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Post by DAIVIK-RAJ on Sept 28, 2020 7:09:09 GMT 5.5
Ye meri khud ki story hai jiska khyal
aaj mujhe ek movie dekhne ke baad Aaya
mai ye confirm Nahi kah Sakta hu ki story ki update regular honge ya inregular but yah meri sabhi story se hatke hai and
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Post by DAIVIK-RAJ on Sept 28, 2020 7:09:51 GMT 5.5
Main clear Kaha raha hu ki maine Apne story ko isliye band Kiya kyunki main old mind Ka tha
Maine socha 200-300 update ka story likhunga
Shuruaat me to story Chali lekin baad me story par response aana lagbhag band ho Gaya
Is story me 50 ke lagbhag update honge
And Mai ye story complete karunga
uske baad R.R.Raj- Safar Aadi se Ant Tak ko complete karunga
again Daivik-Raj--- Son Of God ko start karunga
lekin aaj Nahi to kal Apne dwara start ki gai sabhi story ko complete karunga
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Post by DAIVIK-RAJ on Sept 28, 2020 7:10:31 GMT 5.5
Yah Story Hai aam Janata ke bich ke ek ladke ki jo Kisi Ka se apne raste Se bata Gaya
Yah Story Hai do bhaiyon ki jismein se ek Ko to Sahi raah batane wala Mila lekin dusre ko Nahin
Yah Story Hai aise do bhaiyon ki jisme Se ek ne dusre ko Sahi raste per chalna sikhaya aur khud burai ka sathi ban Gaya
Yah Story Hai samaj ke us bacche ki jinke ma-baap ko party aur apne jhuthe Shan+shoukat se fursat Nahin milati thi
Kul Mila jula kar yah Story Hai mere mental mind ki Jo
kuchh bhi likh leta hai lekin in her shabd mein ek point hota Hai
Flow-Flow me bahut kuchh likh Gaya
Seriously Na le
Yah story Hai ek aise vaykti jiske andar do pahchan hai ek good ek bad
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Post by DAIVIK-RAJ on Sept 28, 2020 7:10:53 GMT 5.5
To readers iis story mein like aur comment jarur kijiega kyunki Jin readers ne update padhakar like aur comment Nahin kiye
Yah Story Hai unki Jo karte to sab kuchh hai per dikhate kuchh Nahin
Otherwise
Yah Story Hai Raj-Viraj ki
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Post by DAIVIK-RAJ on Sept 28, 2020 7:11:15 GMT 5.5
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Post by DAIVIK-RAJ on Sept 28, 2020 7:12:23 GMT 5.5
UPDATE 1
Chaliye aaj ek aur story start karte Hain
Raj yah naam aapane lagbhag meri sabhi story mein sunna hai kyunki yah mera naam hai and yah story me bhi main isi naam ko main role me rakha hun
Khair mein aap logon Ko Apne bare mein hi batane lag Gaya aur story ka koi jikr hi nahi to chaliye ab story start karte Hain....
Saal 2000
Ek lab me 2 scientist Apne Kisi prayog Ko kar rahe the dekhne Se Hi lag raha hai ki ye dono is lab me Kai mahinon Se Hai.
Chaliye aapko mein ine donon scientist ke bare mein bata deta hun inka story mein jayada koi important role Nahin Hai
S1&S2 desh Ke nagrik ke upar dhaba indoni ne Apne dimag ka prayog Kabhi bhi bhalai ke liye nahin kiya ine donon Ne milkar Apne jivan mein bahut Sare bomb yah technique ka aviskar Kiya aur use underworld me becha aur aaj bhi yah donon ek aisa liquid ko banaa rahe hai jise agar ek acche vyakti me inject Kiya Gaya to vah super hero ban jaega vahi agar ise Kisi bure vhakti mein dala Gaya to vah super villain
Ab tak aap ko pata chal gaya hoga Ki ye log gair kanooni kaam karte hain aur abhi yah donon India ke ek aisa jagah per Hain jahan Kisi Ka pahunch na lagbhag namumkin Hai Khair abhi yah sab baat Ko yahi chod ham story ke taraf chalte Hain
In lab
S1-yah hamare jindagi Ka sabse important khoj hogi iske badle hamen manchaha paisa milega
S2-tumhari baat bilkul sahi hai chalo pahle kam per dhyan dete Hain
Iske bad yah donon Apne Apne kam mein lag Gaye
Chaliye ab ham chalte Hain Bharat ke hi ek shahar Haridwar ke taraf
kahane ko To yah sadhu Santo ki Nagari hai aastha ki Nagari hai Vah nagiri jahan Hari khul aaye the lekin ab yah shahar bhi Vikas kar chuka hai. Ab yahan bhi Udyog dhandhe hone lage hai.
