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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:06:25 GMT 5.5
New story update 18
Jab wo bapas aya to kya lag raha tha suit but tie me dekh ke lag hi nahi raha tha uski umer 18 sal hai lag raha tha 25 sal ka koi executive hai
kya glow tha chehre ka sab muh khole usse dekh rahe the
Veer : aise kya dekh rahe hai achhe nahi hai kya kapde ya mujhpe achhe nahi lag raha hai
Dadi : kisiki najar na lage mere anokhe pote ko or uth me veer ke mathe pe kiss kia
Shalini : beta tu to kamal ka lag raha hai itne achhe to tere pitaji bhi nahi lage kabhi
Vikram : ha lagto raha hai mera beta jo hai
Rubi neha to muh khole veer ko dekh rahi thi veer isse jhep jata hai or baith jata hai naste me
Rubi neha apasme :
Neha : di guddu ko akela chodna achha rahega kya dekho na kitna sundar handsome lag raha hai kahi office ki ladkiya usko ….
Rubi : aisa kuch nahi hoga mujhe guddu pe varosa hai wo aisehi nahi fasega wo ham sab se jada samajhdar hai bas varosa rakh
Neha : thik hai di
Ye bate kisiko sunai deta ho ya nahi par veer ko saf saf sunai de raha tha or veer sochne laga
Veer : ab inko kaise samjhao yeto lagta hai mujhko gharse bahar bhi nahi jane de gi jald hi kuch karna padega inse bat karni padegi
Fir nasta khatam hua or veer or uske dad eksath veer ki gadi me baith gaye
veer drive karta hai or uske papa ki gadi age age driver chala raha tha
or unke age or piche gurds ki gadi total 4 gadi chal padi office
Vikram ka office delhi ke sanse highfi elaqe me tha dono side sab lambi lambi building the
aise hi kuch dur jake ek sabse lambi building ke samne car ruki watch man ne gate khola sabhi chal pade building ke ander
building ka jada se jada bahari hissa sise ki khidki se cover thi sab
ek bada sa sitting area se gujar dono vikram or veer or gurds lift me enter huye
lift chal padi top floor ki or ye lift sirf vikram ke liye hi banayi gayi thi jo sidha top floor pe jati ha
jaha vikram ka office tha tabhi lift ka gate khula or gurd ofice ke gate ke bahar hi ruk gaye
vikram or veer enter karte hai pura floor chote chote kebin bane huye the sishe ke dono usko croos kar rahe the
sabhi khade ho ke vikram ko wish kar rahe the vikram age ja apne kebin ke door ke pass ruk gaya
fir sab staff ki or mudke
Vikram : hello everyone apsab ko aj mai is company ke real woner se milane wala hu
wo hai mera ek louta beta danveer singh ye raha apsab ka boss danveer singh
Sabhi ne danveer ko wish kiya office ki ladkiya to uspe fida hi ho gayi
Fir vikram or veer apne Kevin me enter karte hai
Kebin samne se pura white or piche pura sishe se bana hua tha jisse hahar pura city dekhi ja sakti thi
Dewaro par tarah tarah ke pentings lage huye the
vikram me chair ke sath ek our chair laga hua tha vikarm ne veer ko us chair pe baithata or khud pasme baith gaya
Vikram : to beta kaisa laga tumhe tumhara office
Veer: sandar jabardast lajawab
Vikram : beta to fir kabhi kabhi office bhi ajana isse tumhari pakad office pe badh jayegi or kam ka bhi pata rahega
Ab batao kitne din baki hai collage start hone me
Veer : 15 din baki hai collage start hone mai
Vikram : to kya karoge 15 din koi plan banaya ya nahi
Veer : kaha papa kya plan banayu kuch samajh nahi araha
Vikram : ek kam karo tumko bachpan se ghumne firne nahi mila hai 12 din ka ek tour kar lo
ab ye batao india ka tour karna hai ya kahi bahar jana hai out of country
Veer : papa mere hisab se pehle apna desh dekhna chahiye
Vikram : sahi kaha to ek kam karo ajj sabke sath milke shoping karlo or chal pado jaha bhi jana hai
mujhe sirf inform kar dena baki tum khud bokking kar lo kiu ki puri tour tum log apne hisab se karo koi rok tok nahi or apni behno ka khayal rakhna
Veer : khusi se ji thik hai papa
Vikram: jao abb yaha tumhara koi kaam nahi shoping karo or tour decide karo
Veer : thanks papa bye
Ye kehke veer chal pada collage apni behno ko lene
Veer phone nikal ta hai or call karta hai
Call uthane ke bad
Veer : di app busy ho kya
Rubi : nahi guddu free hu koi clss nahi hai
Veer : di good news hai
Rubi : kya good news
Veer : ham tour pe ja rahe hai abhi dad ne tour pe jane ke liye kaha jab tak collage suru na ho jaye To kya kahti ho chalogi
Rubi : ha guddu chalungi mai neha ko leke abhi ayi ghar
Veer : uski jarurat nahi hogi mai collage araha hu app dono ko pick karne
Rubi : ha jaldi ajao
Fir call cut ho jata hai
Fir veer biswa ko call karta hai
Call uthane ke bad
Biswa: ha bhai kaise yaad kiya
Veer: bhai tum or ashish jaldi se ready ho jao ham ko india tour pe jana hai
Biswa: kya india tour ye achanak or itni jaldi kaise ready ho jao
Veer : haste huye bhai abhi nahi kal niklenge abhi sirf reafy ho ke bahar aja tour ka decide karna hai kaha se suru karni hai kaha khatam karni hai ok
Biswa : chal thik hai mai ashish ko bata deta hu
Veer : chal bye mai abhi aya ok
Biswa : bye
Fir veer collage pahuch jata hai jaha dono behne veer ke liye gate pe hi khade the sath me gurds bhi the
Car me baithte huye neha
Neha : guddu mai bahut khus hu ye meri pehli trip hai wo bhi tumhare sath
Veer: mera bhi didi chalo planing karte hai or jo chije chahiye shoping karte hai
Fir veer gurds ko follow karne ko keh ke nikal jate hai hostel ki or
Hostel me
Asish : bhai kya hame jana chahiye
Biswa: bhai dekh agar ham ne mana kiya to hamary dosti ko sarminda karenge tu uski bate sunta to pata chalta wo kitna khus hai
trip ke nam se usne bahut hi tough jindagi gujari hai aaj mouka mila hai
or agar ham apne ego ke chalte usse mana karenge to ye uske nischal dosti ka apman hoga
or maine to apna pura jivan uske nam kar diya hai wo jo bolega mai manunga
Asish : tu sahi keh raha hai ham garib hai isliye usse dur rahe ye galat hai hame pura sath dena chahiye uska apna ego nahi lana chahiye
Biswa : jaldi se ready ho ke aa wo kabhi bhi asakta hai
Fir dono ready ho jate hai kuch hi der me veer ajata hai or call karke unko bahar bula leta hai
Sab gadi me baith jate hai veer piche chala jata hai apni behno ke pass asish driving seat samhal leta hai
Asish : bhai ye achanak trip ka plan
Veer : papa ne offer diya ke ho aao india tour pe
Asish : to abhi kaha jana hai
Veer : ak kam kar mall lele mall ke café me baith ke ham decide kar lenge kaha kaha jana hai
Asish : thik hai fir sabhi mall pahuch gaye
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hamza123
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:09:07 GMT 5.5
New story update 19
Mall ke café mai baith sabhi order karte hai
Veer : di app dono pehle decide karo kaha se suru kare
Rubi : mai kya bolu mujhe nahi pata kaha jana hai
Neha : mujhe pata hai kaha jana hai kiu na ham pehle Rajasthan chale
Veer : thik hai di ham hamari trip ki suruwat Rajasthan se karenge
Ab biswa tum batao kaha jana hai
Biswa : thik hai uske bad ham goa jayenge
Veer : do place to decide ho gayi ab bachi akhri to ye asish batayega
Hamare pass 12 din hai to jada se jada 3 jagah ya 4 jagah ja sakte hai trip enjoy kar sakte hai
Asish : nahi bhai akhri app batao kaha jana hai
Veer: thik hai to fir punjab chalte hai
Tabhi inki coffee agayi sabhi ne coffie pi
Veer : to ham jayenge kaise means travel ka jariya kya rakhe
Biswa : train sabse better rahega kiu ki ham trip pe ja rahe hai to
Najare ka maja lete huye jayenge
Veer : perfect yahi sahi rahe ga to mai papa ko inform kar deta hu
Chalo Rajasthan jane ke liye shopping karte hai
Fir sabhi shoping karte hai issi bich veer ne apna plan papa ko bata deta hai call pe
Fir sabhi lunch karte hai baharhi or sham ko biswa asish ko hostel chod ghar pahuch te hai tino
Ghar pe
Vikram a chuka tha apne room me tha tabhi shalini bolti hai
Shalini : apne unko trip pe kiu vej rahe hai abhi to mai ne mere bachhe ko thik se dekha bhi nahi or app usse fir bahar bhej rahe hai
Vikram : shalini hamare bachhe ne abhi thik se duniya nahi dekhi hai bachpan se usko kuch dekhne ka mouka hi nahi mila
fir collage suru ho gayi to fir padhai me bz ho jayega time nahi milega tumhi socho kya hame usko bandh ke rakh na chahiye
Shalini : ji app thik kahte hai
Rat ke khane pe
Papa : to beta complete ho gayi trip ki planing
