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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 27, 2019 18:51:00 GMT 5.5
Friend comment kar k batao aap logo ko Kya changes Cha hiye..aapna idea bi share karo Thank you everyone to support me
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Post by krsuraj159 on Jan 27, 2019 19:30:59 GMT 5.5
Superb update
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 27, 2019 19:32:04 GMT 5.5
Trail baba Bhai aap ko Maine adventure of Karma world beyond the world mail kar Diya hai
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 27, 2019 23:08:28 GMT 5.5
Friends story Mai type kar Raha hai 10min update kar dunga
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Post by kabir on Jan 27, 2019 23:43:39 GMT 5.5
Bhai , keya muje bhi "Adventure of Karma`s " ki part 1 send kar sakte hai . kabirshorkar08@gmail.com
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 28, 2019 0:27:31 GMT 5.5
UPDATE-7
Adventure of Karma's (world beyond the world) me aab Tak aap logo ne dekha ki Crimson aapni paresani Karma ko Bata hai.Apna Power use karne k baad bi vo is Maya bi jungle k bare me pata nahi laga pa Raha hai.Isi k saat karma ek baar phir se ek gahri soch me doob jata hai.
Aab aage (Friends aab karma k place pe Mai likhaunga)
Vahi dusri taraf mere Jane k baad ship pe kisi ka maan nahi lag Raha tha.Lelina,Sina aur Yumina Tino aapne soch me khoo e thi. Yumina soch rahi thi Kash Mai bi dady k sath jungle adventure par hoti to kitna Maja ata.Vahi dono raniya bi yahi soch rahi thi jungle adventure pe both Maja ata q k dono raniya bi both samay se kisi adventure pe Mere sath nahi gai thi. Tabhi tino ek saat bol badti hai.jisi dekh Tino has padti hai. Yumina mom plzzz chaliye na is jungle adventure par. Yaha ruk k to Mai bore ho rahi hu Mai.
Lelina aur Sina dono ha beti tum bilkul Sai bol rahi ho hum bi yaha bore ho rahe hai aur hum bi is jungle adventure ko miss nahi karna chahate hai. Phir pata nahi kab adventure karne ko mile ga ki nahi aur unki tention bi hoti rahe gi. Unke saat rahege to adventure bi ho jaye ga aur hamara aacha time pass bi ho jaye ga.Uske baad Tino dicission leti hai vo bi is jungle adventure pe jayenge.In sab me sabse Jada exited thi yumina. Usko talvar baji fighting aur adventure both pasand thi. Tino sahi seno ko ship pe rukne ka adesh deti hai aur Tino ship se niche jamin pe utar jati hai.
Yumina mom hum dad ko kaise dhundge (search)is pure Maya bi jungle me.Lelina bus itni si baat tabhi Lelina jungle ki RUH ko ek baar phir se pukarti hai . RUH lelina k samne as jati hai. RUH bato musafir Mai tuhari Kya madat kar sakti hu. Lelina ..mujhe Sina aur yumina hum Tino ko karma k pass paucha do. RUH thik hai.
Mai aabhi bi aapne soch me dooba tha ki tabhi Jungle see achanak hi ek both bada bavandar mere samne as k Ruk jata hai. Uske rukte hi Meri aankhe aur munh samne valo ko dekh k khuli ki khuli rah jati hai.
Mere samne Meri dono jaan aur Meri natkhat badmash beti khadi ho k smile kar rahi think aur un k saat jungle ki RUH bi thi.
Mai aabhi kuch puchne vala hi thanks ki Monark aur Husna mere samne as jate hai. Undono ko dekh k mujse undaja ho Gaya tha ki kuch to gadbad hai. Aabhi Mai kuch bolta usse pahle Monark aur Husna Malik hame maf kardo hum is jungle k bare me kuch bi nahi pata laga paye.