Santosh Bansal Mumbai shahar ke sabse mashhur businessman aur Bharat ke top 5 business man me se ek
Pinki Bansal Yash ki patni
Sath hi sath business ki partner
Donon ki shaadi saal 1992 main hui thi Shaadi Ke 5 sal baad inhe ek beti hui Neha Bansal lekin Shaadi Ke 7 sal gujar jaane ke baad bhi jab inhe koi beta Nahi hua ab ke pita Ne Kaha ki tum donon Haridwar Chale jao vahan per ek mahashant rahte hain tumhen ab vah hi koi upay bata sakte hain
Vaise bhi hamara vahan per bhi business tum vai Se kuchh dino Tak Sare kam Ko Dekho
Santosh aur pinki ne apne pita ki baat man kar Haridwar chale Gaye jahan per unhen mahashant mile
S-mujhe mere pita Shri ne aapke pass bheja Hai
M.S-mujhe tumhare pareshani ke bare mein sab pata hai aur uska samadhan bhi mere pass hai
S-kya upay Hai Guruji
M.S-aapko aur aapke patni ko 2 mahine Tak Ganga nadi ke kinare pure Vidhi vidhan se Puja Karni hogi uske bad aapki la vie ichcha jarur Puri hogi
S&P-Jaisi aapki ichcha Guruji
Iske bad Santosh aur pinki ne pure 2 mahine Vidhi vidhan se Puja kiya
Ek din pinki behosh ho gai tab use hospital me le Jaya Gaya
Jab yah khabar Santosh ko pata chali to vah bahut pareshan ho Gaya aur Sare kam ko chhodkar hospital Chala Gaya
In Hospital
Jaise hi Santosh hospital pahuncha uska samna doctor se ho gaya
S-doctor sahab meri patni ab kaisi hai use kya ho Gaya hai
Dr-isme ghabrane ki koi baat nahin hai Bansal Sahab aapki patni maa banne Wali Hai
Yah baat Ko sunkar Santosh bahut khush hua aur apni patni ke kamre me Gaya
S-mubarak ho tum fir se maa banne wali ho agar bhagwan ki kripa hui to iis baar beta hi Hoga
P-beta Hoga Kaisa Nahin ham logon Ne bhagwan ki itni pooja jo ki hai.
Dusre din donon aashram mein pahunch jaate Hain
M.S-mubarak ho bahut jald tumhare Ghar beta aane Bala hai
S- yah sab to aapki hi kripa Hai guru ji agar aap hamen upay Nahin batate to ham to is Khushi Ke liye hamesha tadapte rahte
Khair ab hum us samay me chalte hai jab Santosh & Pinki Ka beta janm Lene Bala hai arthat Mai janm Lene Bala Hu. Jab se papa aur maa Haridwar Aaye hai vapas Mumbai Nahi Gaye vahi Mumbai se koi Haridwar Nahi aaya. Didi vahi Dada ke sath Mumbai me thi Khair story per chalte Hai
29 February 2000 aaj Mera janm hone Bala tha lekin hospital mein vah liquid nahin tha jiski Maa ko sabse jyada jarurat thi
Aur isi baat ko lekar Dr aur Papa ki beach bahash chal rahi thi lekin ant me Papa ki wo liquid ke liye dusre dukan Jana para
Ab chalte Hai S1@S2 ke taraf
29 February 2000 aaj in dono Ka liquid taiyar ho Gaya
S1-ab hame jald se jald yaha se niklana Chahiye
S2- ha tum Sahi kah rahe ho
Iske baad undono me liquid ko ek dawa ke botal me daal Diya aur vaha se nikal Gaye
Yah vahi samay tha jab papa medical store ke liye nikle the
Ab dekhna yah hai ki aage Kaya hota hai kaise ye liquid hero aur villain ke bich relation banta hai
Ye sab Janne ke liye sath bane rahiye
Abhi ke liye Good by
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Post by DAIVIK-RAJ on Oct 12, 2020 8:47:03 GMT 5.5
UPDATE 2
(1000+ word)
Ab tak aap logon Ne padha ki ---
S1 & S2 ne vahan liquid taiyar kar liya tha jisse a super human yah super villain banaya ja sake. Aur vah dono us liquid ko lekar vahan se nikal Gaye.
Ab aage---
S1 & S2 is waqt lab se nikalkar city Ki Tarah jaane lage. Main to yah batana hi bhul gaya vah dono paidal Nahin car se ja rahe hai. Jaise hi vah shahar me Aaye road par ek board laga hua tha jis par likha tha
(HARIDWAR 0 KM..)
