hamza123
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 1:21:37 GMT 5.5
Veer ( kalyug ka maha yodha )( thrill suspence romance love )
Hello friends and welcome to my thread
Dosto ye meri pehli story hai,mai pichle 2 year se xossip pe story padh raha hu . Finally maine kuch likhne ka socha, asha karta hu ke app sabhi ko mera ye chota sa prayas achha lagega story me sex se jada pyar ko mahatatwa diya gaya hai ….
Is story ke sabhi parta or ghatnaye kalpanik hai Agar is me likhi ksisibhi bakti ya ghatnao se samanta hoti hai to use matra ek Sanyug kaha jayega ------------------------ apka dost pintu
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 1:25:42 GMT 5.5
new story update 1 Veer ( kalyug ka maha yodha )
Kahani suru hoti hai dopar yug ke ant se jab mahabarat ka yudh khatam hua
Adharm pe dharm ki vijay hui .. Adharm apni har se bahut gusse me agaya issi gusse ki wajah se uski urja se ek balak ka janm hua ..
Jo shaitani saktio ka malik tha bachha kuchi der me bada ho gaya Adharm USS bachhe ko dekhkar khus ho gaya ..
Adharm : ab mai apne haar ka badla le sakunga devtao tumne kya socha tha kalyug suru ho gayi to mai dharti par nahi ja payunga to tum jeet gaye hahahahahaha
Ye dekho meri urja se bana mera beta ye jayega or duniya me burai hi burai hogi Hahahahaha ..
Devlok : sabhi devta dharm ki vijay se khus the pure dev lok me khusi ka mahol tha dev sabha me nritya gaan chal raha tha
Tabhi waha guru brihaspati agaye unke ate hi nritya gaan band karwa diya gaya .
Devta : pranam gugudev
Devguru: vijaya bawa
Devta : ascharya se gurudev ham abhi koi yudh me nahi ja rahe to fir ye vijaya vaba ka asirbad kiu
Devguru: kiu ke sankat ka janm ho gaya hai
Devta : kaisa samkat gurudev
Devguru: app sabhi ke liye buri khabar hai adharm ne apni Kali urja se ek balak ko banaya hai Jo shaitani saktio ka malik hai..
ab WO us ko dharti pe bej diya hai dharti lok WO balak waha pap failayega duniya se pyar or punya ko dhire dhire mitayega .
, Sabhi devta chintit ho gaye kiu ke abhi dharti par kalyug he to koi bhi dev abtar nahi le sakta ye bidhi ka vidhan hai .
Devta : gurudev apto jante hai abhi koi bhi dev dharti lok ja nahi sakta us dusht ko khatam karne to aaphi koi upai bataye..
hame kya karna chahiye is sankat ke sthitime app hi hame marg dikhaiye
Devguru: apni ankhe band karte hai or divya dtisti se dekhte hai fir apni akhe khol
Aaj se 100 sal bad jab maha purnima hogi us din bramha muhurt me ek balak ka janm hoga WO balak bahut hi nek dil sabse pyar karne wala hoga...
agar panch bhut ke devta apni apni urja ka ek ek hissa us balak me samahit kare..
jab WO balak apni akh pehli bar kholega jab uska man nirmal hoga
Devta : tabto WO balak bachpan sehi bahut saktisali hoga
Dev guru : ha hoga lekin uski saktio ko usme chupake rakhna hoga jabtak uski umra 18 sal na ho jaye kiu ki agar uski sakti jagrit rahi to shaitan ko uska abhas ho jayega
fir us bachhe ko khatra ho sakta hai or sirf sakti dena hi kafi nahi hoga usko uchit siksha or yudh kala ki bhi shiksha deni hogi ..
Devta: gurudev ye kaise mumkin hoga kiu ki ham mese waha koi bhi nahi ja payega ye to app jante hai fir kon chupa kar rakh payega panch tatwa ki sakti ko us balak ke ander..