Veer : ji papa
Papa: to kab nikal rahe ho
Veer : kal 10am ki train se nikal rahe hai najaro ka maja lete huye jayenge
Papa: thik hai agar koi bhi problem ho call kar dena 30 min me help kahuch jayegi
Veer : thanks papa uski sayad jarurat na pade
ma : thode udas swar me beta apni or apni behno ka khayal rakh na
Veer : ma app udas kiu hai app kaho to ham plan cancel kar dete hai
Ma: nahi mere bachhe tu ja trip pura kar uske bad mai tujhe kahi Jane nahi dungi
Veer : thik hai ma bas app smile karte raho
Fir santi se diner khattam hua aaj rat veer ko vahut kam karne the
Rat ko jab rubi or neha chale gaye apne room me veer sadhna me baith jata hai tabhi
Parshuram: mere bachhe samay agaya hai tumko ab apni saktio ka purn prayog karna hoga sirf ho rahe ghatnaye nahi honewale ko bhi rokne ki kosis karna hoga
Veer : gurudev mai bhi chahta hu magar mujhe mere pariwar se chupke ye karna padraha hai istarah mai khulke mera uddesya pura karne me adchan arahi hai
agar app ijjajat de to kya mai apne pariwar ko in sabse awgat kara du
Parshuram : tum thik kahte ho mere bachhe patiwar ka sath jaruri hai koi bhi youdh akela lada nahi ja sakta uske liye pariwar ka sath or ashirwad ki jarurat ho ti hai
tum sabko apne ekatha karo or unko sachhai batado
Veer : ji gurudev pranam
Gurudev ki agya pake veer utha or khada ho ke apni ankhe band karke fir hath jodta hai or apne mind se biswa or asish ko
Biswa or asish dono paking kar sone gaye the ke dono ke minde
Veer: Mere bhai mai veer bolraha hu
Dono chock ke edhar udhar dekhte hai fir apna waham man letne lage tabhi firse
Veer : ye koi waham nahi hai mere dosto
Biswa : veer bhai tum kaha ho tum kaha se bol raha hai mere bhai dara mat kaha chupa hai nikal
Asish : bhai tum kaha ho kya ye koi majak hai
Veer : mere dosto ye koi majak nahi hai mai tumse telepathy se bat kar raha hu
Tum dono taiyar ho jao mai araha hu abhi tumko lene kuchi palme biswa ke room me honga
Biswa : achha thik hai aa maine room lock kar rakhi hai tu chah ke bhi nahi a sakta
Veer : hahaha mujhe koi dewar darwaja nahi rock sakti bas mai arahu
Fir veer ne apni bahe failayi or chal pada biswa hostel ki or
Ashish hadbadata hua biswa ke room me agaya
Asish : bhai tu biswas nahi karega abhi maine veer ki awaj suni usne kaha wo yaha araha hai
Biswa : maine bhi suni usne kaha wo kabhi bhi a sakta hai
Tabhi
Beer unke room me enter karta hai full costume se sath
Dono dar jate hai
Biswa : tummm kon ho yaha kiu aye ho
Veer : apne dost ko vul gaye maine kahatha na mai arahu
Asish : kya ttttum veer ho
Tabhi veer apna naqab gayab karta hai dono veer ko dekh khus ho jate hai firbhi darte darte veer ko chute hai
Veer : kya tum donoko apne dost se dar lagraha hai
Biswa veer ke gale lag nahi mere bhi mujhe malum tha tum koi amm insan nahi ho
Asish : tumne to hamko dara hi diya tha
Veer : ye sab chodo chalo ghar chalte hai mai chat pe hu tum dono bhi saman leke ajao
Fir veer bina unki bat sune tezise chat pe chala gaya
Edhar dono jaldi jaldi apna saman uthaya or door lock karke chal pade chat pe
Veer : agaye dono aao mera hath pakdo
Donone apna apna saman pith pe jhula liya or pakar liya veer ka hath
Fir veer ne dhire dhire unke sath hawame udna suru kiya dono hairani se kabhi niche kabhi veer ko dekh rahe the
khuchi der me veer dono ko leke apne chat pe land kiya veer ne unko dhire dhire laya tha kiu ki wo
Veer ki tarha speed ko jhel nahi pati
Veer ne turant khud ko normal kiya
Biswa bolne hi wala tha ke veer bol pada
Veer : mujhe malum hai tumhare man me bahut sare swal hai un sabhi sawalo ka jawab dunga bas thoda intezar karo
Chalo niche chalte hai
Fir dono bina kuch bole veer ke piche chal pade veer ne dono ko niche sitting me baithaya
Sabko bulane sabke room me chal pada
Nock nock nock
Door khula
Papa : beta veer kya hua itni rat ko koi kaam tha
Veer : papa app ma ke sath sitting me aiye mujhe app sabhi ko kuch batana hai
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:11:27 GMT 5.5
New story update 20
Fir veer bina ruke dadi ko bhi bulata hai fir dono behno ko
Sabhi sitting me baithe the or veer unke samne baitha tha
Papa : beta kya batana chahte ho
tumne sabko itni rat me yaha bula liya yahi nahi biswa or ashish ko bhi hostel se yaha le aye or inko laye kaise
Veer : papa apne news me wo naqabposh ko dekha hai na
Papa : ha dekha hai kamal ka hai kitni power hai usme
Veer : wo naqab posh mai hu
Papa : kya tum kaise
Shalini : beta tum kaise ho sakte ho tum to mere bete ho
Veer : ha ma mai apka beta hu par mujhme devtao ki di hui sakti hai
Rubi neha : hame malum hai mera guddu hi wo naqabposh hero hai
Dadi : guruji ne kaha tha na ye anokha hai tabhi to hamko isko vejna pada siksha ke liye pure 6 sal
Shalini : mera beta kya ye sab majak hai
Veer : muskura kar nahi ma ye sab majak nahi hai
Papa: tumhare ander sakti thi to ham ko dikhi ku nahi
Tum ko 12 sal tak hamne ek palke liye bhi dur nahi kiya
Veer : kiu ki janm ke time me jab mujhme devtao ne sakti di to us sakti jab tak mai 18 ka na ho jayu band ke rakha tha
gurudev ne
Biswa: koi devto ki sakti kaise bandh sakta hai
Veer : mere gurudev bandh sakte hai
Asish : kon hai wo gurudev jin me itni sakti hai ki wo devtao ki sakti bandh sake
Veer : muskura kar mere gurudev koi amm insan nahi swam vagwan parshuram hai guruo ke guru yodhao ka yodha vagwan Vishnu ke avtar parshuram jo amar hai
devtao ke agrah pe unhone mujhe siksha di hai take mai burai ko khatam kar acchai ko faila saku
Sabhi veer ki bat sun stabdh rah gaye
Tabhi veer khada ho gaya or apni akhe band kar hath jodta hai
Or mind se
Veer : gurudev maine apne pariwar ko sab bata diya hai jo batani chahiye thi kripya kar hame ekbar darshan de
Tabhi veer ke pass roshni chamakne lagi or eka ek us roshni se ek bakti nikle jinke mukhpe mano hajao surya ka tez ho
akmome prem or karuna yodhaoo ke saman saririk banawat uspe swet bastra
Sabhi ankhe fade unhe dekh rahe the tabhi veer ne apni ankhe kholi
Or ghutno ke bal hath jodke jhuk ke pair chuye or kaha
Veer : pranam gurudev dhanyabad jo mere agrah par app yaha aye
Fir sabhi veer ke bhati parshuram ke charan chuye
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Parshuram : utho mere bachho tum sab ko veer ka sath dene ke liye chuna gaya hai
veer me asimit sakti hai or wo iska istemal achhayi ke liye kar raha hai magar tum sab ke sath ke bina veer ka udesya pura nahi ho sakta
jab tak yodha ko uske pariwar ka sath nahi milta wo yodha kabhi nahi jeet sakta jaise mahavarat me
duryadhan ka sath uske pariwar ne man se nahi diya to usko youdh me har mili
aisehi apsab ka sath veer ke liye jaruri hai
tabhi ye kalyug se burai ko mita sakega
Pura pariwar : ham veer ka pura sath denge
Parshuram : khush raho jite raho mere bachho firse roshni chamki or parshuram gayab ho gaye
Papa : aaj mai kitna khus hu mere bachhe mera jivan dhanya ho gaya
Kisi mamuli insan ko aise swayam vagwan ke darshan kabhi nahi milta
Tum ne to hame dhanya kar diya
Ma : meri kokh dhanya ho gayi aise bete ko pake mere bahhe
Rubi neha vag ke veer ke gale lag gayi or chipak ke khadi ho gayi or boli
Rubi neha : we proud of you mere guddu
Biswa : tumne hame dost banake hamara jivan dhanya kar diya
Asish : bhai abb ham chahe jo ho jaye tumhare sath hi jiyenge or tumhare pehle marenge
Veer: are are aisi koi bat nahi ye sab batane ke piche mera bas yehi maksad hai ki mujhe apne pariwar or disto ka sath or asirwad mil sake
kiu ki ab agar mere ane jane pe kisiko airaj ho sakta hai to sirf mere ma papa behne or tum dono ko to ye sab batake mai free hu
taki mai agar kabhi gayab rahu to koi pareshan na ho
Rubi neha : guddu hame ekbar apna costume or naqab dekhao
Veer bas itni si bat sirf dikhayunga nahi apko asman ki sair karayunga agar meri powers meri behno ke kam na ayi to kiske kam ayegi
fir veer ne bahe failayi thabi veer ke body pe costume gayi par vee ne naqab nahi pehna
Papa : ye kapde pe ye jo nishaniya bani hai inka kya matlab hai beta
Veer : papa ye sab panch tatwa ki nisani hai
Ye kapda jo asman ki tarah blue hai
ye akash tatwa ki nishani hai