Yani ki vah dono Haridwar shahar ja rahe the chaliye ab story ke taraf chalte Hain
S1-tumhen pata hai na hamen kahan jaana hai
S2-mujhe pahle Se Hi pata hai aur main usse bhi vahan bula liya hai
S2-tum ek bar us liquid ko nikal Kar Dekh lo vah surakshit hai ya nahin
(Is waqt S2 car chala raha tha)
S1 Ne vah liquid nikal kar Dekha
S1-han sab sahi hai
S2-use surakshit Rakh do abhi tak humne sirf ek hi bottle liquid banai hai
Abhi yah log car chala rahe the ki achanak mausam kharab ho gaya aur thodi dur per kahin bijali giri jisse sadak per bhagdar machal Gaye jis Karan Kai vahan(gariyo) ka santulan kho Gaya jisme se ek truck tha achanak huye is ghatna se S1 & S2 pareshan ho gaye abhi vah kuchh karne hi vale the ki ek truck aakar unki car se takra Gaya jiske liye vah donon taiyar Nahin the. In dono ka itna bhayanak accident hua tha ki unka bachna namumkin lag raha tha. Are in sabhi baton mein to main us liquid ko hi bhul gaya
Abhi ka accident jahan hua tha vah ek bridge tha Jaise hi unke car ka accident hua vah liquid S1 ke hath se chhut gai S2 us liquid ko dobara pakdta usse pahle hi vah liquid bridge Ke niche gir gai
Dusri taraf
Papa jab vah dawa lekar medical store se bahar hai usi samay vahan bhi mausam kharab ho gai aur thodi hi dur per kahin bijali giri ISI chakkar mein papa paidal hi dawa lekar hospital ki taraf daure yah vahi samay tha jab vah accident hua tha abhi papa Kisi bridge Ke neeche Se ja hi rahe the ki dawa ke thaili mein hua liquid aakar giri Jo S1 ke hath chhutti thi. Jab papa hospital pahunche Tu vahan doctor kuchh pareshan lag rahe the
Dr- achcha Hoga aap jaldi aa gaye Bansal Sahab
Laiye vah dawa mujhe dijiye
Itna kakkar doctor ne us thaili se dawa nikali liya lekin yah kya doctor ke haath mein to vah liquid ki botal hai
Doctor ne iis baat ki taraf jyada dhyan nahin diya aur us liquid ko sui mein dalkar maa ke andar inject Kar Diya. Wali liquid Maa Se hote hue direct mujhme inject ho Gaya.
Thodi der ke bad vaha Mera janm hua aur doctor daurkar bahar Aaya
Dr-Mubarak ho Bansal Sahab aap ko beta hua Hai
Papa is baat se itne Khush hue hain ki unhone pure hospital mein mithaai batwa di
Dusri taraf
Jab Dada ko yah pata Chala ki mera janm hone wala hai tab Sara parivar Mumbai se Haridwar ke liye Nikal Gaya
Dada
Sadi
Didi
Chacha, Chachi, Unke bacche
Aur
Bua, Fufa, Unke bacche
Abhi story me inka jyada role Nahi hai
Aaj lagbhag ek sal bad papa mummy didi ko dekh rahe the
Didi is waqt lagbhag 3 sal ki thi unhen to kuchh samajh Nahin a raha tha bus itna pata tha ki unka koi bhai Aaya Hai
Iis waqt sara parivar bahut khush tha kyunki main parivar ka pahla ladka tha
Chacha aur bua ko ek ek betiyan hui thi
Chaliye ab story Ki Taraf chalte Hai
Aaj mera naamkaran hona hai aur mahaSant khud iis din hamare ghar Aaye hai
mahashant ne jab meri kundli banaye To thoda pareshan ho Gaye
M.S-Iis balak ke upar khud Hari Ka hath hai, iske upar Kisi Ka bus Nahin chalega, yah khud apna raja hoga, aaj se iska naam Raj hai
M.S-lekin ek bahut badi pareshani utpann ho gai hai
Dada-kya pareshani hai Guruji
M.S-iske upar sani ka drishti dosh hai
Dada-iska koi upay Hai Guruji
M.S-Iis Ka ek hi upay hai is balak ko 18 varsh Tak Haridwar mein hi rahana padega yadi iis beach vah yahan se bahar jata hai To iski mrutyu bhi ho sakti hai.