Devguru : ha sirf ekhi hai Jo ye kar payenge
Devta : kon hai WO guruji.
Devguru : vagwan Vishnu ke abtar yodhao ke yodha guru o ke guru bagwan parshuram WO amar hai..
issiliye abhivi dharti lok me hai lekin unhone astra tyag diye hai or esvakt sadhna me hai
Devta: gurudev kya WO hamari sahayita karenge kiu ki WO abhi gusse me hai apne tin sisso ke karan jinhone adharm ka sath diya mahavarat me issiliye unhone sadhna me baithne ka nischay kiya tha
Kya wo firse us bachhe ko apna sisya banayenge
Devguru : unko manana hoga barna hamari udesdya puri nahi ho payegi
Devta: thik hai gurudev bagwan parshuram mahadev ke bakt hai agar mahadev kahe to WO onki bat nahi talenge
Fir sabhi devta pahuch gaye mahadev ke pass
Devta : pranam mahadev
Mahadev : devtao mujhe pata hai app sabhi kis uddesya aye hai
Devta : mahadev ham sabhi badi unmid se apke pass ayehe apse sahaita ke kiye
Mahadev : thik hai mai parshuram ko uss bachheko siksha dene ke liye mana lunga ap sabhi nischint rahe
Devta : khusi se dhanwad mahadev Fir sabhi devta lot aye apne devlok Udhar guru parshuram Himalaya ke ek vishesh gufa me sadhna me Lin tha
Tabhi parshuram ke man me mahadev ki awaj gunji
Mahadev : wats parshuram
Parshuram : pranam mahadev
Mahadev : wats mai tumhe ek karya dena chahta hu kya tum WO karoge
Parshuram: mahadev aggya kare mera ye jivan dhanya ho jayega agar apki kisi karya aya
Mahadev : wats ajse 100 baras bad maha purnima ke bramha muhurt me ek balak ka janm hoga usne panch tatwa devo ke milit urja hogi..
Jise tumhe siksha or yudh kala sikhani hogi jisse age chalke WO duniya se pap or shaitan ko mar sake or jabtak WO bachha 18 sal ka na ho jayi uski rakhsha or uski saktiya bhi chupani hogi
Parshuram: apki agaya sirodharya mahadev
100 sal bad duniya puri badal gayi thi Charo or nafrat hingsha Mara mati Kahi dharm ke naam pe kahi bhasa ke naam pe kahi rang bed ke nam pe Duniya se iswar ke liye astha lagbag khatam honeko thi
Delhi ke sabse bade hospital ke pregnancy ward me ek aurat dard se chikh rahi thi Aj uske bete ka janm hone wala tha
abi kuchi der me subha honeko thi tabhi ward ke ek khidki se suraj ki pehli kiran us aurat pe padi Oooomasaaa
Tabhi bachhe ka janm hua jab bachhe ne akh kholi tabhi khidkise ek roshni ka gola us bachhe me samagayi
bachhe ka pura badan bhatti ke tarha garam hone laga or bachhe ki Rone ki awaje ane lagi
Doctor : bachhe ko letake ohhh ye bachha to bhatti ke tarah garam ho gaya ye kaise possible hai or WO roshni kya thi
Nurse : ohh may God doctor ye dekhiye is bachhe ki ankhe
Dortor : how is this possible iski ankhe to puri blue hai ye kaise mumkin hai Tavi waha roshni chamakti hai or koi ata hai us roshni se sabhi behose ho jate hai
WO admi bachhe ke sar par hath rahta hai fir gayab waha WO admi nahi tha
Doctor ko hosh ajata hai nurseko bhi hosh ajata hai par unko kuch yaad nahi rahta kya hua tha jab WO bachhe ko dekhte hai to bachha normal tha
unko kuch bhi yaad nahi abhi kya hua tha bas ye yaad hai ladka paida hua Bachhe ki ma ko bhi hosh agayi
Doctor : Mubarak ho apko ladka hua hai
Ma : kaha hai mera bachha tabhi nurse bachhe ko make pass leta deti hai ma to bachhe ko pyar se chumne lagti hai