Ye mere dono hatho pe do agg ke lapte bane hai ye agni tatwa ki nishani hai
Mere pith pe jo lehre bani hai wo jal tatwa ki nishani hai
Mere shine me swastik ka nishan hai ye dharti tatwa ki nishni hai
Or mere pairo me jo jute hai wo bayu tatwa ki nishani hai
Ye sabhi panchwa tatwa ki nishani hai
Sabhi veer ki bate bade gour se sun rahe the kisine use bich me nahi toka
Veer chalo di mera hath pakdo dono ne veer ka hatb pakad kiya
or veer ne khud ko jamin se bas kuch fit uper uthaya ke dhire dhire chat ki or ud pada dono bahne mare darke veer se chipak gayi
Rubi : guddu dhire guddu guddu
Neha : guddu guddu
Veer : kiu didi dar lag raha hai dekho to sahi uper se sahar kaisa dikhta hai
Dono behne jab niche dekhti hai to dono asman me kam se kam 500 miter uper the
niche pura sahar dikh raha tha building bhi jaise unse choti ho aisa lag raha tha tino kuch der wohi rehte hai fir chal padte hai inche
veer jab ghar pahucha sabhi chat pe the
Veer : ab app sab aram kare papa apvi chaliye rat bahut ho gayi hai
Sabne veer ko bari bari chuma or chal pade niche
Veer : didi app dono ko bhi so jana chahiye warna kal late uthogi
Or bhai tum dono chalo mere room me wohi so jana
Biswa or asish : thik hai bhai
Fir sabhi apne apne room me agaye
Veer room :
Biswa : bhai tumko ye saktiya kiu di gayi koi reason to hoga
Veer : hai to sahi mera janm ek shubh ghadi me hua hai isiliye in saktio ko kewal mai hi dharan kar sakta hu mere liye bhi asan nahi tha inko sambhal na
iske liye gurudev ne 6 salo tak kathod traning di thi or mujhko apni kundlini bhi jagrit karni padi
Asish : ye kundlini kya hoti hai
Veer : hamare sarir me sat aise chakra hai jisse hamara sarir niyantrit hote hai jisse ki tum apne sarir ko kabu kar sakte ho
Normal insan unko istemal nahi kar pata hai issikiye kabhi unka sarir bimar pad jata hai
agar koi apni kundlini jagrit kar leta hai to wo apna jisam khud thik kar sakta hai jaise yug se sarir swast hota hai ye yug ka antim charan hai
Asish : kya ham bhi kar sakte hai
Veer : ak amm insan ko is bidhi ko karne me 100 sal se bhi adhik lag jata hai issiliye koi isko kar nahi pata
kiu ki 100 sal se uper sayad hi koi jinda rahta hai jo ye karleta hai usse ham sidh purush kehte hai
Kabhi kabhi sidh purus milte hai pehle ke yug me bahut se rishi muni ne apna jivan kundlini jagrit karne me laga di thi or jo wo kar paye wohi bangaye sidh purush
Bhai abb bahut rat ho gayi hai hame subha jaldi uthna bhi hai
Dono : thik hai so te hai
Fir dono so jate hai
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:13:05 GMT 5.5
New story update 21
Agli shubah
Veer sabse pehle uth jata hai fresh ho sadhna me baith jata hai room me
Kuchh hi der me dono biswa or asish uth jate hai or dekhte hai veer sadhna me lin hai
dono baith ke veer ko ghur ne lagte hai
Tabhi veer ki awaj ati hai dono ki mind me
Veer: mujhe ghurna chodo or jao fresh ho jao
Dono veer ko dekh rahe the uske ankh to band the
Biswa muskurate huye chala gaya bathroom fresh hone
Buswa ke bad asish bhi fresh ho gaya tab ja kar veer sadhna se utha
or chal pada fresh hone fresh joke taiyar ho ke bahar ake behno ke room me chala gaya jaha dono taiyar thi
Veer : didi jaldi se niche ajao nahi to late ho jayega train ke liye
Rubi neha : bas abhi ate hai tum chalo
Fir veer niche chala jata hai jaha breakfast lag chuka tha
veer bhi sabko good morning wish karke baith jata hai
Rubi neha bhi ajati hai fir nasta karte hai is wakt 9 baj chuke the station jane me 15 min lagta
Veer ne apne mammy papa ke pair chuye dadi ke pair chuye
Aisehi sabhi ne unka asirwad liya or car me baith ke chal pade
Sabhi sahi time pe train me baith gaye veer ne first class ac cabin book kiya tha do
ek biswa or asish ke liye ek behno or khud ke liye
sabhi apne apne kebin me saman rakh veer ke kebin me gappe ladane lage
Veer : to dosto hamary trip suru ho gayi
Biswa : ha hame Rajasthan pahuch ne me shubha ho jayegi to abhi kya kare
Asish : kiu na veer hame bataye ke wo kya kya kar sakta hai
Veer: pehli bat mai apna gungun nahi karta saktio ke sath badi jimmedari bhi ati hai is liye tum sab mere saktio ke bare me kisi public place me bat nahi karoge
Asish : thik hai ham samajh gaye
Tabhi veer ke samne manjar ghum gaya
Veer turant khada hua or apne hath jode ankhe band karke manjar dekhne laga
Issi train ke ek boggi me 5 atankbadi AK47 liye pure ek bogi ko hosteg bana liya hai
Sabhi veer ko dekhne lage ke achhanak kya hua
Veer ne hath failaya or costume agaya veer bina kuch bole bijli ke tezise compartment se nikal atankbadi bale bogi me pahucha
Do atank badi dono gate pe ak 47 liye khade the
veer ne unko kik mar diya ek ka banduk gir gaya baki uski chikh sunke us or lapke
samne veer khada tha unlogo ne fire kar diya veer tezise sari goliya apne hath se pakad niche fek diya ye
dekh atankbadi dar gaye sab vagne ke liye mude ke veer bijli ki tezise unko cross kar waha khada ho gaya
Veer : tum log vag nahi sakte
Admi firse mude fir wohi hua veer samne khada tha veer hath age kiya or unko hawa me uda unko gol gol ghumane laga unko chakkar ane lage
Ye sab dekh bogi ke log taliya bajane lage
Unlogo ki halat patli ho gayi or wo behose ho gaye veer unko wohi chod chala gaya
Veer apne kebin me bapas aya to sabhi use dekh rahe the veer ne khud ko normal kiya or sabke sath baith gaya
Rubi neha khud ko rok na payi or puch hi li
Rubi neha : guddu kaha gaya tha
Veer : didi wo issi train ke 5 number compartment me 5 atankbadio ne logo ko bandhak bana rakha tha
bas wohi gaya tha
Biswa: eise achanak tum gaye to ham darhi gaye the
Veer : adat dal lo issiliye to tum sab ko sach bataya taki mere kam me koi problem na ho
bahana na banana pade tum logo se
Asish : tumne kya kiya un logo ke sath
Veer: muskura kar sirf behose kiya
Fir room me kuch der khamosi rahi tabhi train station pe ruka
Veer : sab ko sanp sung gaya hai kya dekho station agaya hai kuch chahiye to bolo
Neha : guddu do water bottle or kuch snaks le aao abhi 11 am huye 1 baje lunch aahi jayega
Veer : thik hai di abhi aya
Veer chala gaya
Rubi : aise sab gumsum kiu ho mera guddu superhero hai uska sath do nahi to usko dukh hoga
Neha : di thik kah rahi hai hame to khusi honi chahiye hamare sath devtao ka ashirbad hai veer ke surat me
Biswa : sahi kaha di
Asish : thik hai abb ham usse khul ke bat karenge
Tabhi veer enter hota hai
Veer : ye lo di Water bottle or ye raha snaks
Neha : ye kya le aye, itni sari kachoriya
Veer : mujhe andaza nahi tha to le aya
Biswa : thik hai agar nahi kha paye itne to baki veer ko khiladenge
Asish : ha ye to yodha hai ye sab kha lega dekha nahi kitni fit body hai iski
Rubi : najar na lagao mere guddu ko
Neha : di mera nahi hamara guddu
Guddu ham dono ka hai
Veer : ye kya ap dono fir ladne lagi mai to sabka hu
Rubi neha eksath : sab ka nahi sirf ham dono ka
Biswa or asish dono has has ke lot pot ho gaye veer ki halat dekh
Veer : haso mat or lo kachori kao Veer dono ke muh me kachori var deta hai
Dono bhi veer ka muh bhar dete hai kachori se
Aise hi time beet jata hai fir lunch ajata hai yaha bhi wohi hal tha
Dono behne khud khane ke bajai Veer ko khila rahi thi
Veer bhi dono ko khila raha tha
Aisa pyar dekh asish or biawa ke ankhe nam ho jati hai hai
Ye sab veer se nahi chupta veer dono ko karib bulata hai or unko bhi khilane lagta hai
Aisehi sabne lunch kiya fir rest karne lage
Sham ko fir sabne baithak lagayi
Veer : biswa ek bat bata tu part time kam bhi karta hai na mere ane se wo kam bhi to gaya hai hath se
Biswa : kuch bi tujhse badi nahi hai
Veer : asish tum bhi to karte the
Asish : ha karta tha magar ab bas ham hai bapas ake firse khoj lenge
Veer : mere pass ek offer hai kya tum dono wo karna chaho ge
Biswa : bhai tu jo bhi bole ga ham karenge
Veer : bhai wo jo trust hai na usko tum dono sambhal lo
Biswa : veer hame khusi hogi ye karke kiu asish
Asish : ha veer ye to hamare liye puja saman hogi
Veer : thanks dosto mai kisi orke bharose un bachho ko nahi chod sakta tha ab mai unke taraf se tension free hu
Abb mai mera uddesya pura kar sakunga
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:15:31 GMT 5.5
Update new story
Edhar