Pahle to sab bahut pareshan ho Gaye lekin Soch vichar karne ke baad ek nirnay nikala
Pura parivar wapas Mumbai Jayega
Papa ne didi ko Chacha Ko dekar kaha ki aaj se yah aapki hi beti hai ise bahut pyar karega ham is kabhi kabhi milane Aaya Karenge didi ko to kuchh samajh hi nahin aa raha tha ki yahan per kya ho raha hai unhone to Chacha chachi Ko hi apna Mata pita mana tha
Dekhte hi dekhte kuchh dinon mein pura parivar Mumbai Chala Gaya
Ab Haridwar mein papa Maa aur Mai rah Gaye. Bachpan Se Hi vah donon mujhe bahut pyar karte the saptah me ek bar mahashant bhi hamare ghar aate Hain
Abhi mai sirf 1 sal ka hi hua tha ki maa dobara pregnant ho gai jab doctor ne maa ka checkup Kiya tab unhone bataya ki maa pregnant hai
Papa ne iis bare mein jab dadaji ko bataya tab vah bahut khush Hun main aur Haridwar ham logon se milane bhi FIR kuchh din Rakh Kar chale Gaye
Kuchh dinon baad papa Maa ki aur care karne lage dheere dheere maa bhi mujh per kam dhyan dene lagi. Jab aapka koi yah baat bata Chali tab unhone mere liye ek Aaya (naukrani) ko Rakh liya. Jo Mera dhyan Sahi tarike Se rakhne lage.
Abhi yah sab chal hi raha tha ki papa ke London Wale business me bahut badi meeting hone Wali thi Jis me Papa aur maa ko bhi shamil hona Jis din yah baat papa ko pata chali use din mahashankh hamare ghar Aaye hue the.
Papa-Guruji mujhe aur Raj ke maa Ko Kuch Dino Ke liye London jana hai mujhe samajh Nahin aa raha hai Ki main kya Karu
MS-ismein sochne ki kya baat hai kuchh dinon ke liye tum Raj Ko hamare aashram mein Rakh do vaha iska Sahi tarike se palan hoga aur vaise bhi iska dhyan rakhne ke liye Aaya(naukrani) to hai hi
Papa ko mahashant ka sujhav ekadam Sahi laga jiske baad unhone mujhe aashram me rakh Diya aur khud maa ke sath London chale gaye
London mein meeting successful rahi aur unhen bahut bada deal Mila jiske Karan unhen kuchh samay Tak London mein Hi rahana pada dekhte hi dekhte unke liye business bahut jaruri ho Gaya aur vah mujhe lagbhag bhul hi gaye the kuchh mahinon baad ma ne judva bacchon ko janm Diya ek ladka aur ek ladki iske bare mein jab unhone Apne Ghar par bataya tab Dada ji Ne unhe badhai Di
main is waqt 2 sal ka hun aur mujhe ab sabhi bhul chuke the shivay dadaji ke
Aaj ke liye itna hi
Next update me janenge ki use liquid ka mere upar kya asar hota Hai
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Post by DAIVIK-RAJ on Oct 12, 2020 8:48:08 GMT 5.5
UPDATE 3
Ab tak Apne padha ki---
Papa aur maa London chale gaye hain jahan unhen judva baccha hota Hai.
Sath mein yah bhi Jana ki ab sab log mujhe bhul chuke hain shivay Dada ji ke
Ab aage---
Aashram me mahasant mujhe Apne bacche Ki Taraf pyar karte hai.
Jab papa London gaye the to us waqt mei 1.5 sal Ka tha. Mahine me ek bar dadaji mujhse milane aate hai.
Jab mai 5 sal ka hua tabi mahasant Ne meri shiksha shuru kar diya ab mere dimag ka Vikas bhi hone laga tha.
Mere man me rah-rah kar ek hi prashn aata tha
Jab main 6 sal Ka hua tab main aam bacchon se jyada hoshiyar ho gaya tha
Ek bar dada ji mujhse Milne aaye
Mai-dadaji mere sabhi dost ke mummy papa hai mere mummy papa kahan hai
Dada ji ne jab yah baat suni to vah thode pareshan ho Gaya.
Dada-beta vah log kahin gaye hue isliye milane Nahin aa paate
Mai-lekin unhe mujhse milane aana chahie na
Dada-abhi tum yah sab baat Nahin samjhoge jab tum bade ho jaaoge tab main tumhen khud sab bata dunga
Aur iske baad is bare me koi bhi baat nahin hui.
Chaliye ab thodi apni shiksha per chalte Hain
Jab main 5 saal ka hua tab Se mai mahasant ko Guruji bolna shuru kar diya.
Guru ji Ne 5 sal ki avastha se mujhe dhyan lagana vyayam karna aur bhi bahut si baaton Ki shiksha dena shuru karne lage
Haridwar Ka sabse mashhur vidyalay hamare aashram mein Hi hai.