Doctor bahar jata hai Jaha bachhe ka pita besabri se khuskhabri ka intezar kar raha tha
Doctor : Mubarak ho vikram sahab apke ghar beta paida hua hai
Vikram : thank you doctor thank you apko pata hi nahi apne mujhe kitni badi khuskhabri di hai thank you veri much
Doctor : yeh to mera farz tha well jab party rakhiyega hame jarur bulayiyega
Vikram : jarur doctor jarur Kya mai ma or bachhe se mil sakta hu
Doctor : bas thodi derme onko ward me sift kar diya jayega fir mil lijiyega
Fir vikram phone nikal ta hai or kisiko phone lagata hai
Vikram : ha ma app dadi ban gayi apka pota agaya hai hamare wansh ka chirag agaya hai app taiyari karlo uske swagat ka fir kuch sun ke thik hai ma bad me bat karta hu call kat car deta hai
Kuch der bad Ward me
Vikram : dekho to ye bilkul tumpe gaya hai kitna sundar hai kitna akarshan hai isme , shalini tumne mujhko meri jindagi ki sabse badi khusi de di hai mera varish
Uska nam danveer hoga ye dono hatho se bhi agar doulat batega firvi khatam nahi hogi or Singh khandan ka warish hai to veer to hona hi hai issiliye danveer
Shalini : kya apbi apne nam bhi rakh diya isko ham veer bulayenge mera pyara veer Dono aisehi bate karte rahte hai
Wohi dusri taraf shaitan ko dharti par kisi maha sakti ki tarango ka ahsas hota hai magar jabtak WO us tarango ka picha kar usko dhundta WO sakti tarange gayab ho gayi
shaitan koi shuk ho jata hai jarur devtao ne kisiko beja hai usko Marne ke liye magar WO kon hai kaha hai ye nahi pata
..frnds..yeh story main aap sabhi ko samarpit karta hu aap sabhi ke liye he likhuga Mai app sabhi se bas pyar or sath ki asha karta hu …..pintu
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 1:28:55 GMT 5.5
new story update 2
Introduction
Danveer Singh : hero
Vikram Singh : danveer ke pita top 5 business man in India
Shalini sing : danveer ki ma house wife very sexy cure caring
Rubi : danveer ki badi bahan (details story me pata chalta rahega)
Neha: danveer ki dusri badi bahan ( details story me pata chalta rahega)
Dadi : vikram ki ma ghar ki mukhiya danveer ki dadi
Dada : death ho gayi hai
( baki ke patra kahani ke anusar unka parichay hota rahega)
Singh paribar India ke top 5 amir logo me shumar hai Unka business des videsh me faila hua hai
magar is paribar ko or doulat ko samhal ne wala bas ek hi beta tha vikram Singh uske pita ki mritu ho gayi hai uske family me bas uski ma uski patni shalini our do betiya thi
rubi or neha koi beta nahi tha Jo is khandan ko age badhaye Vijay bhi ab kamjor ho chala tha usme ab takat nahi bachhi thi bachhe paida karneki
par bagwan ko unpar raham agaya or onki patni pregnant ho gayi Or akhir kar maha purnima ki shbha ak bachhe ka janm hua aj WO bachhe ko lekar hospital se ghar Jane wale the
Vikram : chalo shalini discharge ki sari formility puri ho gayi
Shalini : uthte huye thik hai ji chalte hai jara veer ko pakadiye mai kapde thik karu
Vikram : alle alle mera veer aaja apne papa ke pass
Shalini : ye kya app bachhe ke sath bachhe bangaye chaliye ho gaya Fir dono niche gaye gate pehli 10 gurd hath me gun liye khade the
onke piche 3 cham chamati hui car khadi thi Vikram or shalini bich wale car me baith ke danveer ko leke guards samne or piche ke gadio me baith gaye cars chal padi manjil ki or
