nature se bhi bilkul jindadil hain…yeh Sam se boht pyar karte hain…par dono baap beta kam dost jyada hain is liye Sara din jhagdte rehte hain…
Mrs. Simran khurana: Sam ki mom....inki age 50 saal hai…yeh kafi shant nature ki hain…yeh house wife hain vaise toh yeh ghar sambhalti hain par ghar se jyada unka time Sam aur Rajeev ko sambhalne mein nikal jata hai…yeh apne pariwar se boht pyar karti hain…
Mr. Sameer khurana: inko sabhi Sam bulate hain…age 23 years height 6 feet rang gora….shuru se gym ka craze hai toh physics achi khasi hai…college mein inhe apne six pack abs dikhane ka bada shounk tha…ek dum bindas banda....par apni responsibilities ache se janta hai isi liye graduation ke baad papa ke business mein hath batata hai…apne papa se Sara din majak karta hai par unki izzat bhi boht karta hai…apni mom se sabse jyada pyar karta hai…
Khair dosto jyada bore nahi karunga toh mudde par ate hain…k aj yeh janab India chale hain apni ek galti ko sudharne…thoda badbola hai toh galtian karta rehta hai…par dil ka acha hai…isi liye sab ise pyar karte hain…friend circle bhi kafi bada tha par college chodne ke baad sab Putti gaya….
Khair Sam isi soch mein khoya huya tha k India mein uske sath kya hone wala hai use is baat ka pakka yakeen tha k uski boht beizzti hone wali hai…par use besharam ban kar sab sehna hoga…sari batein sehni hongi…aj wo apne ghar ke aiso aram chod kar….. apne sare kaam chod kar India ja raha tha…kionk use apni ek galti sudharni thi…par han yeh baat alag thi k wo ismein akela nahi tha uska sath dene wale bhi hain jinke bare mein apko age pata chalega…agar India mein use insult sehni thi toh wahan use izzat bhi milni thi….agar use berukhi sehni thi toh pyar bhi milna tha…
Toh Sam apne raste nikal chuka tha…use kus pata nahi tha k manjil kitni dur hai…. milegi bhi yah nahi…par usne apna sab kus dao pe lagane ki soch rakhi thi…use kus farak nahi padta tha k koi muskil hai yah nahi use toh sirf apni manjil dikh rahi thi…
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Post by ritima on Nov 21, 2018 23:25:08 GMT 5.5
Update 2
Sam apne raste nikal chuka tha…use kus pata nahi tha k manjil kitni dur hai…. milegi bhi yah nahi…par usne apna sab kus dao pe lagane ki soch rakhi thi…use kus farak nahi padta tha k koi muskil hai yah nahi use toh sirf apni manjil dikh rahi thi…
Ab age….
Sam sham tak India pahunch gaya…airport par utarne ke baad usne taxi li aur nikal pada apni manjil ki aur….
Taxi wala: sir kahan Jana hai…
Sam: Patel villa…
Taxi wala: ok sir…
Fir taxi wale ne gadi us taraf bhaga di aur jaldi hi Sam ko uski manjil tak pahuncha diya…Sam ne use kiraya diya aur apna saman utha k ek khubsurat ghar ki taraf badh gaya…ghar kisi bangle ki tarah tha…bohut hi khubsurat Charon taraf garden aur beech mein ek boht hi khubsurat ghar…Raj main gate par gaya…
Watchman: bhai kisse milna hai…
Sam: are bhai kya baat kar rahe ho mera apna ghar hai…jab chahun a jaun…
Watchman: are sir aise kaise a jaoge….mujhe salary machar Marne ki nahi milti…seedhe seedha naam batao…
Sam: OK bhai Sameer Khurana naam hai…
Watchman: kya ap hi Sam ho…
Sam: oye han Bhai…
Watchman: sorry sir badi mam ne apke bare mein bataya tha k ap ane wale ho…
Sam: toh ab jaun bhai…
Watchman: ji sure Sir…
Watchman ne gate khol diya aur Sam ander chala gaya…ghar ke door par pahunch kar usne door bell bajayi…thodi der baad darwaja khula toh samne ek lady khadi thi…wo Sam ko dekh ke boht khus ho gayi…Sam ne uske pair chuye aur us lady ne Sam ko apne gale se laga liya…
Sam: kaisi hain aunty ap…
Dosto yeh lady wahi thi jiske sath Sam ne phone par baat ki thi…Mrs. Seema Patel…
Seema: theek hun beta tu bata kaisa hai…aur ghar par sab kaisa hai…
Sam: sab ek dum badiya hai…pehle ander toh bulao k sari batein bahar hi karogi ap…pehle apke watchman ne nahi ghusne diya aur ab ap yahin roke khadi ho…
Seema: nahi abhi nahi yahin ruko main ati hun…
Sam kus puchta isse pehle Seema ander gayi aur ek thali utha kar le ayi…arti ke liye….fir Seema ne Sam ki aarti utari aur teeka lagaya…
Seema: ab ander a jao…
Sam: aunty is sab ki kya jarurat hai main konsa jung jitke aya hun…
Seema: Maine pure EK SAAL baad dekha hai tumhe…is ek saal mein kitna kus badal gaya…
Sam: aunty sab kus meri wajah se huya hai…meri hi galti hai…
Seema: nahi beta tumhari koi galti nahi hai…jaisa honi ko manjur hota hai wahi hota hai…
Mahol ko bhari hota dekh Sam ne baat badal di…
Sam: are aunty wo dono aflatoon kahan gaye…
Seema: kon Sahil aur Riya…wo dono toh tuition gaye hain…
Sam: acha aur bhi koi nahi dikh raha…
Seema: mujhe pata hai tum kise dhundh rahe ho…par wo abhi office mein hai…
Sam: oh..
