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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 27, 2019 16:19:11 GMT 5.5
New beginning.
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Post by kabir on Jan 27, 2019 16:22:10 GMT 5.5
bhai , Keep continue . we are with you ….
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Post by kabir on Jan 27, 2019 16:23:13 GMT 5.5
Welcome bhai ….
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 27, 2019 16:38:37 GMT 5.5
UPDATE-1
Adventure of karma (world beyond the world)part 2 Pehle dungeon ke kamyabi ke baad aab mere pas crimson ki shakti hai …pata nahi meri sabhi jaan kis hal me honge mujhe unki yaad sata rahi hai … Mohan: my king ye safar mera akhri safar tha apke Sath … Main.. hmm samajh sakta hu mere dost tumhe aab apni ek nayi jindagi suru karni hogi main bhi tumhe nahi rokunga …tum tino hamesha khush rahna… Mohan.. sukriya my king … Hamara sath bas mahal tak hi tha mohan akela tha aab nahi uska jivan aab suru hua hai main use kharab nahi karna chahta kiu ke mere jivan ke sath khatre hai main king hu king karma jadui takato ka malik mera jivan kabhi sadharan nahi ho sakta …. Main .. aur tum dono rita mita tum dono kya karna chahti ho aab tum dono azad ho … Mita.. malik hum apke gulam hain aap ke sath hi raenge aap hame jis halat me rakhenge usi halat me rah lenge … Main.. mita aisa jaruri nahi hai aab main tumhara malik nahi hu .. kaha na tum dono azad ho ab koi bhi tum dono ko gulam nahi bana sakta ye duniya bahut khubsurat hai tum chaho to kahi bhi ek khushal jindagi gujar sakti ho … Rita… malik aap ne hame yeh jindagi di hai aphi ki seba karte huye ham yeh jindagi bitana chahenge…. Main… nahi rita mita apni jindagi kharab na karo meri pehle hi 6 biwiya hai ..tum dono ke liye uttam purush hum dhundenge …apne jivan ko itna na kam kar ke dekho …tum dono meri jimmedari ho tumhare khushi ka khayal rakhna meri jimmedari hai ….
Hum bate karte huye hamare desh melboalfan k eke melbiolina pahuch gaye jaha meri jaan Kristine aur lili sath lelina thi lekin kingdom me prabesh karte hi uska najara dekh mujhe mahsoos ho gaya ke yaha kuch to gadbad hain … Main… monark samne aao … mere bullane se mere samne monark tote ke roop me prakat hua Monark.. hokum malik Main… monark mujhe yaha kuch gadbad lag rahi hai jao pata lagao mere mahal pahuchne se pehle mujhe mahol ki jankari do … Monark… ji malik aap nishchint rahe main abhi aaya …monark chala gaya … yumina… dady hum pahuch gaye ma ke pass .. samne melbolina ka mahal dikh raha tha .. yumina bahut khush hui mahal lout ke .. Hum mahal ki aur badh hi rahe the ke tabhi mionark lout aaya … Monark .. malik purab ke sima pe ek bishal sena khadi hai hamla karne ke liye …lekin wo insane sena nahi hai kuch alag hi jeev hai … Main .. jeev matlab wo insane nahi hai kya … Monark.. nahi malik inasn nahi hai na hi koi is dharti ke jeev hai kuch aur hi lag rahe hai … Main … jahaj purab ki sima kai aur mod do mahal hum badh me jayenge pehle dekhe to ye nmanjra kya hai … Monark .. malik maharani lili bhi wohi hai hamari sena ka sath … Main .. chalo dekhte hai … hum chal pade purab ki shima ki aur jaha meri ek jaan kafi chintit khadi dusmano ki sena ko dekh rahi thi … Jab meri pehli najar padi un jeevo ki sena ke upar5 mera muh se bas ek sabd hi nikla he bhagwan …wo sena itni bishal thi ke kuch samajh pana mumkin nahi tha … Wo jeev dikhne me thik black panther ki tarah the lekin unka akar unse dugna tha aur wo jada khatarnak bhi lag rahe the …mere ship ko aate dekh mere sena me josh o junun badh gaya …
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Post by Trial_Baba on Jan 27, 2019 17:05:50 GMT 5.5
Bhai pehle is ka part 1 to da do agar ap. Ka pass pdf ha to plzz send me
adnanalvi456@gmail.com
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Post by crazyrex on Jan 27, 2019 17:14:25 GMT 5.5
congrats for starting this thread This was one of my favorite story
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 27, 2019 18:20:29 GMT 5.5
Okay brother mere pass sare PDF hai
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 27, 2019 18:21:54 GMT 5.5
Welcome everyone... Friend help karna is story ko likhne me
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 27, 2019 18:29:00 GMT 5.5
UPDATE-2
