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Post by DEVIL WANTED on Dec 13, 2018 20:14:27 GMT 5.5
dosto update 6 hajir h ........
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Post by DEVIL WANTED on Dec 13, 2018 20:15:01 GMT 5.5
keep read & comments......
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Post by anrohit on Dec 16, 2018 10:20:10 GMT 5.5
Bhut Hi Jabardast Story Hai .... Dobara Se Padhke Maja Aa Gya .... Lekin Isme Kuch Changes Karna .... Tab Hi Sabko Pasand Aayega ....
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Post by DEVIL WANTED on Dec 18, 2018 9:22:04 GMT 5.5
Bhut Hi Jabardast Story Hai .... Dobara Se Padhke Maja Aa Gya .... Lekin Isme Kuch Changes Karna .... Tab Hi Sabko Pasand Aayega .... THANK U DOST ...
ISME KUCH CHANGES JAROOR KARUNGA.......
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Post by DEVIL WANTED on Dec 18, 2018 10:02:51 GMT 5.5
UPDATE 7
AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI AADITYA AUR PEDDY GURUJI KI DE HUI ANGHUTI RUDRA KO GIFT KAR DETE H AUR KABHI BHI NA UTARNE KI KASAM DETE H..........
AB AAGE>>>..............
Rudra...... Jaan kya hai Ismain...
Rudra jab gift kholta hai toh Us me se Ek bahut he khoobsurat breslet Nikalta hai. Rudra use Pahan leta hai.
Rudra....... Thnx my jaan. luv u so much.
Aur Rudra Tanu ko hug kar leta hai.
Tanu..... luv u too my babu, plzzz babu kabhi Mujse door mat hona, ji nai Paugi tumhare bina..
or uski Aakhon se moti(AASHU) gir jate hai.. Rudra use saaf karta hai or uski lip pe halki se kiss kar deta hai... Rudra ke Aise kiss karne se Tanu sharma jati hai...
Mom, Dad unki taraf hi Aa rahe the.........
Dad..... beta chalo cake cut karo..
Phir Rudra ne cake cut kiya sabhi HAPPY BIRTHDAY song gane lage..
Cake ki Pahali bite Rudra ne Apne Mom, Dad ko khilayi fir apne frnds ko.. Aise sare vari vari rudra ko cake khila rahe the..Rina ne toh cake Rudra ke face pe chipka diya..sab hasne lage.
Mom....betu yeh meri taraf se ek Chota sa gift...
Mom car ki chaabi Rudra ko deti hai .
Main...... Mom thnk u so much, car Kaha hai.
Mom Rudra ko samne dekhne ko kahti hai Jab sab samane dekhte hai toh sab ki Aakhen badi ho jati hai.. And sab ek sath....
OH MY GOD. duniya ki top ten me yeh car Aati hai. (Lamborghini Veneno) & YE bahut Expensive hai...
Rudra And Rudra ke sare Frnds khush ho jate hai......Rudra Mom ke paas jata hai. or Uhne hug karke thnx bolta hai..
Mai...... Mom itni mehngi car buy karne ki kya jaroorat thi. Aap log mere pass ho Muje or kuch nai chahiye...
Mom...... kyu Nahi betu, hum to tumhare sath hamesha rahege or Rahi baat car ki to, Main Is se bhi mehngi car tere samane khadi kardu.. Muje Tujh se badkar kuch Nahi hai samja....
Mom Rudra ke forhead pe kiss karti hai.. Aise he party chalti rehti hai. sab Music pe dance karte rahte hai..
"GIEDE PRIME" PLANET.........
GURU JI...... AAJ Rudra ko thoda to Pata chal chuka hai ki vo kya hai. Aur Aaj Usne Pahali Baar ****** Ka Chahara dekha. Ab dekhna yeh hai Ki vo kaise Apni shakti hasil karta hai kyuki Rudra ke upper jitni musibat Aayegi Utana he Use Apni power ke bare me Pata chalega..