Seema: beta pehle uske papa aur fir tu jab se hamein chod kar gaye ho…wo bas office ke kamo mein hi lagi rehti hai…hasna khelna toh Jaise bhul hi gayi hai meri bachi…
Sam: aunty why fear when Sam is here…ap fikar mat karo main sab thik kar dunga…
Seema: beta mujhe tum par pura bharosa hai...chalo ab tum khana kha lo…subah se bhukha hoga…
Sam: nahi aunty Sahil aur Riya ko ane do in logon ke sath mil kar hi dinner karenge…
Seema: OK…abhi main tumhe Coffee la deti hun…
Sam: OK aunty…
Fir Sam ne coffee pi uska saman uske kamre mein rakhwa diya gaya aur usko uska kamra dikha diya…wo apne kamre mein chala jata hai...wo apni mom ko phone karta hai…
Sam: hlo mom kaisi hain ap…
Simran: thik hun beta..thik thak pahunch gaya…
Sam: han mom…dad kaise hain…
Simran: thik hain…tere bina murjhaye se fir rahe hain…par unhe khusi hai k tu India gaya hai…par usko mana Lena…
Sam: ji mom…
Fir aise hi thodi der batein karne ke baad phone kaat diya aur Sam aram karne laga…
Karib sham ke 7 baje uske kamre ka gate khula aur do bache bhag kar aye…aur Sam ko uske bed par ki daboch liya…aur use Marne lage…yeh dono Riya aur Sahil the…Seema ke chote beta aur beti dono Judwa the aur 8th class mein padhte the…
Sam: are chodo mujhe tum dono…bache ki jaan loge kya….
Sahil: bhaiya jaan nahi lenge par pitayi boht karenge…
Sam: par Maine kiya kya hai kion maar rahe ho tum dono…
Riya: wahi toh apne pichle ek saal se kus nahi kiya na toh hamein yaad kiya na hi hamse Milne aye…aur na hi hamari fikar ki…
Sam( kaan pakdte huye): are maaf kardo tum dono mujhe chod do…age se aisa nahi hoga…
Un dono ne Sam ko chod diya aur uske sath bed par chadh kar baith gaye…
Riya: bhaiya ab hum apko jane hi nahi denge…
Sahil: han hum ap par najar rakhenge kahin fir se hamein chod kar na bhag jao…
Sam: main ab tum sab ko chod kar nahi Jane wala…aur han main tum sab ke liye gift laya hun…
Riya( khusi se): kya laye ho…
Sam: subah dunga…
Sahil: yeh toh cheating hai…
Sam: nahi yeh cheating nahi surprise hai…
Wo teeno aise hi masti karte rahe…lagbhag 9 baje Seema unke paas ayi…
Seema: toh tum logon ka ho gaya…ab khana kha lo…
Fir teeno hall mein a gaye… Sam ka room ground floor par hi tha…fir sabhi dining table par baith gaye…
Riya: mom di nahi ayi abhi tak…
Seema: beta wo aj late ayegi tum log dinner karke so jao…
Sahil: main bhaiya ke sath sounga…
Seema: kal ko so Jana aj wo thaka huya hai…
Sahil: nahi mom Maine bol diya na k main bhaiya ke sath sounga..
Seema: beta ache bache jidd nahi karte…
Sahil: mom plzzz..
Sam: are aunty sone dijiye na…
Seema: chalo thik hai…par pehle dinner toh kar lo…
Fir sabhi dinner karne lage…dinner khatam hone ke baad Sam apne room ki taraf chal pada sath mein Sahil bhi chala gaya…un dono ne Raat mein boht batein ki…Fir Sahil so gaya aur Sam aise apne laptop par apne business se related data dekhne laga…thodi der baad wo bhi so gaya…
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Post by kabir on Nov 21, 2018 23:42:22 GMT 5.5
Congrats and welcome for one more story ...
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Post by kabir on Nov 21, 2018 23:45:09 GMT 5.5
Bahat hi baria update hai . Keep continue . ek request hai , dono story main regular update dene ki kosish karna ...
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Post by kabir on Nov 21, 2018 23:46:49 GMT 5.5
Keep Posting . we r Always with u . all the best . take care bhai ...
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Post by kabir on Nov 21, 2018 23:47:54 GMT 5.5
We will wait for next update …..
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