Salaka : abhi tak uske bare me pata nahi chala kya jawab dungi raka ko wo mujhe nahi chode ga
Ye naqabposh kaha se ata hai kaha jata hai kuch pata nahi lagta kuch to karna padega
Ha milgaya milgaya ab usko khud ana hoga
Wo dushro ki madat karta hai na koi bhi jab khatre me hota hai wo pahuch jata hai
Ab khatra khud use hamare pass le ayegi bas pata lag jaye abhi tum kaha ho ek bar tumhari ek news mil jaye
Rat ho chuki thi
Biswa or asish chale gaye the apne kebin me
Rubi : guddu tum kaha soyega
Veer : app dono so jao jaha jagha rah jayegi wohi so jayunga
Neha : nahi tum mere sath wale pe soyoge
Rubi : nahi mere sath wale pe
Veer : achha ek kam karte hai apdono sath so jao niche ke birth pe mai uper so jata hu
Neha rubi : nahi ham uper jate hai tum niche so jao uper se ham tumhe dekh payenge
Veer : app log kya mujhe dekhti rahogi soyogi nahi
Rubi : bas ab so jao our koi bat nahi
Fir kya tha unke kehne ke mutabik sona pada
Biswa or asish bate kar rahe the
Asish : bhai ek bat mere man me hai kaho to bolu
Biswa : bol na
Asish : sayad ye mera waham ho lekin lagta hai veer ki dono behne veer se mohabbat karti hai bibi wali
Biswa : tujhe lagta hai mujhe pura yakin hai bachpan se dekh raha hu dono ko dono ki ankhome besumar mahobbat hai veer ke liye
Asish : to fir veer ko pata hai ye sab
Biswa : bhai veer kya kya kar sakta hai ye to tune dekha hai na
Wo hamare dimag me kya chal raha hai sab pata hota hai
Wo hamse mind to mind bat karta hai to kya mind nahi padh sakta
Usko bhi pata chal gaya hoga ye dono kya sochti hai
Magar veer risto ke kasmakas me fasa hai dekhte hai kya hota hai age
Ashish : tu sahi keh raha hai jisko yaha beithe baithe milo door kya ho raha hai pata hota hai to kya usko apne behno ka dil ka hal nahi pata hoga
Biswa : chal chod wakt sab thik kar dega so ja subha jaldi uthna bhi hai
Good night
Asish : good night
Dono behne apasme
Neha : di ab mujhse sabar nahi hota bata du guddu ko ke mai usse kitna pyar karti hu
Rubi : abhi sahi wakt nahi hai dekh na hamara guddu ko sab ki kitni chinta hoti hai jab wo thoda samhal jaye in chijo me fir bata denge
Neha : ok di
Rubi : ab aise na kar guddu hamara hai lekin ak bat kahu kya guddu ko bandh ke rakh na thik hoga uska to janam hi sab ko pyar dene ke liye hua hai
Neha : ye sab mujhe nahi pata bas mujhe guddu chahiye
Mai kisi or ko guddu as pas bhi bardast nahi kar payungi
Rubi : sahi kaha ham use bat nahi sakte hai or kho diya to ji nahi payenge
In 6 salo me kitni bar royi mujhe khud pata nahi tab varosa tha guddu lout ayega abb agar kho diya to fir mar hi jayungi
Dono ke ankhose anshu behne lage
Veer : ye sab sun raha tha usse kitni bhi dhimi awaj kiu na ho sunai deta tha
Veer ke ankho me bhi asun the kya kare itne dil chir ne wale bate sun kiske na asun ayenge
pyar to veer ko bhi beinteyah tha par abhi sahi wakt nahi tha wo apne riste ki kasmas me uljha hua hai
Rat ko jada khuch khas nahi hua sabhi ko sochte sochte nind agayi
Agli subha
Train 7 baje jaipur station pahuchi
Veer rubi neha biswa asish sabhi nikle sration se
Biswa : bhai hotel ki gadi nahi dikh rahi hai
Veer : wo dekho wo rahi tabhi waha ek car ake ruki wo hotel cab thi
Sabhi usme baith gaye or chal pade hotel ki or
Sabhi mese neha sab se jada exited thi kiu ki ye uski pasand ki destination tha
Karib 30 min ke driving ke bad car hotel me pahuchi hotel me sab ka swagat pure rajesthani tarike se kia geya tha
Manager ne unko personally welcome kia sayad unko pata chal gaya tha veer ke bare me ke wo kon hai
Sabhi rooms me pahuch gaye veer or dono behne ek room me or biswa or asish ek room me
sabhi fresh ho liye
Veer ne sab ke liye breakfast order kar diya tha
Sabhi breakfast veer ke room me agaye
breakfast karne tabhi biswa bola
Biswa: to bhai ab kaha jana hai
Veer : pehle ham jaipur city ghumenge fir yaha ke famous places visit karenge or night me ret pe camping karenge
Neha : wow kya idea hai night ko bahar khule asman ke niche ret pe
Bich mai camp fire maza ajayega
Rubi : ha or hame kab bar bar mouka milne wala hai enjoy ka to yahi sahi rahega
Asish : bhai camping to kar lenge magar camping ka saman kaha se ayega
Veer : uski chinta mat karo manager ko bol ke manage karwa lenge ek jeep bhi jo rate pe ja sake
Biswa : yehi sahi rahe ga
Veer : chalo breakfast khatam karo hame city ghumna bhi hai
Fir sabhi ne breakfast liya or ready ho gaye bahar jane ke liye
Jate wakt veer ne camping ki arrangement ke liye manager ko bol diya tha
Fir sabhi nilal pade veer ne ek car hire kar liya tha jisme baith ke veer chal pada sab ke sath
Kuch hi der me wo sabhi pahuch gaye jaipur market
Market dekh dono ladkiya to khus ho gayi dono veer ko khichte huye chal padi marker me veer bechara fas gaya dono ke bich
dono kabhi is shop me jate to kabhi uss shop me or sath me veer ko kich ke le jate
Biswa or ashish to bas maje le rahe the dono bhi edhar udhar
Saman dekh rahe the unko kharidna to tha nahi bas time pass kar rahe the
Veer dono behno ke liye chudiya dekh raha tha tabhi
Uske ankho ke samne manjar ghum gayi
Do forener ladkio ko kuch ladke ched rahe the unke pass do nali bandhuk bhi thi sath me hathiyar se less deshi pehelwan bhi the
Veer : didi mai abhi aya itna bol ke veer waha se bahar nikal gaya dono behne
samajh gaye dono bhi uske piche piche bahar aye wohi kuch dori par market ke opposite site site pe wo ladke ladkio ko ched rahe the tabhi veer waha naqab me agaya
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:17:51 GMT 5.5
New story update 23
Dobo behne or biswa or asish bhi wohi pahuch gaye magar wo side me khade ho ke bas dekh ne lage
Veer : tum logo ko saram nahi ati apne desh ka nam kharab kane me
Ladka1 : kon ho tum or kiu hamare mamle me tang adarahe ho sayad tumko nahi pata ham yahake thakur hai
Veer : jo bhi ho ye sab band karo
Ladka 2 : agar na kiya to ki karlega
Ladka 1:apna jaan pyara se to bhag ja yaha se
Veer : main nahi jayunga kosis karke dekh lo
Ladka1 : ye aise nahi manega lakha is joker ki haddi pasli ek kardo
Tabhi un ladko ke piche se ek hata katta admi nikal or veer ko panch marne ke liye hath uthaya veer ne panch ko apne muthi me pakad ke daba diya uski hath ki ungliya or kalayi tut gayi lakhan dard se chillane laga
Ye dekh
Ladka 1 ne apni donali uthali or veer pe fire kar diya veer ne bullet ko hawa me hi rok liya
ye dekh dono thakur dar gaye fir usnne apne sath aye pehelbano ko veer pe fire karne ko kaha
veer ne bijli ki tezise sabke gun chin liye wo sabhi hakka bakka khade rahe tabhi
Lakda 2 ne apne kamar se khanjar nikal veer ke piche se marne ko hua tha ke tabhi
Veeeer ek awaj gunj gayi ye neha thi sayad wo dar gayi thi kahi veer ko kuch ho na jaye
magar veer ko marna to dur uska khanjar hi mud gaya
Rubi ne bat samhal ne ke liye veer veer veer ki hotting karne lagi usko dekha dekhi sabhi maujud log bhi veer veer ki hoting karne lage
Veer ne dono ladko ko do thappad mare itne me hi dono behose ho gaye ye sab waha moujud log or bideshio ne shoot kar liya
magar neha ka or rubi ka veer veer kehna nahi kar paye sab ki hotting hi shoot hui
Veer ne unko chod waha se udte huye chala gaya or khuchi der me change ho ke apne behno ke pass agaya
Sabhi gadi me baith gaye
Veer : di app thik hai na
Neha: ha mai thik hu wo thoda dar gayi thi sorry
Veer : koi bat nahi di isme apki galti nahi hai wo achanak ho gaya
Rubi : kuch nahi hua bas us nakabposh ko ek nam mil gaya
Biswa : ha di apne bat ko samhal liya warna aaj veer ka raaj khul jata waise nam bahut solid hi mila hai veer the super hero
Asish : galty se hi sahi par hero ko asli nam mil gaya or iska matlab bhi achha hai veer matlab bahadur yodha jo tum ho
Veer : ab tang mat khicho or chalo lunch karte hai kahi
Edhar
News chanel me news agayi
Reporting : aaj jaipur ke market me firse wo naqabposh hero dekha gaya logo ki madas karte huye yaha ke logo ne sare waqia ko apne mobile me capture kar liya ye dihiye
fir waha jo fight hui or logo ne jo us naqabposh ko veer veer ke nare se pukara
To dekha apne log kis tarha us naqabposh hero ko veer nam diya
Is kalyug ka maha yodha veer camramen robin ke sath kirti
Salaka..