Yahan per admission lene ke liye bacchon ko exam pass karna padta hai.
Jab mai 6 sal ka hua tab guru ji Ne Mera admission usi vidyalay mein kaarvaya chauki mein aashram mein rahata tha isliye bahut Sare shikshak mujhe jante the.
Main pratidin subah 3 baje uthta hu aur 3:15 se 4:30 tak dhyan karta Hu Uske bad 2 ghante vyayam . FIR taiyar hokar 7:30 main vidyalay jata hu
Vidyalay se sham ko 3 baje chhutti hoti hai Uske bad fresh hokar Guruji ke pass jata hu Jo mujhe vedo aur purano Ki shiksha dete hai.
Guruji ka kahana hai ki adhunik jamane mein jitne bhi aavishkar hue hain yah jitni bhi bhasha bani hai un sabhi ka strot hamare ved aur puran Hain.
Dekhte hi dekhte main 10 sal Ka ho Gaya is bich maine ved aur puran Ki shiksha Puri kar li.
Jab mein 6 sal Ka tha tabhi se mujhe Apne andar bahut sari Shakti mahsus hoti thi
Kabhi Kabhi To aisa lagta tha ki koi mere andar chhupa hai vah bahar aana Chahta Hai lekin mujhe yah samajh Nahin aa raha tha ki yah mere sath kyon ho Raha Hai.
Jab main yah baat guru ji ko bataya tab Guruji ne mujhe bataya ki ya dhyan karne ka asar Hai.
(Kab Tak main bolata rahunga ab thodi writer ki bhi sun lete hain)
Writer-jab vah liquid Raj ke body mein Gaya To Raj iske liye Puri Tarah Se taiyar nahin tha
Jis Karan use liquid dheere dheere apna asar dikhane lagi.
Iske prabhav se Kabhi Kabhi Raj Ko gussa bhi aata jab Raj 10 sal ka hua tab aadhe liquid ko Raj ka sharir absorb (apna liya) kar liya lekin liquid ke Bache hue bhag Ko Nahin apna saka
Jis Karan raj par kabhi kabhi liquid ka asar ho jata tha. Jiske bare mein raj ko bhi pata nahin tha lekin aap bahut jald yah samasya khatm hone Wali hai.
Vahin dusri Taraf villain bhi Apne shaktiyon ko pahchanne wala tha)
Ab wapas meri Taraf aate Hain
Ab mei 10 sal Ka ho gaya hu mujhe ab Har hal mein Apne parivar ke bare mein Janna tha. Is bar jab dada ji aaye tab Maine unse poochh liya
Mai-Dada ji aaj aapko hamare parivar ke bare mein batana Hi padega
Dada-beta Maine kitni baar kaha ki abhi Sahi samay Nahin aaya hai
Mai-nahin mujhe is bar Janna hi hai Ki main kaun hun
Iske bad Dada ji Ne mujhe ek ek kar sabhi bate batae kaise Didi ke janm ke bad Papa aur maa mere janm ke liye Haridwar Aaye the.
Vah log mujhse Kitna pyar karte the aur uske bad ek baar London ka jahan unhe judva bacche hue.
Dada ji Ne mujhe yah bhi bataya ki vah log Kabhi America Se wapas Nahin Hai. Iske baad dada ji chale gaye
Vahi sacchai pata chalne ke bad mujhe bahut gussa aa raha tha.
Mera Man kah Raha tha ki abhi vahan jakar unse poochho ki unhone aisa kyon Kiya.
Mera gussa is kadar badh Gaya Ki main vahi behosh hokar gir Gaya iis samay sham ke 8:00 baj rahe the.
Jab mujhe hosh aaya to subah ho chuki thi.
Next update me villain ki entry hogi and Neha Ka bhi jikr Hoga
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Post by DAIVIK-RAJ on Oct 12, 2020 8:49:50 GMT 5.5
UPDATE 4
Ab tak aap logon Ne padha ki---
Mujhe dadaji ne apne bare mein sab kuchh bata diya tha.
Jis Karan mujhe bahut gussa aata Hai aur main behosh ho jata hun
Ab aage---
Kuchh samay pahle jab dadaji Mumbai se Haridwar Aaye the
In Mumbai-
Iis samay Neha ki umra 13 saal hai .
Vah Chacha aur chachi Ko hi apna Mata pita manati hai.
Use Apne asali Mata pita Ke bare mein kuchh Nahin pata hai.
Use bachpan Se Hi bataya gaya tha ki Chacha aur chachi Uske Mata pita hai. Chacha ji ki badi beti hai jiska naam Muskan hai.