Aadmi....... Guruji Aise me to Rudra Abhi trainned Nahi hai.. vo Akela kya kar sakta hai.. Yaha tak Muje lagta hai hume Aaditya or Paddy ko trainning karana chahiye. Taki vo Rudra ki help kar sake..
Guruji...... Theek hai Unhe bulayo or shuru karo training.....
EARTH PAR........
IN HOME.......
Sabhi enjoy kar rahe the..
Main....... Tanu chalo New car se long drive Par chalte hai.
Tanu ha kar deti hai. Phir dono nikalte hai long drive pe....
Rudra..... Jaan Aaj bahut hot lag rahi ho.. itna saj kar kyu Mere pe bijliya girati ho..
Tanuu...... bas karo Rudra tumhe toh bahana chahiye, jab bhi tumhare sath hoti hu to Muje kuch kuch hone lag jata hai....
Main...... hahaha kya kuch-kuch hota hai.. Accha Jaan Ek kiss do na..
Rudra Tanu ke kareeb hota hai or lips Aage karta hai.. Tanu ka dil bahut joro se dharak raha tha. vo toh kiss ke bare me he soch kar Pasine se bheeg gayi thi.. Aise he dono ke lips mil jate hai Aapas me, Tanu machalne lagti hai Rudra staring shod ke Tanu ke gale me hath daaal ke smooch karne lagta hai inki kiss bahut wild ho chuki thi dono ek doosre ke Nashe me kho Rahe the.
Rudra yeh bhi bool gaya tha ki wo drive kar raha hai.. Aise he kiss karte karte Rudra ka hath, tanu ke ***** par Rakh deta hai or halka sa daba deta hai.
Tanu ki siski aaaahhhh nikal jati hai, Dono ko koyi hosh nai tha, Car ko toh Rudra ki Anguthi he cantrol kar Rahi thi, jab saas lene me Problem hoti hai tab kiss todte hai. Ek horn ki Awaazz ke sath inko hosh Aata hai or Rudra ke Hath vapis staring par Aa jate hai.. Tanu buri tarah se sharma rahi thi....
Main..... I LOVE U jaan Mera birthday Special banane ke liye..
Tanu....... I LOVE U so much.. tumhare liye kuch bhi babu..
Phir Donu ice-cream Parlor pe Rukte hai, har koyi car ko dekh Raha tha....Ladkiya to Pagal ho gayi thi.
Girl1....... yr He so hot.. Also so rich... Kaash yeh mera Boyfrnd hota..
Girl2...... Pagal, tumhe pata hai. Yeh kaun hai.. Yeh Rudra rajpoot hai.. 12TH State Topper.
Rudra or Tanu ice cream khate hai or vapis ghar ko chalte hai... thodi der me ghar Aa jate hain....
Dono frnds se milte hai....
CONTINUED............
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Post by DEVIL WANTED on Dec 18, 2018 10:04:32 GMT 5.5
update 7 hajir h..
keep read and comments.
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Post by anrohit on Dec 18, 2018 13:30:37 GMT 5.5
Awesome Update ....
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Post by DEVIL WANTED on Dec 28, 2018 14:17:06 GMT 5.5
THANK U ANROHIT BROTHER................
KEEP READ & COMMENTS....
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Post by anrohit on Dec 28, 2018 14:54:03 GMT 5.5
Waitingggg For Next Update Bhai .....
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Post by DEVIL WANTED on Dec 28, 2018 14:55:35 GMT 5.5
Update 8
AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI RUDRA AUR TANU APNI BRITHDAY GIFT ME MILI CAR SE LONG DRIVE PAR JATE HAI, AUR GHAR VAPAS AA KAR SAB DOSTO SE MILETE HAI.
AB AAGE>>>........
Rina....…Hello love birds, Yeh kya Tanu tera face itna Red kyu hai. Oh teri, Matlab Tum dono Romance, Romance khel kar Aa Rahe ho.