Mere ship ko aate dekh mere sena me josh o junun badh gaya … Sath sath ek chintit chehra bhi khill gayi … wo thi meri jaan lili meri pyaRI JAAN Hamara ship dono sena ke bich utra aur mere bahar nikal kar aate hi meri jaan lili akar mere baho me shama gayi …hum mahine bhar ki judai ek pal me bhul ek dusre me khone lage the tabhi dusri sena ke bhayankar dahad ne hame hosh me laya … Main … jaan ye sab kya hai ye sena ye ajeev se jeev kaha se aaye … Lili … achha hua jaan aap lout aaye hum to dar hi gaye the na apki koi khabar upar se ye musibat … Main … ha bolo ye sab kya hai mere na hone se yaha kya hua … Lili.. jaan pata nahi sab kuchh thik tha lekin achanak 2 din pehle ye ajeev si sena hamare sima pe khadi dikhi bas aisehi khadi hai na aage badhti na kuch karti hai …. Main … kya do din se aise hi khadi hai lekin kiu kaha se aaye ye jeev kon hai ye jeev … Lili.. hame kuch pata nahi hum bas suraksha ki dristi se hamari sena ko taiyar rakha hai parishiti ka mukabla karne ke surat me .. Main … achha kaam kiya jaan mujhe tumpe garb hai …aab apni sena ko piche kar lo inko main dekhta hu … Lili … ji jarur jaan …kuchi der me hamari sena piche hat gayi rah gaye bus hum mujhe kuch kuch andaza tha ye sab hai kya mujhe un jeevo mese koi life energy feel nahi ho rahi thi … Main …. Crimson prakat ho …. Mere hokum kje sath crimson prakat ho gaya … Crimson… malik hokum … Main … crimson timhe pata hai ye sab hai kya … maine un ajeev jeevo ki aur ishara kiya tha… Crimson … ji malik mujhe pata hai ye sab bhram hai … ye sab Dark stone kin shakti ka asar hai … Main … dark STONE ye darkstone kya hai… Crimson … malik dark stone bhi mere purane malik ki ek shakti hai jo sayad apke desh me dunjeon ke roop me ubhra hai … dark stone bahut hi khatarnak hai aur besabra shakti hai … sayad isliye wo apne hone ka ehsaas ap sabhi ko kara raha hai … Main… hmm lekin abhi inka kya karu kya ye aise hi chalega mere desh basi vaivit hai … Crimson… nahi malik aab agar inpe hamla karenge ye turant hi gayab ho jayenge … Main.. hmm maine apna hath upar kiya aur sthanantar yani gate magic ka istemal kiya aur sath sath ek jor ka chhalang lagaya aur gate se nikalte apne black dron pe sawar ho gay … black dron pe khada main aisa tha jaise swayam yamdut agaye hai … Dragon ne ek gota lagaya aur sidha un black panther jaose jeevo pe akar ruka aur apna muh khol agg ke bhyankar lapte bikherne laga un lapto ke chute hi sab gayab hone lage min bhar me puri ki puri sena gayab ho gayi lekin tabhi waha ghanghor andhera cha gaya sath sath ek bhayankar hasi kin awaj aayi … Crimson … malik yeh black stone ki awaj hai jarur usne aap ko chuna hai dungeon me aane ke liye … Main .. agar aisi baat hai hai to mai jarur jayunga … tabhi maine apna hath crimson ki aur badhaya sath SATH Husna bhi udte huye agayi aur mere me shama gayi aur dekhte dekhte main ek roshni manab me badal gaya mera pura jisam roshni bikher raha tha … Mere jisam ki roshni se wha faila andhera gayab ho gaya …. Andhera chat gaya… sab kuch normal ho gaya… Husna aur crimson mere jisam se nikal aayi …. Main bapas apni jaan ke pass agaya … Main.. jaan chalo mahal chalte hai … maine apne gate spell ka istemal kiya aur ek jhatke me mahal me pahuch gaya sidha shava me jaha meri ek aur jann intezar me thi usko suchna mil gayi thi mere agman ka …. Mere waha pahuchte hi Kristine singhasan se utar gayi main jakar baith gaya… Main… app logo ko darne ki jarurat nahi hai musibat tal gayi hai philhal ke liye waise bhi mere suraksha kabach ke rahte kuch ho nahin sakta … shava mere agman se chahak uthi main singhasan se uth gaya aur apni jaan aur bakio ke sath CHAL PADA mahal ki aur … mere sath meri dono patni Kristine aur lili thi mohan aur yumina bakio ko lekar chala gaya guest toom ki aur yumina apne kamre me ma beti pehle hi mil chuke the shava me aab bari meri thi Apne kaksh me pahuchte hi maine dono ko baho me bhar liya tabhi piche se meri ek aur jaan akar mujh se lipat gayi wo thi lelina meri jaan …. Main meri tino bibio se lipat raha tha apna pyar barsa raha tha tabhi phirse kamre me andhera chane laga ek khatarnak muskan us andhere me mere ankho ke samne ghoom ne lagi maine aapna hath aage badhaya ke andhera gayab ho gaya tabhi mere mastisk me crimson bola …
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 27, 2019 18:29:56 GMT 5.5
Dosto kisi ko pdf upload karna aata hai kya
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