Muskan Neha se 1 sal bari hai.
Kabhi Kabhi Muskan aur Neha ke bich jhagada hota hai tab Chacha Neha Ka support karte Hain aur chachi Muskan ka lekin aaj un donon Ka jhagada bahut badh Gaye tab chacha ji Ne ek aisa faisla sunaya jo Neha ne nahin socha tha.
Chacha ji Neha ko 5 sal ke liye hostel bhejne wale the.
Neha-Papa mein Didi ke sath Kabhi jhagada Nahin karungi aap mujhe hostel mat bhejiye
Chacha-yah to hamesha Se hota Aaya hai lekin kab Tak main tumhara support karunga ab tum bahut bigad gaye ho ab tumhe hostel Jana hi hoga.
Chachi-aap apni sari jindagi mein sirf yahi ek achcha kam Karne Wale Hain.
Mai bahut pareshan a gai hun is bachhi se jab dekhu jhagara-jhagara.
Are apni didi se kuchh sikho vah Kabhi tumse jhagara karna nahin aati.
Tum hi hamesha usse larne ka bahana dhundhti ho.
Neha Ne hostel jaane ka bahut virodh Kiya. Lekin uski baat Kisi Ne Nahin mani aur ant me use hostel jana hi pada.
Jab dadaji wapas Ghar Aaye to unhe iis kar bahut gussa aaya.
Vah samaj Gaye ki Chacha, chachi Neha Ko pyar Nahin karte the unhen mere bhi bhavishya ki chinta hone lagi.
Jis Karan ek din vah Apne vakil ke pass gaye aur vasiyat banbai(jiske bare mein aage pata chalega)
Chaliye ab thoda villain ke darshan kar lete hain
Raj Ko sacchai pata chalne ke kuchh samay baad
In Himalaya
Ek ladka Jo lagbhag Raj ke hi umra ka hoga.
Himalaya ke barfi le bhag jaha ka tapman -300⁰c se bhi niche hai.
Vaha par apni practice kar raha tha Kung Fu, karate, judo aur bhi bahut kuch.
Vah larka rukne ka naam hi nahin le raha tha.
Vah Kai dinon Tak apni practis karta Raha
Use bad usne dhyan lagana shuru Kiya aur Kai dino Tak dhyan lagata Raha dinon mahinon mein badal Gaye ek din jab vah dhyan se utha.
Jab vah dhyan se utha tab Uske chehre per ek rahasyamai Muskan thi
Ab vah ladka panch tatva per kabu pane ki koshish Karne laga .
Pahle agni phir jal aise hi Karke usne panch tatva per bhi kabu pa liya.
Usne fir se dhyan lagana shuru Kiya aur usne aapane Sare chakra ko jagrit kar liya.
Iekin iis karya mein use bahut samay laga lagbhag 8 sal ab vah ladka 18 sal Ka ho gaya tha.
Larka- Ab mai wapas aa Gaya Hun .
Aa Raha Hun main tumhari duniya me.
Main tumse tumhara sab kuchh chhin Lunga barbad kar dunga tumhen.
Tumhare pass kuchh Nahin bachega shivay dard ke bahut jald mulakat hogi Mr ?
I am back
Viraj is back
Chaliye aapko to pata chal Hi Gaya ki yah aur koi nahin hamare Story ka villain viraj hai .
Chaliye ab aapko ke power ke bare mein bata dete Hain
Viraj-Hai To Story ka villain lekin iske paas khali shaktiyan Nahin hai.
Iske paas thi formula ki Shakti.
Vahi formula Jo Raj ke andar gaya tha
Viraj ke andar bhi Gaya lekin kaise yah to bad me janenge
ab aate Hain Viraj ke power ki tarah
1 Roop badalna
2 Pal Bhar mein duniya ke kisi bhi jagah per pahunch Jana
3 Kisi bhi chij ko slow motion mein dekhna
4 Kisi bhi insan ko dekh kar Uske Man Ki baat Jaan lena uska atit Jain lena
5 panch tatva ko control karna
Abhi to bus itne hi power hai aage ka bad mein dekhenge
Chaliye wapas Hero ki taraf chalte Hain
In Haridwar
Jab mujhe subah hosh aaya to mai bahut halka mahsus kar raha tha.
Jab main dhyan karne baitha tab ek bahut hi ajeeb baat hai.
Aaj mujhe aisa Nahin laga ki mere andar koi hai.
(Writer-are bebkuf jab formula Puri Tarah Se sharir me adjust ho Gaya to ab kya problem hogi)
Mujhe Apne andar bahut sari pavar mahsus ho rahi thi.
