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Post by kabir on Jan 29, 2019 15:23:16 GMT 5.5
Amazing update hai bhai . story bahat hi baria hai . aap mast update likh rahe ho bhai . Keep continue . we are with you bhai . all the best . take care bhai …..
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Post by kabir on Jan 29, 2019 15:24:18 GMT 5.5
we will wait for next update bhai ...
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Post by king519king on Jan 29, 2019 17:13:53 GMT 5.5
Bhai front thoda bada Karen do aur update bhi bara diya karo bhai
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Post by Trial_Baba on Jan 29, 2019 19:09:02 GMT 5.5
Waiting for next update bhai
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 29, 2019 23:00:23 GMT 5.5
new update bus kuch hi minto me friends..
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 29, 2019 23:02:44 GMT 5.5
UPDATE-9
Karma : mujhe apana search magic use kiye hue kareeb 5 min ho gaya tha lekin abhee tak meree search magic kee tarange muj tak nahi aaee. Ab to mujhe bee lagne laga lagta hai is jungle me mera search magic kaam nahin karega monark aur husna kee tarah . Lagta hai is jungle me koee to hai jo nahi chaahata hum is jungle k rahasy ko solve kare. Pahelee baar aab ja ke mere face pe bi smile aa gaya. Abhee mai apne soch me duba tha mere sat vo ho gaya jiska maine kabhi sapne me bi kalpana nahin kiya tha aur na hi vaha khade logo ne. Darasal baat ye hai ki search magic use karne ke baad bee kuch reply nahi mila tha mujhe kaaphee samay tak . Maine socha chalo ab is jungle ke safar me aage badhana cha hiye aur is jungle ke bare me sari ki sari jankari mohini g se leleta hu abhi mai ye hee soch raha tha. Tabhi achanak pata nahin kaha se meri search magic kee sari ki sari tarange mere body me pravaish karne lagi . Lekin ye kya jaise jaise search magic ki tarange mere body me pravaish karne lagi muje both adhik peeda hone laga saath hi vo both hi adhik martra me thi aur inke saath kisi ki both powerfull power bi add thi jiske mujse aisas to hogaya tha lekin tab tak both der ho chuki thi mai jaha khada tha vaha se 10kadam door gira pada tha aur mere muh se ek bath hi dard nak cheekh nikli thi. Mere is cheekh se pura ka pura jungle kaap gaya tha.
Ye sab kuch itna jaldi hua ki kisi ko kuch samaj me hi nahi aaya . Meri cheekh sunte hi sab k sab mere pass aagye. Meri aisi halat dekh k sabhi ka muh khulla ka khulla rah gaya .meri halat both buri ho gai thi ek to mai hil bi nahi pa raha tha dusri sab se badi problem mere samne ye tha ki meri body black hona suru ho gaya tha jiske karan meri pida badte hi ja rahi thi. Ye sab sah pana kisi aam insan k bas me nahi tha .Mere jagah koi aur hota aat tak to uska ram nam satya ho hi jata.Mere aisi halat dekh k meri dono jaan aur meri gudiya tino k aankho me lagatar ganga jamuna bah rahi thi aur ch k bi kuch nahi kar pa raha .
Mohini : abhi bi kisi gahri soch me doobi thi. Main ne jor se mohini g kuch to karo apni dard bhai awaj me . meri awaj sun k meri dono jaan aur gudiya plzz mohini g kuch karo na . Yamina plzz mere dady koi koi to bacha lo vo lagatar roye ja rahi thi. Mohini aab aapne hosh me aagai thi. Usne bina samy gayaye aapne magic se ek green rays mere body pe dalti hai uski k saat mere pure body ek ass pass ek green rays ka kavach jaisa aa jata hai. Iske baad bi mere dard kam nahi hua tha sirf meri body black hona ruk gaya tha. Kuch hi minto me meri 70%body black hogay tha. Maine mohini g ye sab kya tha. Mohini aabhi aap kuch mat pucho jo mai bol rahi vahi karo nahi to aap bach nahi sake ge vaha khade sabhi k sabhi kya ye kaise ho sakta hai.sabhi log kabhi mujse kabhi mohini ko dekh rahe the.
Karma: mohini g ye kya tha aur to aur meri rocovery magic bi kam nahi kar raha hai. Mohini karma g hamre pass sirf 10 min hi hai is black poison ko nikalne k liye aap k body se mera kavach isse jada isko rok nahi sakta.Is black poison ne aapki 70% persent se jada power consume kar chuka hai.isiliye aap ka recovery magic kam nahi kare ga .Ye BLACK SHADOW ka black poison magic hai. Aap bi both powerfull hai nahi to aap ke jagah koi aur hota usko to kuch pucne ka bi sam nahi milta. Mai vo sab baad me baat karenge.pahle mujse thik to karo mohini g.
Mohini : mai aap ko thik nahi kar sakti hu.ye sunte hi sab k sab ek sath kya.is samay sabhi ka muh khulla tha.monark ,husna,crimson,simbha in logo ne bi kabhi aisa magic nahi suna tha nahi kabhi dekha tha. Maine kya tum logo ko isbare me kuch patahai sab ek sath nahi malik sab ek sath. Malik humne aapne pure jivan me aisa magic nahi dekha hai.mai mohini g kya hum log aab kuch bi nahi kar sakte hai. Mohini ha ek rasta to hai lekin…..
Sab k sab ek sath kya ek spell(mantra) hai mere pass lekin aaj tak us spell ko koi bi use nahi kar paya hai.aap try kar sakte karma g.mai haa mai taiyar hu.mohini karma g maine ek baat to bata hi nahi .vo ky hai jaldi karo mauje is dard se chutkara pana hai. Agar ye spell aap pe kam nahi kiya to ye hi aap ko khtam bi kar dega.Ek bar phir sab ek sath kya us sab k sath mai bi kya mera bi khulla rah gaya.