Hahahahaha mil gaya mil gaya wo abhi Rajasthan jaipur me hai ab nahi bachega
Mere gulamo samne aao
Tabhi 10 log waha agaye
Admi : ji salaka
Salaka jao or jaipur me charo taraf atank macha do wo tumhe rokne ayega tab tum usko khatam karke mere pass le ana
mai usko shaitan ko vet karungi to wo khus hoke mujhe senapati bana denga
Edhar veer or sabhi ne hotel me sudh Rajasthani lunch kiya
Or room me chale gaye rest ke liye abhi 2 baje the sabhi ready ho chuke the or chal pade bahar ab ghum ne ka wakt tha waha se sabhi car se nikal gaye puri sham sabhi jaipur ke different place ghumte rahe
or ratko camping ke liye chale gaye registan tent khana agg ki lakdi sab laye the
Biswa or asish ne milke badi muskil se tent lagaya tabtak veer ne lakdiya or baki ka saman utar liye ab andhera chhane laga tha thand lagne lagi thi
Biswa : yar koi campfire to jalao machis liter kiske pass hai
Asish : mere pass nahi hai
Rubi neha : ham kya karenge machis liter ki or veer ke pass vi nahi ho sakta
Biswa : lo lag gayi agg ab thand me kapte rehna sab
Veer baithe baithe hi age hath karta hai or agg ki ek choti hi law veer ke hath me jal gayi veer ne lakdio ko jala diya
Asish : are yar ham to vul hi gaye the hamare sath kon hai
Veer : to batao ab kya karna hai
Biswa : ek game khelte hai ham bottle ghumayenge jiske taraf bhi bottle ka muh hoga usse ek swal pucha jayega jiska jawab sirf ha ya na me dega kiu thik hai
Sabhi : ha thik hai
fir coldrink ki ek bottle ko frezzer ke bix pe ghumaya gaya pehla
Nishana biswa khud ho gaya
Asish ne pehla swal kiya
Asish : biswa kya tumne kabhi pyar kia hai
Biswa ko kuch wakt laga fir usne kaha
Biswa : ha
Kisine kuch nahi pucha kiu ki uske face pe chayi dard ko sabne mahsus kiya tha firse bottle ghumaya gaya or isbar nishana bani rubi
Buswa ne swal kia
Biswa : di kya apne kisise pyar kiya hai
Rubi : ha kiya hai
Biswa : kisse
Rubi : maine ha me jawab de diya na ye sawal ka jawab dene ko mai badhya nahi hu
Asish : di got point firse bottle ghumi is bar target asish bana
Veer ne sawal kiya
Veer : kya tumne apne pariwar ko choda
Asish : ha …
.asish ke answer se sabhi ke soch me pad gaye sabhi usko anath samajh the biswa bhi jo uske sath bahut wakt se hai magar
Veer se kuch chup nahi paya issiliye usne sawal kiya tha
Bottle firse ghumi isbar target neha bani
Asish ne swal kiya
Asish : kya app kisiko chahti hai
Neha : ha
Veer sab janta tha magar wo abhi bat ko badhana nahi chahta tha
Bottle ghumi or target firse biswa bana
Veer : kya wo amir ghar ki thi
Biswa : ha…..
sabhi samajh gaye the ke biswa anath hai issiliye usne apna pyar dilme chupa ke rakha hai
Bottle fir ghumi isbar target veer bana biswa ne swal kiya
Biswa : tum ne kisi ladki ko pyar kia hai
Veer soch me pad gaya agar wo jawab deta hai to uski behne uske piche lag jayegi ye janne ke liye ke wo kon hai
veer ye sab soch raha tha tabhi manjar ghum gaya
Veer turant apni jagah pe khada hua or hath jod ke akhe band kar manjar dekhne laga
Jaipur me hi do buildings me bahut hi vayankar agg lagi hui thi
veer ne apni bahe failayi uska costume agaya usne apne behno ki taraf dekha or bas itna hi kaha
Veer : mai abhi aya or jhuk ke uper ki or uchla or bijli ki rafter se chal pada
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:21:30 GMT 5.5
New story update 24
Dono buildings buri tarah jal rahi thi abhi tak fite department bale nahi aye the building me kuch log abhi bi fase huye the
Tabhi veer tezise building ke ander dakhil hua or logo ko utha ke bahar agaya udte hute ye sene news media wale capture kar rahe the
Agg abhi bhi jal rahi thi veer ko ass pas koi water sorce nahi dikha to usne jaha tha
wohi speen karne laga or dharti ko kisi drill ki tarha vedta hua niche chala gaya sabhi us hole me dekh rahe the tabhi ek awaj ke sath veer nikla
oe jaminse panika ek bada gola liye huye asman me chala gaya or barsat ke tarha bulding me girane laga
dekhte dekhe agg bujh gayi veer bapas jamin pe agaya or apna hath age kar sari mitti jo hole se nikli thi bapas pehle jaise jane lagi tabhi
ek lat veer ko piche se laga
Jab veer muda to samne 10 insan ke vesh me vampire the
V leader : to tum milhi gaye ajj tum nahi bach sakte hamare hath se
un 10 vampire ne veer ko charo tarf se gher liya
kuch hi dur se media or log ye sab dekh rahe the
Vampire veer pe hamla karne lage koi kik marta to koi panch marta veer sabke war ko block karta hai
Vampire ki speed bahut tez thi magar veer unse kahi jada tez tha unka war veer ko slow motion me dikhayi de rahi thi wo sabko block karta hai
Vampire hamla band kar talware nikal lete hai veer hath age kar sab ko wohi rok deta hai
koi bhi talware liye Age badh nahi pa raha tha
tabhi veer ek hath uper karta hai asman me bijli kadakti hai jo sidha veer ke hath me sama rahi thi
veer dusra hath age karta hai un vampire par or or uske hath se bijli ke lehre nikal ne lagti
hai jo vampire ko jagte hi vampire jalkar rakh ho jate hai
veer bas piche mud sab ko hath dikha niche jhuk jump marta hai or pahuch jata hai jaha sab camping kar rahe the veer khud ko normal kar baith jata hai
Sab ko puchne ka man to ho raha tha ke kya hua magar kisine nahi pucha par veer ne unke man ki bat sun li to wo khud barane laga
Veer : lagta hai tumsab nahi mano ge to suno do buildings me agg lag gayi thi wohi gaya tha
Rubi : lekin ham ne to pucha he nahi
Veer: sabne pucha bas lab khamos the man me itni bar pucho ge to batana to padega na
Neha: kya tum manki bate sun lete ho
Veer : ha sun leta hu
Dono behne chock jati hai kiu ki wo samajh gayi thi ke abtak veer ko sab pata chal gaya hai
wo veer se pyar karti hai firvi dono bas ekdusre se akho me dekh rahe the
Biswa : iska matlap hai ke tumse kuch chip nahi sakta
Veer : ha
Asish : or tumko pata kaise lagta hai ke kaha problem hai
Wo bas iswar ki kripa hai or gurudev ki di hui bardan hai
Biswa : gurudev ne kon kon se vardan diye hai
Veer : ye jo mask ata hai wobhi gurudev ne diya hai or gurudev ne vardan di hai ke mai hamesha jawan rahunga
or meri jivan sathi bhi or mera sath dilse dene waleko kabhi koi nuksan nahi hoga
Dono behne ye sunke khush ho jati hai kiu ki unko pata chal gaya tha jab veer jan chuka hai to usko manana muskil nahi
Biswa: bhai tere jane se pehle ham ne tujhko ek sawal kiya tha uska jawab baki hai kya tum kisise pyar karte ho
Veer samajh chuka tha sawal se bhagne se sawal picha nahi chodti
Veer : ha maine pyar kiya hai
Dono behne ye sun veer ko dekhne lagi veer bas muskura diya
Dono ne kuch nahi kaha par sawal unke manmebi the jo unko tadpa rahi thi
Veer : chalo khana khate hai fir sone chalte hai rat kafi ho gayi hai
Biswa ne khana nikala jo paked thi sab ko diya or sabne shanti se khana khaya fir veer ne sabko sone vej diya magar khud nahi gaya
usne kuch der me ane ka kehke bahar ruk gaya
Dono behne tent me chale gaye par nind dono ke ankhose koso dur thi