Karib 30 min bad unki car ek alishsn bangle me enter hui bangle ke Charo taraf bahut hi bada garden ek lon suming pool our ek running pad bhi tha
car bich ke raste se chal ta hua bangle ke gate ke pass ruka Dono carse uter kar gate ke taraf badhe hi the ki gate khul gaya an aurat arti ki thali liye khadi thi
Aurat : beti ruko pehle tumhari arti to utar lu mera pota aya hai ghar ka chirag aya hai oski bina arti utare kaise ander a sakti ho fir unhone ma bachhe ki arti utari Shalini ne jhuk ke unke pair chhye ma
Shalini : ma dekhiye hamari dua Kabul ho gayi hai apka pota danveer
Dadi : veer ko goud me lete huye mera pyara pota or uske mathe pe kiss kiya fir WO ander chale gaye ander ate hi
Do pariya ladkhadate kadamke sath bhag ke ake shalini se lipat gayi ma ma kahte huye Ye or koi nahi rubi or neha the
Rubi : ma app kaha chali gayi thi
Shalini : tum dono pariyo ke liye gudda lane taki tum apni gudiya ki sadi us gudde se kar sako
Neha : kaha hai gudda ma do na mujhe
Shalini : beti ye dekho fir sahilini ke dadi ki our ishara kiya dono dadi ke pass chale gaye or veer ko gour se dekhne lage
Rubi : ma ye gudda Hilta bhi hai isse mai sadi karungi
Naha : nahi ma isse mai sadi karungi fir dono jhagadne lage
Sabhi unki is masumiyat ko dekh hasne lage fir
Shalini : beti ye tumhara chota bhai hai tumhara pyara khilona
Rubi : ye mera bhai agaya mera bhai agaya
Neha : ye mera bhai agaya mera bhai agaya
Rubi : mujhko do na mera bhai mera dulha
Neha : nahi mujhko do ye mera hai
Dadi : beti abhi ye chota hai tum nahi samhal paogi ek kam karte hai isee mai ghar me palki me leta deti hu fir tum dono isse khel na thik hai
Rubi neha : thik hai dadi
Shalini : hai kitni masum hai meri betiya apne bhai ko hi apna dulha keh rahi hai
Fir dadi veer ko ghar vikram shalini ke room me ja kar usko leta deti hai or rubi or neha veer ko dekhne lagte hai
ye tha onke pyar ki suruwat bachpan ki wo masum si bate onke dil me ghar kar gayi Dadi bahar ati hai
Dadi : beta vikram kal puja rakhi hai intezam karwa dena bachhe ki kundli bhi banwani hai
Vikram : ji ma mai karwa deta hu sara intezam fir shalini se jao tum thk gayi hogi Jake rest karo or dekho dono kya kar rahi hai
apne gudde se shalini haste huye chali jati hai or vikram bhi nikal jata hai apne office Edhar shaitan kafi pareshan tha WO akh band kar kuch kehta hai
tabhi waha kuch log ate hai WO dekhne me insano jaise the magar onki ankhe puri Kali thi
Admi : ji malik apne hame yaad kiya Shaitan : ha raka tum sabhi puri duniya me fail jao or pata karo WO kon hai jisme hamari tarah sakti hai
par achhayi ki sakti mujhe ahsas hua hai koi to hai dharti par jisme devtao ki di hui sakti hai
magar mere usse dhundne se pehle hi WO sakti gayab ho gayi pata karo WO kon hai jaldi se jaldi
Raka : ji malik ham usko jarur dhund nikalenge Shaitan : jao Fir raka chala gaya
Edhar rat ho gayi thi sabhi sone ki taiyari kar rahe the
Shalini : beta kabtak tum dono veer ke sath kelte rahoge sona nahi hai kya dekho to veer bhi so gaya hai
Ajao sone kal fir se khel lena veer se
Rubi : mama ap sojao mai mere dulhe ke pas hi rahungi
Neha : Maivi