Rina ki baat par Tanu blush karne lagi. baki sab hasne lage
Paddy........ Toh guys kal ka kya program hai. Kaise jana hai or kis pe jana hai.
Main........ look guys ham sab tracking karege Himalaya ke jungal me. Main Pahle keh deta hu, jisko dar lagta hai vo Nahi jayega..
Aaditya........bhai koyi Problem nai, sab chalege... vaise bhi tere jaisa jab sher sath ho to kya problem ho sakti hai.
Main......... Toh theek hai guys ham kal morning me niklege, Meri Pahale wali car se he jayege... Apna Apna smaan packing karlo….. Main sabko pick karluga..
Aise he sare bye bol ke chale gaye…
Maine socha di ko bhi invite karu taur ke layi..
Tanu ko Main chhodne gaya. Raaste me Tanu koyi baat Nahi kar rahi thi .
Main....... kya huya baby bol kyu Nahi rahi. Plz kuch to bolo..
Tanu........ babu tumse aur door Nahi reh sakti. kal jana hai sath me or Isi ko soch kar pagal ho rahi hu ke yeh raat kaise niklegi. Ek pal bhi chain Nahi tumhare bina.. Maine pahle bhi kaha tha jab bhi tum mere Pass hote ho toh Ek alag c bechaini hoti rehti hai... Kuch kuch hone lagta hai.
Maine ghadi side lagayi.
Tanu…. plzzz Rudra Ab Aur Nahi plzzz Muje Apna bana lo. I cant wait anymore
Main... Jaan Main hamesha tumhare sath hu aur vaise bhi kal se toh 10 din ke liye tumare sath he Rahane Wala hu.. so chill..
Main Aise he tanu ke Nazdeek huya or Use gale laga liya hamara fare Ek doosre ke bilkul paas tha… hame Ek doosre ki saanse feel ho rahi thi. Tanu ke dil ke dhadakne ki awaaz main sun sakta tha… ham ek doosre ki Aankhon mei he dekh rahe the k pata he ni chala kab hamere lips Ek ho gaye..
Meri tanu jo itni sharmili ladki hai. But AAJ vo bhi wild kiss kar rahi thi uska bas chale toh Muje kha he jati
Aise he usne muje seet pe giraya or upper ah gayi or muje Kiss karne lagi mere hath uski peeth se hote hote
Uski **** tak ja rahe the. Aise he Maine uski **** ko jor se daba diya jiss se tanu ki siski ahhh Nikal gayi.
Mere Upper lete-lete vo Apni kamar ko move kar Rahi thi, Maine Apne hath uske Soft **** Par chale gaye or use dabane laga..
Bahut soft **** the Meri jaan ke.. kiss band hoyi to Maine Apne lips Uske kaan me Gol-Gol ghumane laga jisse Tanu Puri tarah hill gayi.. uske muuh se siskiya nikle lagi..
Tanu Machali ki tarah Machal Rahi thi or Apni kamar ki moving tej kardi, sath he strongly kiss karne lagi.... Muje laga shayad Tanu ***** ke kareeb hai.
2 minte baad he uska body Akadne laga or vo teen chaar jatke ke sath ***** ho gayi or Mere upper gir gai or lambi-lambi Saas lene lagi.
Main.....…Tanu Tumhara to ho gaya Ab Mera kya..
Tanu ne Apna face Meri chest me chupa liya. Or Sharmane lagi.. Jab garm thi us time no sharm ,Aur Ab jab ***** ho gayi sharam vapis Aa gai….
Main....... Tanu chalo utho tumhe Ghar chod Aayu…
Tanu.......babu Aajj ke Apke swaal ka jawab Main Aapko Trip Par doongi.
Main...... its ok jaan, I luv u so much. Aise he baat karte karte Tanu ka Ghar Aa gaya ..
Ham dono bahar utre.
Main....... Ok tanu, Ab ja ke Packing karlo okk… Maine, tanu ko gale se laga liya.
Tanu ne muje tightly hug kar liya.. Maine uske forhead pe kiss kiya Aur hum Alag huye.