Karma : mai mohini g meri halat to saap(snake) aur chachunar jaise ho gai hai .kha liye marjye nikal diya to andha.spell kam kiya to live nahi to dead.mohini haa karma g ye spell kam kare ga tabhi aap ko is black poison se mukti mili g sath hi sath aap ko us spell aisa both kuch mile ga jo aapne kabhi sapne me bi nahi soch hoga.hamari baat aabhi puri bi nahai hui thi meri gudiya dady aap is spell ka use mat karna aagar aap ko kuch ho gaya tho mai aap ke bina nahi rah sakti ye sab bolti bolti volagatar ro rahi thi.meri dono jaan to lagatar ro hi rahi thi un dono k muh se sabd hi nahi nikal raha tha.q ki aaj tak kabhi bi meri aisi halat nahi hue thi.Simbha malik aap jo bi karna soch samj k karna agar aap ko kuch hogaya to hum sab ek bar phir se anath ho jayege.crimson ha malik aap ko kuch ho gaya to vaise bi ye duniya kuch hi salo me tabah ho jaye ga dungeon k vaje se.
Karma : ye sab sunkar to ek baar mujse bi laga ki kahi mujse kuch ho gaya to….mere samne meri sari jaan un sab k sath bitaye pal sab kuch ek film ki tarh chal raha tha . abhi mai apne soch me doba hi tha achanak mere man me ek awaj gung rahi putra putra aapne upar bharosa rakho tumhe aabhi kuch nahi ho sakta hai mera asirvad tum hare sat hi hai. Awaj band hote hi mai aapne hosh me aa gaya .ye awaj kiski hai aap sab ko pata hi hoga.aab mujse vishwas ho gaya tha aab mujse kuch bi nahi ho ga.mai mahol ko halka karte huye mujse kuch bi nahi hoga tum sab log chinta mat karo mare pass tum sab ki pyar ki takat hai.pyar ki takat k aage har takat ko sukna padta hai.
Mohini jo aab tak khamosh vo bi bol padti hai mujse bi vishwas hai karma g kuch nahi ho ga.mai haa kuch bi nahi hoga.lekin un tino par to mere kisi baat ka asar hi nahi pad raha tha.maine mohini se aab hame jada der nahi karna cha hiye hamre pass jada samay bi nahi rah gaya hai. Mohini haa karma g uske baad mohini mere pass aati kahti hai aap pe pass both kam power rah gaya hai .mere spell batane k baad spell k time aap k aapne sari power use karni pade ge.mai thik hai.Mohini aa k mere kan me vo spell batati vo spell both hi jada ajeeb tha aisa lag raha jaise is panet hi na ho.maine bi us samay jada nahi soch.mujhe bi us spell ka short form mil gaya itna ajeeb hone k baad bi . aisa lag raha tha jaise ye sirf mere liye hi bana ho.
Karma : aab mai is spell ko use karne k liye ready tha aur mujse kitna aur kaun se power use karna hai ye sab kuch mujhe pata chal gaya us spell k read karne kaise ye mai bi samaj nahi paya tha.maine both joor se sab sant ho jao meri madar karo.meri awaj sun kar sab shant ho k mujse hi dekhne lage.mai aabhi bi jameen pe hi pada tha.mai jaisa mai bolunga vaisa hi aap logo ko karna koi bi aabhi kuch nahi puche ga.
Sab ek haa me mundi hilatehai.sabse pahle mai gate open karta jisme me black and white dragon ko aapne pass bulata jungle me turant hi dono aa jate hai.Husna mere andar aa jao turant husna mere andar aajati hai .crimson aapni puri power mere body me use karo husna tum bi dono ek g malik.
Sina------air magic use karna
Lelina----earth magic use karna
Yamina--water magic use karna
Mohini g-space magic use karna
White dragon—tum fire use karna.monark aur black dragon –tum dono ko aapna dark magic use karna hai.simbha tum is dragon talvar k sath aabhi meri body me parvesh karo.isi k sath meri body me dragon soward aajati aab meri body phir bi chamkne lagi sath hi meri body k ass pas white rays ki kavach aagaya tha.main jaise hi tum logo ko aapne hath se ishra karunga tum sab ko ek aapni powers use karna hai. Mujse sift ek hi chance mile ga. Sab es sath hum tyar hai.
Maine spell bolo man me regeneration aapna hath uppar kar diya sabhi ek sath aapni powers meri body ke tarf kar diya tha .is samay kisi ko bi kuxh nahi dikhi de raha tha.dikh raha tha to sirf light mere charo taraf aur sab k man me ek asha thi mai fir se pahle jaisa thik ho jau.kuch hi samay me meri body me achanak changes honi lagi pahle to both tej dard hua aisa laga ki kisi ne meri atma hi mere sarir se nikal diya .phir kuch samy to mujse kuch maisus hi nahi hua .uske baad mai behos ho gaya….
To be continued….
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 29, 2019 23:23:17 GMT 5.5
Friend new update post kar Diya hai story ki size bi increase kar Diya hai font size bi increase kar Diya....
Story ki length aur increase karna hai ki nahi frends batana... story me aur change chai Bo bi batadena
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Post by sam749 on Jan 29, 2019 23:26:07 GMT 5.5
Mast update hai bhai
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Post by Dark_Shadow.... on Jan 29, 2019 23:28:35 GMT 5.5
Thanks brother
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Post by krsuraj159 on Jan 29, 2019 23:45:08 GMT 5.5
Awesome update
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