Ye baat sun k Mai bi ascharya chakit ho Gaya q ki Monark ek black spirit King hai aur Husna ek Jin hai. Dono k pass itni Power hai ki dono kuch hi samay me pure is magical Earth k bare me pata laga sakte hai. Lekin is choti si jungle k bare me pata nahi laga paye. Ye ek both hi gambir baat hai. Aabhi Mai soch hi Raha tha ki kisi k bulane see Mai aapne hosh me aaga. Ye awaj thi Meri dono jaan ki. Dono ko muje is awasta me dekha nahi Gaya dono AA k mere gale lag gai. Dono Kya hua jaan aap both paresan lag rahe hai sab thik to hai na .
Aab Mai in dono ko Kya batau Mai baat ko badalna hi think samja Mai aapne dono jaan ko paresan nahi karna chata tha. Mai kuch bi to nahi jaan . Aab Meri dono jaan mere pass hai to muje kisi baat ka tention nahi hai.
Vaise tum Tino yaha Kya kar rahi ho Maine to tum Tino ko ship pe hi rahne ko kaha that .Tino aapna masum sa chera kar k ek saat hum vaha bore ho rahe the isi liye aap k pass aa gaye. Ha dady mujse is adventure pe aane ka both man kar Raha to Maine mom se request kar k aap k pass aa hai. Yamina bi aake mere gale lag jati hai Mai bi both pyar see ohh to Meri beti ko adventure karna hai. Yamina hmm.mai sirf adventure karna hai ya phir kuch aur bi......Meri baat sun k yamina dady......uski pyari si sakal dekh k hum Tino muskra dete hai.
Mai chalo aacha Kiya tum Tino AA gai aab hum sab mil kar is maya bi jumngle ki Mistry ko solve karenge. Tabhi Meri najar jungle ki RUH pe padti hai vo bi kisi gahri soch me dobi this.
Mai Kya hua Jungle ki maharani aap Kya soch rahi ho . Meri awaj sun kar jungle ki RUH aapne soch see bahar as jati hai. RUH Mai soch rahi thi Kya koi hame is Maya bi jeevo see mukti dila paye ga. Mai varso se aapne in pyare pedo ko isme rahne valo janvaro ko aur Meri takto ko khoti ja rahi ho. Issi tarah agar chalta Raha to kuch hi mahino me Mera aur is pure Maya bi jungle ka astitva hi khatama ho jaye ga. Aab to Meri asha bi khatam ho gai hai.
Lelina ye aap kaisi baat kar rahi ho hamare hote huye ye Jungle ko kuch bi nahi ho sakta hai. Mai bilkul aap peresan mat hona hum aap ko jarur is Maya bi jeevo see mukti dilange. Ye Mera aap se vada Raha. Yumina, lelina aur Sina Tino ek saat aab aap befikra ho javo aab aap ki problem vo aab hamari problem hai. Morning (subha) Tak aap ka ye jungle pahle jaisa ho jaye ga vo bi Maya bi jeevo k mukti k saat.
Hamari bate sun kar jungle ki RUH ko both khush ho jati hai aur kahti hai Mai bi aap logo ki madat karungi plzzz muje aap logo ki madat karne do muje is jungle k bare me sab much pata hai isse aap logo ki madat hi hogi. Ye sab sunkar Mai haa bol Diya....... Aab aage Kya Kya hoga jungle adventure me Jane k liye Meri story padte raho frend... to be continued.......
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 28, 2019 0:41:04 GMT 5.5
Dosto Maine udate post kar Diya hai....aapna comment kark batana aap ko Kaisa laga Raha hai.mei story ....
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 28, 2019 0:42:10 GMT 5.5
Kabir Bhai part 1 mail kar deta hu
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 28, 2019 0:49:24 GMT 5.5
Friendd ready my story give your precious comment and give me your suggestion also... good night and enjoy the story
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Post by Trial_Baba on Jan 28, 2019 0:58:45 GMT 5.5
Bhai part 1 ka 32,33,34 wale update nhi diya ap na us ma plzz wo send kar do
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