Veer bahar baitha dhayan lagata hai
Veer : gurudev mujhe apki margdarshan ki abashakta hai
G dev : bolo mere bachhe
Veer : pranam gurudev
G dev : sada khus raho
Veer : gurudev meri behne mujhse pyar karne lagi hai or mai bhi kya ye galat hai
G dev : mujhe pehle sehi pata tha putra tum tino ke bare me tum batao kya ye tumhe galat lagta hai
Veer : mujhe isme koi galat nahi lagta magar samaj ke najar me ye galat hai
G dev : jab vagwan ne ye dharti banayi fir jeev banaye to unhone sab jodime banaye
or insan bhi jodi me banayi ek purush ek stri or ham sab usike bachhe hai ham sab me khun ka rista sab kisi na kisi tarha ek dusre ke riste se jude hai
to kya wo sadi nahi karte kya wo prem nahi karte isme koi galat nahi tum bhi to wohi karoge
ye sab chodo wo dono tumhari hi patni banegi ye bidhi ka bidhan hai to khud ko or na uljhao or is risteko dil se kabul karo
Veer : dhanyabad gurudev pranam
G dev : sada khus raho
Fir veer uth ke chal pada tent me jaha dono usika intezar kar rahi thi
veer : app dono soyi nahi
Dono veer ko ghurne lage
Veer : kya hua
Rubi : tum jante ho tumhe sabki manki bat pata hoti hai
Veer : hmmm hai to sahi
Neha : to hame itna kiu tadpate ho
Veer : maine kab tadpaya
Rubi : kon hai wo ladki jisse tum pyar karte ho
Veer : pehle app to batao app kisse pyar karte ho fir mai batayunga
Neha: tum jante ho ham kisse pyar karte hai
Veer : hmmm lekin app to do ho wo do ko kaise pyar karega
Rubi : ab mazak chodo tum batao kisse pyar karte ho ye batao
Veer : app dono pehle batao fir mai batayunga
Rubi neha : ham sirf tumse pyar karte hai
Veer : mai app donoka bhai hu furvi
Rubi : tum sirf hamare ho or kisike nahi
Neha : agar tum na mile to ham mar jayenge
Veer nehake muhpe hath rakh deta hai
Veer : mai kisiko kuch hone nahi dunga maivi ap dono ke bina nahi rah sakta app dono me meri jann basti hai
maivi apse bahut pyar karta hu or kisise nahi
Veer age badh dono ko baho me bhar leta hai
unko or tadpana veer ko achha nahi lag raha tha
Rubi : I love u guddu
Neha :I love u guddu
Veer : I love you too mai apdono se bahut pyar karta hu lekin abhi ham is riste ko age nahi badhayenge
Rubi neha : kiu nahi badha sakte
Veer : ham mammy papa ko dhoka nahi de sakte ham unki permission ke bad ye rista age badhayenge thik hai
Rubi neha : thik hai le lekin hame apne baho me sone se to nahi rokoge
Veer : kabhi nahi meri jaan
Veer ki bat sun dono sarma jati hai or veer se lipat jati ha
i veer dono ko baho me bhar nihar te nihar te so jata hai
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:27:02 GMT 5.5
New story update 25
Edhar
Salaka : ye kaise ho sakta hai usne mere gulamo ko mar diya mai usko jinda nahi chodungi
usne 10 ko mara hai isbar mere sabse khatarnak
haiwan ke dusra roop mera bhai saka jayega
kya nam diya hai logone uska ha veer us veer ko jinda nahi chodenge
Gulamo is bar wo bachna nahi chahiye jao us veer ko kisibhi halat me marna hi hoga warna raka hame nahi chodega
Gulam : jo hukum salaka
Saka : tum chinta na karo behen mere samne wo nahi tik payega
Salaka :mujhe tumpe pura bharosa hai saka jao us veer ko khatam kardo jo logoka mesiha banne ki kosis kar raha hai
Agli shubh
Dono behne veer se chipki so rahi thi
veer ki nind tut gayi or usne dono ko dekha achank veer ko kya hua ke usne dono ke hotho ko chum liya
Dono kasmasane lagi veer uthke jaldi se bahar agaya ye uska pehla mouka tha jab usne apni behno ke sath aisa kiya tha usko sarm or romanch dono lag raha tha
Dono behno ko iska ahsas hua lekin dono ne apni ankh nahi kholi
Rubi neha ka dil to zoro se dhadak raha tha..
Veer bahar nikal thodi der sadhna me baith apne man ko sant karta hai issi bich sab bahar ajaate hai …
Veer sadhna se uth sabko good morning wish karta hai or sabko hotel chalne ke liye ready hone ko kehta hai
Veer.. Dosto tum dono aage jao hotel main meri behno ke sath morning ka najara dekh ajayunga..
Biswa or ashish muskurate huye sab samet ke chale jate hai…
Veer… to chale di
Neha… ab hame akele di to mat bola karo .
Rubi.. Ratko jaise jaan kaha tha jaan kahona..bahut achha lagta hai..
Veer.. Jaan chalo aaj tum dono ko main rajasthan ki shair mai apne tarike se karata hu…..
Veer dono behno ka hath pakad dhire dhire uper ko uthne lagta hai
Rubi neha dar ke mare veer se chipak jate hain
Veer ke sarir me dono ki jisam ki garmi.failne lagti
Aisahi hal dono behno ka bhi tha dar or veer ke karib hone ka romanch dono ke sir chadh jata hai..
Dono veer se aur chipak jati hai
Veer dono ko leke hawame udta hua
Ret ke bicho bich jamin se karib 500 miter uper jaha dono ko sans lene taklif na ho le aata hai..
Neha… wow kitna sundar hai ye ret ke tile ..
Rubi.. Ha bahut sundar hai..
Veer Dono baho me kaske unke kamsin chatiye veer ke sine me gade ja rahe the .. Iska ehsas rubi neha ko bhi ho raha tha..
Veer… ye ret ke tile meri jaan ke tilo se sundar nahi..
Rubi neha veer ke ankhome dekhne lagi ..
Dono ko veer ki sararat samajh me agayi lekin
Dono to pehle se hi veer ko apna tan man de chuki thi .. Unko veer ke sararat se bada sukun mila ke veer dono ko tan man se apnane laga hai..
Neha.. Jaan ye sab apka hai app jab. Chaye inko pyar kare..
Rubi.. Hamne inko swara hi apke liye hai …
Veer dono ke is samarpan se bahut khus ho jata hai or wo ke ankhome kho jata hai
Rubi… aab nahi karoge..
Veer… kya jaan..
Neha. . wohi jo shubha kiya tha..
Veer sab samajh raha tha lekin dono ko aur chedne me maza aaraha tha…
Veer..shubha maine kya kiya tha..
Rubi.. Please jaan firse karo na..
Veer.. Kya karu jaan…
Neha..ofho app nahi shudhroge .. Wo jo shubha apne kiss kiya tha ham dono ko firse karo na…
Veer.. Maine to aisa kuch nahi kiya tha app dono ne sapna dekha hoga..
Ab dono se raha nahi gaya
Rubi age badh ke veer ke hotho pe apne hoth rakh deti hai…
Veer rubi ke hotho ko apne hotho ke bich kaid kar leta hai or unko dhire dhire choose ne lagta hai..
Rubi ko khumari chane lagti hai or wo apne ankhe band karleti hai or kiss ke nashe me kho jati hai..
karib 10 min bad jab rubi ko sans lene me taklif hone lagi veer rubi ke lab chod deta hai rubi joro se sanse lene lagti hai..
Itnider se neha dono ka kiss dekh exited ho rahi thi uske lab sukhne lage the wo bar bar labo pe jive fer rahi thi..
Veer neha ko… apko bhi chahiye ka jaan ..
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Veer aur kuch bolpata ke neha ka sabar jawab de jata hai or wo veer ke labo pe apne lab rakh deti hai…
Veer dono ko aur jodse baho me kas leta hai..
Neha apna ap veer ke hawale karke apne lap ko choosewane lagti hai
Neha ki ankhe band thi lekin uski sanse tezz chal rahi thi
jisse neha ki kamsin chatiya veer ke sine pe ragad kha rahi thi isse neha or veer aur exited ho rahe the
lekin veer ne khud pe kabu kiya or kiss toda jab kiss tuti to neha jorkatar sans lene lagi jaise aaj tak sans liya hi na ho..
Rubi dono ki halat dekh muskura rahi thi or exited ho rahi thi..