Vahin dusri Taraf guru ji Ne ab meri Astra shastra Ki shiksha shuru ki thi sath hi karate, Kung Fu, judo Aadi.
Ab Mai 17 sal Ka ho chuka hu.
Mujhe ab koi bhi hara Nahin Sakta hai.
Mujhe Apne andar ke power ke bare mein bhi pata chalta
1 main kisi ke Mann Ki baat Jaan Sakta hu
2 koi bhi chij mujhe slow motion mein dikhegi
3 meri speed ab itni tej ho gai thi Ki koi mujhe pakad Nahin Sakta tha
(Writer-are abhi tumhara samna Viraj se nahin hua Hai Nahin to tumhen pata chal jata ki tum kitne paani me ho)
Ek Tarah Se meri jindagi Sahi chal rahi hai.
Tabhi meri jindagi mein ek tufan Aaya.
Aaj Ghar Se aashram mein ek call aaya tha aur udhar Se chacha ji ne mahasant ko bataya ki dadaji ki mrutyu ho gai hai.
Jab mujhe yah baat pata Chali to main bahut tut Gaya.
Mai-guru ji main ghar ja raha hun
M.S-jab tak tum 18 sal ke nahin ho jaate tum Haridwar se bahar Nahin ja sakte
Mai-lekin Guruji dada ji ki mrutyu ho gai hai aur mujhe Jana Hi padega
Jab Tak main apni baat se piche Nahin hata tab guru ji Ne mujhe Mumbai jaane Ki permission de di.
Lekin kuchh samay ke liye.
Main turant thi vahan se Mumbai ke liye Nikal Gaya.
Next update mein jaanege ki Viraj kisse badla lene ki baat kar raha hai.
Kya Raj Sahi samay per Mumbai pahunch payega.
Neha ki jindagi mein kya hota Hai
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Post by DAIVIK-RAJ on Oct 12, 2020 8:51:51 GMT 5.5
UPDATE 5
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Ab tak aapane padha ki---
Neha hostel Chali gai hai vahi aur villain 18 sal Ka ho chuka hai aur use Apne power ke bare mein pata hai.
vahin dusri Taraf dadaji ki death ho chuki hai aur mai Mumbai ke liye nikalne wala hu.
Ab aage---
Neha hostel to Chali gai lekin Uske man me muskaan ke parti nafrat janm Lene lagi.
Use ab vah har pal yad a raha tha jab Uske aur Muskan ke bich jhagada hota tha.
Har bar Galti Muskan ki hoti thi lekin pata nahin kaise Muskan Har bar Neha ko hi fasha deti thi.
Lekin is bar to had Hi ho gai Neha sabse dur hostel chale Gaye aur uske man mein nafrat janm Lene laga.
Neha-ab chahe kuchh bhi ho jaaye main tumhen Kabhi aage badhane Nahin dungi.
5 sal bus 5 sal per main wapas aaunga aur tum Se tumhara sab kuchh chhin lungi.
Khair kabhi kabhi Neha ko Muskan per bahut gussa aata tha.
To Kabhi Kabhi use Apne bachpan Ki baat yad aati thi yah kaise vua aur Muskan aapas me khela karte the jis Karan use Muskan par bahut pyar aata tha.
Jab neha hostel complete karne ke baad wapas Apne Ghar gai tab uski umr 18 sal ho chuki thi.
Vahin Muskan Apne pita Ke business mein hath batane lagi thi.
Neha-papa mujhe bhi ab business line kam karna hai
Uncle-Yah to bahut acchi baat hai beta lekin uske liye tumhen business management ka course karna padega.
Neha-lekin kyon papa apna hi to business hai koi pareshani Nahin hogi
Uncle-Bina knowledge ke business karna bahut kharab hota Hai.
Nuksan ka bhi samna karna padta hai.
Tumhen to business management ka course karna Hi padega.
Neha-theek hai papa jaisa aap chahe
Iske bad Neha Apne kamre mein Chali jaati Hai
In night 11 pm
Neha ko bahut pyas lagti Hai.
Vah Apne bistar Se uth Kar table ke pass jaati Hai.
Jab vah Jug se glass me Pani bharne lagti Hai tab use pata chalta haiai pata chalta Hai Ki Jag mein Pani khatam ho gaya hai.
Iske bad vah jug ko lekar kitchen mein jaati Hai.
Vahan par pani piti hai Uske bad Jug mein Pani bhar kar Apne kamre Ki Taraf Chali jaati Hai.
Lekin Jaise Hain vah hall me pahunchti Hai use Chacha chachi ke kamre ka light jala hua dikhta Hai.