Tanu...... i luv u so much babu. Main morning me intjar karugi. jaldi Aana, Ab Jeyada door Tum se Nahi Raha jayega….
Main….... I love u too my jaan. Jaldi Aayuga. Jab bhi Meri jaroorat ho Apne dil pe hath Rakh ke Muje pukarna..
Main Tumhare pass chala Aayuga…. okk bye t.c. Hamne firse Hug kiya or Main ghar Aa gaya…..
Ghar Aa kar Main seedha Apne room me gaya.. fresh huya or late gaya.
Thodi der baad Maine Nisha di ko call kiya or uhne Trip ke bare Mein bataya.. unhone ne jatt se Haan kardi… Maine unhe paking karke Rakhana ka bol.. Phn cut kiya or so gaya.
Wahi Nisha ye soch kar bahut khush thi ki wo Rudra ke sath Rahegi or wo Is Taur Par kuch na kuch to kar he legi…..
"GIEDE PRIME" PLANET..............
Guruji Ne Aaditya Aur Peddy ko birthday ke Baad hi Yanha bula Liya tha. Aur Martial Art ke Sath-Sath, Talvar Chalana, Chakku Chalana, Aur Apni Powers ka Use Karane ki Trainning de RAhe the.....
Bahut der tak Un dono ko Sikhane ke Baad Guruji Chale Gaye Aur Paractice Karte Rahane ko bole...
Aaditya....... Paddy Muje lagata hai. Rudra ko kuch to pata lag gaya hoga, Apne bare me.
Paddy......... Han bhai.Aur Ab to vo Drinde, Rudra par hamla jaroor karege..or hame uski help karni hogi, Jab tak use Apni Powers ke bare me Pata Nahi lag jata..
BLOOD STONE PLANET ...............
Shetaan- Ye Ek Bahut hi Takatwar, Kali shaktiyo ka Malik hai. Ye ***** ka Senapati (Froce commander) hai.
Shetaan........ AB Samay Aa gaya hai, Use khatam karne ka. Abhi use Apni POWERS ke bare me Pata NaHi hai. Jald se Jald use khatm karna hoga. Mere Sainiko Jayo use khtm kr do.....
DARINDA 1- Ye vahi hai JO Pichale Update me Aaya tha. Is ka Name hai "SAURON"
Sauron....... Jaisa Aap kahe Malik, Par Malik Maante hai vo Apni powers ke bare me Nahi jaanta.. Par vo itna kamjore Nahi hai. uske paas uski Anguthi hai Aur Dragon bhi hai. wo use kuch Nahi hone denga.. Lekin Phir bhi hum Apni taraf se puri koshis karege..hum Aaj he niklege jaha se waha jate jate 1 ya 2 din lag sakte hai. Shettan..... Sauron, Agar Tum Khali Hath Aaye to Tum jante ho Hum Tumhe Mouat se bhi Badtar Sajja Dege.... Jao Use Khtm Kar do Use.....
HI HAIL Shetaan........... Kah kar vo Darinde Prathvi ke liye Nikal Gaye...
EARTH.........
Back to Hero......
Morning Rudra utha or Naha ke bahar Aaya. Dining table pe Uske Mom, Dad baithe the.. Rudra ne uhne wish kiya or hug kiya.
dad....... to teyari ho gayi Mere sher.
Main...... yes dad, I Am ready.. Packing to Mom ne Pehle he kardi thi.
Dad........ theek hai beta, ye lo Master card. Maine Renew karva diya hai. No Limit..... Tumhare Naam Par hai.. Sab kuch Ab Tumhare Naam Par ho gaya hai.. or ye Raha Tumhara driving license...
Main....... Thnks Dad.....
Mom..........betu kab Niklna hai... Aur Apna deyaan Rakhna time Par khana khana... kisi se jhagra Nahi karna.. Apna or Apne dosto ka khiyal Rakhna.... we will miss u... yeh bol kar Mom rone lagi...