Veer.. Bas ab aur aage badhe to yahi se choota veer ya rubi neha lele ghar jana padega..
Rubi.. Main taiyar hu..
Neha..main bhi….
Veer.. Lekin main nahi pehle mammy papa. Or dadi se permission leni padegi..
Rubi neha .. To lelo na permission ..
Veer.. Nahi abhi nahi abhi wakt hai isme..
Rubi neha. . lekin hame pyar milta rahega na aab aur nahi raha jata apke karib hote huye..
Veer…. Milega lekin wakt wakt pe ab chale .. Fir veer dono behno ko leke hotel se kuch duri pe uer jate hai jaha koi unko na dekh raha ho
Fir wo hotet ajate hai fresh ho jate
kuchi der me sab ready ho hotel ke liye nikal jate hai
Hotel pahuch sab fresh hote hai or nasta kar ke nikal te hai rajasthan ke baki ke jagaho ke dekhne issi tarah inka rajasthan visit complete ho jata
hai is bich koi khas incident nahi hua tha
Magar kehte hai na agar mahol sant hai to wo anewale tufan ki or undesa kar ta hai yaha bhi wohi hua
Rk ne apni chal kheli or singh company ko barbad karne ke liye singh company ke bahut se factory me agg lagwane ka plan banaya tha
jin me rajasthan ki company car manufacturing company bhi thi
Veer and parti ka aaj rajasthan me akhri rat hai sabhi lunch kar sone chale gaye
veer bhi sone ki taiyari kar raha tha tabhi usko manjar dikha
5 factory me agg lagaya ja raha hai
Veer ne hath jod manjar ko dekha ek sath zindagi 5 factory me agg lagaya ja raha hai
veer ne hath failaya or costume pehan tezise bahar nikal udchala pehle wo rajasthan ke factory me pahucha jaha agg lag chuki thi lekin agg Abhi bhi faila nahi tha
Veer ne asman ki or hath kiya or asman me kale badal cha gaye or barish shuru ho gayi veer ne pani ko rukh agg ki or mod diya agg bujh gayi
veer bina der kiye jamin pe hath rakha or roshni ke speed se udta hu pahuch gaya panjab me jaha suger factory me agg laga hua tha veer ne factory ke uper speen karna suru kiya or as pas ki sari hawa khich li hawa ke bagar agg nahi lag sakti wohi hua agg bujh gayi
Veer fir se udchala or pahuch gaya delhi jaha still factory me agg lagi hui thi veer ko dekh log khus ho gaye veer ne apne hath age kar agg ko failne se rok diya or fir apne muhse barfila dahuya nikal agg ko bujha diya
Fir ruka nahi or baki ke bache dono factory jo kolkata or lakhnaw me tha sab ko bujha diya usko lot te lot te bahut der ho gayi thi
dono behne abhi bhi uska intezar kar rahi thi tabhi veer aaya dono uth ke bina bole veer se lipat gayi veer ne dono ko pakda
or sath me leke udte huye bahar agaya or chal pada asman ki shair karne dono ki ghabrahat palvarme excitement me badal gayi dono veer se chipki najaro ka maja lene lagi
veer ne bas dono ke masumiyat se bhare chehre ko nihar raha tha tabhi Rubi ne kaha
Rubi : app chale jate ho to hame fikar hone lagti hai
Veer : ab ye to mera jivan hai isko badal nahi sakta khud ko majbut karo
Neha : kitna bhi dil ko samjhaye ye samajhta hi nahi
Veer : iska koi upai nahi hai hame isko sahna padega
Rubi : apke liye kuch bhi she lungi mere guddu
Neha : ham apke uddeshya me kabhi ade nahi ayenge ye bada raha
Rubi age badh veer ke galo pe kiss kardiya neha ne bhi veer ko to mano current sa apne ander dodta mahua kiya
Fir veer ne sabko leke bapas agaya kamre me dono ka chehra khila khila hua tha
Edhar Rk gusse me tha apna plan fail hone se
Rk : ye kon hai jisne pure desh me ekhi wakt me meri sari ke sari factory ki agg bujha diya mera sara plan fail kar diya kisiko kuch pata hai uske bare me
Admi : sir logone usko veer the super hero nam diya hai
Rk : veer my foot mai nahi chodunga usse
Usne vikram ki sari factory ko bacha liya mera mansuba pura nahi hone diya kuch to karna padega us vikram ka
Admi : sir is wakt police bahut allert ho gayi hai is agg wale kand ke chalte app abhi kuch wakt sant rahe warna police ko app pe shuq ho jayega
Rk : hmmm sahi kaha lekin us veer ka kuch intezam karo agar usne fir se hamare kam me tang adai to tum logoki kher nahi
Admi : aisa nahi hoga ham uska intezam kardenge uski sari hero giri nikal denge
Agli shubah
Veer or sabhi ready ho ke pahuch gaye airport goa jane ke liye
Rubi : guddu goa jake mammy papa se bat karenge 3 din ho gaye unse bat nahi ki
Neha : ha mainevi
Veer : chalo goa jake unko call kar lena dekho flight ki announcement ho gayi
Chalo biswa asish chalo fir sabhi plen se chal pade goa...
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:29:22 GMT 5.5
New story update 26
3 ghante me Sabhi pahuch gaye goa airport
Sabhi ke chehro pe dhup khili hui thi kiu ki goa me masty maza sab ka pura mouka tha samundar me tairne ka maza beech me masty ka maza
abhi se unko mehsus ho raha tha
Veer apna mobile nikal ghar phone lagata hai kuch hi der me udhar se
call pick ho jati hai
Veer : hello ma kaisi ho
Ma : mat bol mujhe ma 3 din ho gaye ek bar bhi phone nahi kiya aaj aya bada ma kehne wala .
Veer : sorry ma apko call nahi kiya lekin ma apko bahut yaad kiya
Biswas na ho to puch lo di se
Ma : rehne de wo dono to teri hi side legi waise kaha ho tum sab
Veer : goa me hu ma abhi aye hai
Neha : guddu mujhe phone do na mujhe bhi bat karni hai
Veer : ruko di deta hu
Ma ye lo di se bat karo fir veer dono ko phone de deta hai or hotel ki car ka wait karne lagta hai
Biswa : bhai lagta hai late ho gayi car abhi tak nahi ayi
Veer : lagta to hai
Tabhi waha ek car rukti hai jisme se ek khubsurat ladki uterti hai usne ek black formal office coat pehna hua tha
Ladki edhar udhar dekhti hai or jab uski najar veer pe padti hai to wo jaldi se chalte huye veer ke pass ane lagti hai
magar jab wo veer ke karib pahuchti hai to high hills ke karan ladkhada jati hai or sidha veer se takrati hai
or jab ko girne ko thi to veer ne usse samhal liya
Ladki ki najar jab veer se mili to bas usime kho gayi veerne usko jaldi se utha ke sidha khada kar diya
Ladki : sorry sorry sir kya app hi danveer singh hai
Veer : yes mai hi danveer hu
Ladki : sorry sir wo mai let ho gayi mai hotel se apko personally pick karne ayi thi mai nilam hotel _____ manager hu
Ye log bate kar rahe the edhar char akhe agg barsa rahi thi
Rubi neha ne us ladki ko veer ke baho me dekh liya or dono ko tezz jalan or gussa gher liya us ladki ke liye
Dono jhat se waha chali ayi call cut karke
Neha: ham kab se yaha khade hai or app ab ayi hai
Nilam : sorry mam
Veer : its ok ab ham chal sakte hai
Nilam : sure sir chaliye
Sabhi car me baith gaye lekin rubi neha ko us ladki ka veer ke pass hona achha nahi lag raha tha
Veer ko ye sab pata chal raha tha par abhi sahi wakt nahi tha dono ko samjhane ka to wo bas khamos raha
Khuch hi der me wo sabhi pahuch gaye hotel nilam personally unko room me chodne ayi thi wo veer se bahut jada atract ho rahi thi
Bar bar mouka nikal kar veer se bate kar rahi thi ye sab dekh rubi neha ko or jalan ho rahi thi
jab wo room me pahuche dono mu fulake ek side me baith gayi
veer samajh gaya inko manana hoga
Veer: kya hua meri sweeto pario ko
Rubi neha: app ko pata hai
Veer : aab isme mai kya kar sakta hu agar maine to kuch nahi kiya na
Rubi : wo apse chipak rahi thi hame nahi pasand
Neha : app usse dur raho bass
Veer : app ye batao kya apko mujhpe bharosa hai
Rubi : apni jaan se jada
Neha : khud se jada
Veer : to bas ladkiya to duniya me lakho kadodo hai par mera pyar sirf app dono ke liye hai
or aisi ladkiya chahe kitni bhi mere age piche ghume lekin mere dilme apke izazat ke bagair koi nahi ayegi ok
Abse agar app kisiko bhi mere age piche dekho to bas itna yad rahiye ga apke ichha ke bagar mai kisiko app dono ke sath nahi baithayunga
Rubi : thank you my guddu
Neha : or agar hamne ijazat de di to bithaloge
Veer : apke ijazat ke badvi jabtak apke jitna pyar karne wali nahi milegi nahi bithayunga
Neha : sochlo
Veer : sochliya
Rubi neha khus ho gayi kiu ki wo to kabhi ye ijazat nahi degi isliye veer unka hua lekin vabisya ke garv me kya hai kisko pata
