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Post by kabir on Jan 28, 2019 23:30:44 GMT 5.5
bhai , aap ka bahat bahat shukriya ki apne muje Adventure of karma`s part 1 ka sara update mera e-mail send kiya . all the best . take care bhai …..
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Post by Chetan on Jan 28, 2019 23:49:16 GMT 5.5
Bhai koi muje bhi "Adventure of Karma's ki part1 send karo na please.... Email id-chetanmundada03@gmail.com
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 29, 2019 0:02:46 GMT 5.5
UPDATE-8
Adventure of karma's(world beyond the world) part 2 me aab tak hum logo ne dekha kaise Lelina ; Sina aur Yamina tino jungle ki RUH ki madat se karma k pass pauch jati hai jungle adventure k liye.
Aab aage....... Is jungle adventure par aab mere saat meri dono jaan meri pyari beti aur aab jungle ki RUH bi hai. AAb aage Yamina : dady jaldi chalo na mai aab aur intazar nahi kar sakti hu is adventure k liye. mai haa beta chalte hai pahle is jungle k bare me kuch pata ko karle aur hamara dusman kaun kaun hai unki powers kya hai vo kitne hai aur sabse main baat hai vo is samay hai kaha is jungle me q maharani g. Jungle k RUH karma g mera nam Mohani hai. Aap sab mujse Mohani hi bolo .mai thik hai mahani g. Yamina :Dady aap k pass kitna sara power hai jaldi pata kar lo na dady. jab maine uski tataf dekha to kitna masum aur cute lag rahi thi aur us samay uske chere pe ek smile thi. Us smile k piche kya khurpat chal raha tha ye to sifr mujse hi pata tha. Haa meri pyari gudiya bus aabhi pata lagata hu.
Mai aabi aapna search magic use karne vala hi tha tabhi mohini bolti hai is jungle me kisi bi sadharan mage (jadugar) ka magic kam nahi karta . mai aabi kuch bolta usse pahle meri dono jaan ne suru kar diya meri tarif karna . Lelina,sina : Mohini se aap sayad aabi inke bare me kuch bi nahi janti nahi to aab kuch nahi bolti. Main jaan rahne do na iss sabki kya jarurat hai. dono nhai iski jarurat hai. yamina haa dad iski jarurat hai mon sai bol rahi hai sab ko pata hona cha hiye aap koun hai is pure magical world me aap k samne koi bi ek minute bi nahi tik sakta hai.
Phir kya meri dono jaan suru ho gai undono k saat de rahi thi meri gudiya jaise ki mai DRAGON KING HU,MERE PASS DRAGON SOWARD HAI;MERE PASS WHITE AND BLACK SPIRIT KING HAI ,JIN AUR WHITE LIGHT KI POWER HAI aur mai lagbhag is world ka sab magic aata hai etc etc..
Itna saab bolne k baad tino sant ho jati hai. Mohini k face pe ek smile aa jati hai ye sab kuch sun k. Mohini kya sab such hai tino ek saat bilkul such hai. Mai tum tino bi kitna badha chada k bolti ho . tabhi tino ek saat ek baar phir jo such hai vahi to hamne bola. mai thik hai baba thik hai. Mohini jo humari kab se bate sun rahi thi vobi bol padti hai aab mujse bi lagta hai aap sabhi logo k madat se mai aapne is jungle k ashtitva ko jurir bata lungi.Mai haa bilkul aisa hi hoga mohini g.Aab Mohin ig k chere pe pahle jaisi udasi nahi thi aab unke face pe bi ek cute si smile thi.kuch is tarah..
Maine socha q na mai ek baar mai aapna search maguc use karleta hau. maine aapne aankhe band ki aur man me search isi k saat mere body se tarange nikalne lage un maya bi adamkhor jivo ko pure jungle me search karne lagi. karab 5 min se jada time ho gaya tha mere search tarongo ko gaye huye aabhi tak muje reply nahi mila tha. Uske thik 1min k baad jo mere saat hua sabhi ka muh khula ka khula rah gaya... to be continued friend remainig update morning me ..mere saat aisa kya hua janne k liye mere story padte raho aur aapne valuable comment dena na bhule good night friends
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Post by Trial_Baba on Jan 29, 2019 0:27:26 GMT 5.5
Nice bhai
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Post by govindsonic on Jan 29, 2019 1:03:55 GMT 5.5
Sandarrrr updates bhai
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Post by mahiirathore on Jan 29, 2019 9:07:46 GMT 5.5
1st part ka pdf Upload kro Bhaii Ham bhii second part m Judd ske
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 29, 2019 9:26:06 GMT 5.5
Adventure of karmas(world beyond the world) Part 1 and karma k sare update ek new thread me mil Jaye ga...thank you everyone to give your precious comment
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Post by krsuraj159 on Jan 29, 2019 13:00:37 GMT 5.5
Superb update
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Post by vickey1211 on Jan 29, 2019 14:11:34 GMT 5.5
Nice start h bhai Kaafi acchi story thi ye Last ke 3 update bola tumne likhne h bhai Vo kaafi mast the ... Bas are hi likhte rho
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Post by Ak47 on Jan 29, 2019 15:04:43 GMT 5.5
Bhai khani acchi like rahe ho . Pichla update jhan se khatm hua ussue save li kha karo. Ye mat bataya karo ki. pichle update mai kya hua tha.
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