Maine Mom ko gale laga liya.....
Main........ Mom plzzzz dont cry agar aap aise Royoge to Main ja Nahi paunga..plzzz stop cry....
Mom....... ok betu Nahi roti..tu Pehli baar ghar se bahar ja raha hai....or vo bhi 10 dino ke liye. Apna kheyal rakhna.
Dad......... Nirmala ab vo bacha nai hai... or vaise be Iske frnds toh hai na iske saath. ..
Main........ ok dad, Mai ja raha hu...frnds wait kar rahe honge
Main mom dad se gale mila. jab mom se gale mila toh Mom ne Muje tightly hug kiya.. Maine bhi mom ko tight hug karliya.
Mom, Mere se boli...... Jaan leni hai kya. Itana Tight Hug karta ho koi. Meri to Saans hi Atak Gayi. Main "sorry" bola Aur Unhe bye bol ke Nikla waha se...
Main Seedha Rina ke ghar pauncha use pick karne. uska Ghar Mere ghar se Najdeek he tha. Ghar ke pass ja ke Maine Rina ko call kiya...
Main........ Rina Aa jayo Main bahar khada hu...
5 minte me Rina bahar Aayi. oh my god skin tight jeen. White t-shirt.. so ***.
Rina........ Hi Rudra kaise ho, Kaisi lag Rahi hu Main..
Main…..... Ek dam ***...
Rina....... Main **t. Agar Main hot hoti to Muje Ignore Nahi karte... Chipake to Tanu se Rahate ho. Aur **t Mughe kah Rahe Ho.
Main....... Rina tum Phir Shuru ho gayi, tumhe pata hai Na Main Tanu se Pyar karta hu.. or vo Mujse..
Rina........ Main kab kah Rahi hu Muje Pyar karo Muje to bas Tumhara sath thoda time spend karna chahti hu. Aage jo karna hai vo Main khud karugi. itna bol, Rina ne muje Aakhn mar di....
Uski baat Par Main Shock ho gaya tha.
Rina..... Shock hone ki Jarurat Nahi hai, Main Majaak Kar Rahi hu.
Main..... (Haste hue) Daraa diya yr.
Main....... toh Chale miss..
Rina........ kuch bhi kaho Rudra, Tanu Bahut hi Lucky hai Jo Use Tum Jaisa BF Mila.
Maine Rina ko kaha ki... Tumhe bhi Aisa Care Karne vala BF Milega..
Aise he hum ne sab ko pick kiya. jab tanu ko lene gaye. to wo Aaj blue color ki salvar suit me thi ..
kasam se She was looking so Gorgues bahut pyari lag rahi thi. Maine use hug kiya or use chhota sa kiss kiya..
Rina..… Hume to kabhi gale mile Nahi..
Main..... Aaja Tuje bhi hug karta hu.. Rina bhag kar Aayi or Mere gale lag gayi.. Sab dekh kar hasne lage… Phir Maine Sabko Nisha di se Milwaya, Sabhi di se milke khush the or di bhi. Fir waha se Nikale Apni Manjil ki or..
Jaha inko kuch pata Nahi tha ki Inke sath kya hone vala hai. Es Tour Main bahut kuch hoga, JO ki Sab ki jindagi badal dega. Abhi Aadhe Raaste paunche the ke sabhi ko bookh lag gayi..
Vanhi pass ke Ek restorant****ke Aage car rok di... Sab Neeche utre or Ander chale gaye.. sabne apna ORDER diya.
Abhi hum Apne Table Par baithe the ke vaha kuch gunde type Ladke Aa gaye....
vo hamare Samane wale Table Par baith gaye... Mujhe laga ab kuch na kuch kand to jarur hoga yaha But Mughe toilet lagi thi to Main bola...
Main....... Guys Main Abhi Aaya.
Phir Main vaha se washroom chala geya. Bhut tejj Lagi thi. jab vapis aya.... jo dekha os se Mera khoon kholne laga.......
CONTINUED.............
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