Veer : chalo ready ho jao lunch ka time ho gaya hai
Rubi neha veer ke gale lag veer ke gal pe kiss kar
Rubi neha : ham abhi aye ye kehke chale gaye or veer to jaise kiss ke nase me bed pe ludak gaya
Edhar indian space research center me scientists kafi pareshan the
Scientist 1 : isko ham rokenge kaise hamse ye miss kaise ho gaya
Scientist 2 : pata nahi lekin isse bahut tabahi hogi isko rokne ka wakt bhi nikal gaya abb bas khuchi ghante me takkar ho jayegi
Scientist 1 : ab kuch nahi ho sakta sarkar ko khabar dedo
Scientist 2 : sir kuch to upai hoga usko rokne ka ham kya kuch nahi kar sakte
Scientist 1 : 4 ghante hai tum kya karloge 4 ghanto me kuch nahi ban sakta hai nahi ham banapayenge
agar 1 month vi time hota to kuch ho sakta
Scientist 2: thik hai sir mai sarkar ko inform kar deta hu
Fir usne sarkar ko info de diya puri sarkar me is mamle ko leke hadkamp mach gayi
Sarkar ne police military sabko inform kar diya high elert me rahne ke liye,
ye info media me fail gayi sari media is khabar ko telicast karne lagi
News : hajaro jindagi aaj khatre mai hai space se ek ulka pind aaj indian ocean me goa ke karib girne wala hai iske chalte samundar me vukamp ane wale hai or iss ke chalte samundar me pani ka ufan hoga or ek maha vayankar sunami ki stithi paida ho sakta hai isse Goa or ass pas ke bahut se elaqe sunami ki vet chad sakti hai Sutra ki mane to ab koi chamatkar hi is sankat se bachha sakta hai
Edhar veer or sabhi ne hotel ke restro me khana khaya or chal pade
Sunset ka maja lene
Jab wo beech par pahuche to beech khali tha ass pas koi nahi tha
Biswa : ye kya hai yaha to koi nahi hai
Asish : aisa kaise ho sakta hai
Tabhi unko piche se awaj ayi
Awaj : ai bachho yaha kya kar rahe ho tumko nahi pata yaha khatra hai ( wo police wale the )
Biswa: kaisa khatra Sir
Hawaldar : beta yaha sunami aneki sambhabna hai jao yaha se warna bach nahi pao ge
Sabhi ko shok laga kya sir sunami
Hwaldar: ha iasiliye pura beech khali kiya gaya hai or ab ham bhi ja rahe hai agar apni jaan pyari hai chale jao yaha se
Veer : thank you sir ham ja rahe hai
Fir hawaldar chala gaya or veer sabko leke hotel lot aya
Veer pareshan tha kiu ki koi bhi khatra ho veer ko pata chal jata tha
magar ye kaise ho sakta hai kya wajah hai iski jab usko kuch samajh nahi aya to usne wohi room me apni yoga mat nikal baith gaya
Rubi neha biswa asish Sabhi chok ke veer ko dekhne lage wo kya kar raha hai .
Veer ne yoga mat bicha sadhna me lin ho gaya kuchhi der me veer ki kundlini jagrit ho gayi fir usne mind se apne gurudev se.
Veer : gurudev gurudev
Parshuram : bolo mere bachhe
Veer : gurudev ye jo itni badi sankat arahi hai iska pata mujhe kaise nahi chala
Parshuram: mere bachhe ye prakitic apda hai iska pata tumhe nahi lag sakta ha tumhe koi bhi insan or shaitan dwara bane ya upje sankat ka pata chal jayega
ha par tumhe usko rok sakte ho agar pata chal jaye
Veer : dhanyabad gurudev
Parshuram : sada vijayi vawa
Fir veer ne apna dhayan sakat par dala to dekha ek ulka pind bahut hi tezise dharti ki or araha hai bas kuch 1 ghante me pahuch jayega
Veer ne apni sadhna choda or uthke apne bahe failayi or uska costume change ho gaya naqab bhi agaya
veer waha se ja pata usse pehle hi rubi bol padi
Rubi : guddu apna dhayan rakhna
Veer : aap dono chinta na kare mai jaldi hi lot ayunga
Ye bolke veer gayab ho gaya fir wo bahar firse agaya or chal pada jaha ulka girne wala tha
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:38:43 GMT 5.5
New story update 27
Sabhi scientist sabhi news media sabhi ki najar usi or thi apne apne camre durbin liye veer waha chala gaya jaha ulka land karne wala tha
Ab kahani veer ki juvani…
Main waha pahuch gaya jaha ulka pind girne wala tha
aaj tak maine bas chote mote hadso ko roka tha lekin ye to mere liye ak chalange thi..
Main hawa me khada ye soch raha tha ke kaise main us ulka ko roku mere pass wakt ki kami bahut thi bas 10 min ka wakt tha mere pass…
Pehle maine socha main ulka ke tukde tukde kar deta hu lekin us ulka ki raftar bahut tezz thi agar main aisa karta to jarur us ulka ke chote chote tukre dharti pe tabahi machate ..
Main ne kuch soch ke ye faisla kiya pehle mujhe ulka ki sakti kam karni hogi take usko kabu kar saku
..us ulka ki sakti thi raftar uska akar or usme chupi aag..
Main ne apna man sthir kiya fir apni ankhe band karke apni puri sakti ko jagrit kiya jab maine apni ankh kholi meri akh puri nili ho chuki thi ..
Main ne apne hath failaya or apna akar bada karne laga bada aur bada
Maine apna akar itna karliya ke us ulka ko main apne hatheli me sama saku..
Fir maine apna hath niche samundar ke taraf kiya or ek bahut hi bada pani ka gola banaya gola karib 5 manjila imarat jitna bada tha
Der na karte huye main us panike gole ko leke udta hua ulka ke taraf badhte ja raha tha
ulka hamare bayumandal se gujarte wo ak agg ke gole me badal gayi..
Main ne pehle us pani ke gole ko ulka ke uper fek diya jab wo ulka panise takraya uski aag bahut hi kam ho gayi
main ulka ke sath udte huye dharti ke taraf jane laga ab bari thi uski raftar ko kabu karne ke main ne apne hath se ulka ko pakad liya
or apni sakti se usko rokne laga ulka mujhko bhi apne sath khichta huya dharti ke taraf jane laga ..
Maine apni puri sakti laga ke ulka ko uper ke taraf kichne laga biprit bal ke karan ulka ki raftar kam hone laga
lekin abhi bhi uski raftar jada thi main ne fir kuch socha ab bas 1 min baki tha takkar me
main ulka ke samne agaya or ulka ko apne sine pe le liya apni dharti hawa jal akash charo sakti ki takat laga ke maine ulka ki raftar kam karne laga
ulka mujhko lete huye dharti ke taraf badh raha tha maine aur jod laga ke ulka ko rokne laga dekhte hi dekhte uski raftar kam ho gaya
ulka mujhe lete huye samundar me sama gaya lekin talkar se pehle maine uski raftar ko khatam kar diya
Main ulka ke samne se hat gaya ulka ek sadharan pathar ke tarah dharti se takraya lekin uski sakti sunya thi..
Puri duniya ki najar us jagah thi jaha wo ulka mujhko liye huye samundar me sama gaya
Udhar mere ghar me ma ye dekh behose ho gayi ..
Hotel me rubi neha ka bura hal tha sabki ankhe samundar pe tiki hui thi
Tabhi main pani se nikla or wohi khada ho gaya mera adha sarir pani me tha
adha mere kamar se leke sir tak uper maine ekbar charo taraf dekha fir hath uper kiya aur hahame uth gaya
or khada hoke apni bahe failake apna akar ghatane laga
Dekhte hi dekhte main normal akar me agaya .. Fir apni ankhe band kar jab khola meri ankhe normal ho gayi
Fir main waha ruka nahi udchala apne hotel ki taraf lekin mujhe andesha tha jarur camre or log charo taraf honge
isliye kuch dur age jate hi main ne khud ko gayab kar liya or chala gaya hotel me jaha meri behne meri jaan mera pyar mere liye chintit thi..
sidha apne kamre me pahuch gaya jaha sabhi news me hi veer ka karnama dekh rahe the
Age ki kahani writer ki jubani..
Jab veer waha pahucha to rubi or neha ne usko uchal ke gale laga liya
Gale lage halat me
Rubi : mere guddu ne to kamal hi kar diya
Neha: mera guddu duniya ka sabse takatwar or himmatwala super hero hai I love you guddu
Rubi : I love you too guddu
Veer : thik hai thik hai I love you too di but abhi apni excitement kam karo mujhe change to hone do
Itna bool ke veer ne khud ko normal kar liya
Biswa: kamal kar diya bhai tune to mujhe fakr hai tere jaisa dost pake
Asish : mujhebhi
Veer : maine kuch nahi kiya mai in saktio ke wajah se khas hu warna tumme or mujhme koi fark nahi
Biswa: bhai sakti ho ya na ho tu ham sabse alag hai
Asish : ha ham sab me milake jitne gun hai tujhme usse kahi jada hai
Veer : ab bas vi kar kya yaha tarifo ke pool bandh rahe ho
Rat ho gayi sunset to dekh nahi paye chalo rat ke tare hi dekh aye
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