Neha(man)-itne raat ko maa aur papa ke kamre ka bulb kyon jala hua hai. Mujhe jakar dekhna Chahiye.
Jaise-Jaise Neha kamre Ki Taraf jati hai kamre Ke andar Se kuchh awaaz sunai de rahi thi.
Jaise hi Neha kamre ke bahar pahunchi use kamre ke andar ki awaaz bahut acchi Tarah Se sunai dene lagi.
Jise sunkar Neha ke pair kapne hage aur vah diwal Ka Sahara lekar andar ki bato ko sunane lagi
(Are aap log kuchh galat mat samajh lijiye andar aisa vaisa kuchh Nahin ho raha hai jo aap samajh rahe hain)
Chaliye yah jante Hain Ki Neha Ne aisa kya suna.
Jaise hi Neha kamre ke bahar pahunchi to usne suna
" Tum thoda dhire Nahin bol sakti agar Kisi Ne sun liya to aaj ke bad tum yah bad Kabhi Nahin bologi ki Neha hamari beti Nahin Hai"
Jaise hi Neha ke kanoon mein yah baat pahunchi Uske to hosh in kho Gaye
Yah baat Chacha Ne Kahi thi chaliye ab andar ki baton ko sunte Hain
Chachi-main tumhen fir kha rahi hun use hamare business me involve nahin karna hai.
Chacha-are maine isiliye to use business management ka course karne ke liye kaha hai.
Chachi-bachpan mein jab bhai sahab ne use hamen diya tha. Tab Se humne use apni bacchi Ki Tarah Pala hai.
Lekin main usse Apne bacchon ka hak Nahin Lene dungi. Mai use apne business me Nahin aane dungi.
Chacha-jo bhi Karna hai karo lekin Babu ji ko iske bare mein kuchh pata nahin chalna chahie Nahin to bahut anarth ho jaega
Chachi-kya ho jaega kuchh Nahin hoga jyada Se jyada hamesha Ghar se chale jaenge hamara bhi apna business hai ham bhi sukhi se rah sakte hai.
Chacha-tumhen abhi kuchh Nahin pata hai hamara business empire bahut bada hai aur abhi mujhe to apne business ke bare mein Puri jankari bhi Nahin Hai. Sara kam babuji dekhte hain. Aur pata nahin Har mahine ve kahan chale jaate Hain.
Idhar bahar to Neha Ki duniya Hi ujar chuki thi.
Vah Apne kamre ko acchi Tarah Se band kar foot foot kar Rone lagi.
Aisa hi hota hai jab insan ka samna sacchai Se hota Hai aur aaj Neha ko bhi vahi halat se gujar na pad raha tha.
Kuchh Dino Tak vah bahut gumsum rahi. Lekin Uske baad vah normal ho gai.
Aur apne business management ke course ko karne Delhi Chali gai.
Delhi mein hi usne Apne course ko complete Kiya aur result Ka intezar karne lagi.
Tabhi ek din usse Ghar Se call hai aur yah bataya Gaya ki Uske dadaji Ka mrutyu ho Gaya hai. Kya khabar ko sunte Hain Neha fauran Mumbai ke liye nikal Gaye.
Vahi dusri taraf
Raj bhi Mumbai ke liye nikal chuka tha.
Usne sabse pahle airport se pata Kiya ki Mumbai jane ke liye koi plane hai ya nahin.
Lekin mausam kharab hone ke Karan Sare plane cancel ho gaye the.
Tab Raj by road Mumbai jane Ka faisla Kiya.
Yah vahi samay tha jab Viraj panch tatva ko control kar.
Apne chakra ko jagrit karne ke liye dhyan mudra mein baitha tha.
Jaise-Jaise samay bit raha tha vaise-vaise Viraj ke Charo Taraf ek energy ka circle ban raha tha.
Aur achanak hi ek energy ball us circle se nikalkar bahar aa gai aur dekhte hi dekhte vah gayab ho gai.
In hero side
Mujhe Car chalana aata tha isliye mai Apne Car Se Mumbai ki taraf nikal para (are mujhe dada ji ne car khareed kar di thi)
Jaise hi main Haridwar se bahar nikala to mujhe aisa laga ki koi bahut hi powerful energy mujhse takra gayi Hai.
Kuchh hi palo mai Haridwar me tha.
Jab meri aankh khuli tab maine apne aap ko aashram ke hi ek hospital me paya.
Aap logon Ne bilkul sahi socha
Vah powerful energy Viraj andar Se nikala energy ball Hi tha
Abhi ke liye itna hi
Next update me padhenge
Papa ka Mumbai aana
Neha aur Raj ki pahli mulakat
ke liye itna hi
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