Shalini : beti ye tera bhai hai dulha nahi ab aabhi jao nahi to mai veer ko dadi ke pass bej dungi
Rubi neha : nahi mama ham arehe hai sone tabhi vikram room me ata hai
Vikram : kya chal raha hai ma beti me
Shalini : haste huye sab vikram ko bata deti hai fir dono hasne lagte hai
Fir sab so jate hai par rubi neha nahi soti shalini or vikram ke sotehi dono fir se chali yati hai veer ke pass
par the to bachhe hi kuchi der me dono wohi veer ke pass farsh pe ludak jati hai Agli shubha
Veer ke Rone se sabki nind khuli jab shalini ne dono ko Farash pe sote paya to WO samajh gayi ke kya hua hoga
Fir shalini ne dono utha ke bed pe leta deti hai or kambal se dhak ke sula deti hai vikram bhi uth jata hai Shalini veer ko dudh pilane lagti hai
jab WO veer ke akho me dekhti hai to usme hi kho jati hai veer ki ankhe halki blue thi bahut hi chamak thi
issiliye shalini usme kho gayi Vikram ke hilane se WO hosh me ayi Vikram kya hua kaha kho gayi
Shalini : kahi bhi nahi bas yesehi Fir shalini veer ko firse leta ke bathroom chali jati hai fresh hone Aisehi din beet jata hai or sham ho jati hai
Dadi : vikram guruji ke aneka Wakt ho gaya hai puja ki taiyariya to puri hai na
Vikram : ma aap chinta na kare Maine khud sare intezam check kiye hai Dadi : thik hai beta tabhi guruji ajate hai
Dadi : pranam guruji ayiye fir unko unke jagah pe baithaya gaya
Vikram shalini veer ko god me liye : pranam guruji or unke pair chute hai
Guruji : jiti raho sada khus raho fir puja ka anusthan suru ho jata hai
Dadi : beti jao veer ko leke puja me baith jao vikram tum bhi Dono ma ke kahe anusar baith jate hai
veer ko god me leke rubi neha bhi apni ma ke side me hi bath jati hai dono ekpal bhii veer ko akela nahi chod rahi thi
Guruji janm ka bakt or din ke anusar veer ki kundli banane lagte hai Kundli ko dekh ke pandit ji ke hosh ud jate hai fir WO bachhe ko godi me lete hai
Or bachhe ki hath ko dekhte hai hath ki rekhao ko dekh unke hotho pe smile ajati hai
Kiu pandit ji ke hosh ud gaye kya dekha unhone veer ke hatho ki rekha me onki muskan ki wajah kya hai janne ke liye bane rahe or intezar kare agle update ka
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 1:31:53 GMT 5.5
new story update 3
Guruji ko muskurate dekh dadi unse puchti hai
Dadi : kya hua guruji aap muskura kiu rahe hai
Guruji : ye bachha bada vagyasali hai isse Jude kuch bate hai Jo mai karna chahta hu par ye munasib samay nahi hai is bat ke liye puja ke bad ham akele me bat karenge …
Dadi: ji guruji jaisi apki marji
Shalini : guruji koi chinta ki bat to nahi hai na ( thi to akhir ma kaise na pareshan hoti )
Guruji smile ke sath : Jo bhi hai mai ap tino ko bata dunga akele me
Shalini : ji guruji
Fir puja bhi bidhi suru hui or puja khatam hua
Sabhi mehman chale gaye ab ghar me sirf pariwar bale noukar or guruji hi the
Vikram guruji ko leke ek kamre me agaye ye uska study room tha bahut hi sandar
Sabhi us room me agaye matlab dadi shalini vikram veer door band kar diya gaya
Vikram : ji guruji kahiye mere bete ki kundli me kya dekha apne
Guruji : tumhara beta anokha hai ye maha purnima ke bramha muhurt me paida hua iska man nirmal hai nekdil hai or isme shuvta hai
Guruji : beti veer ko dena fir guruji veer ko god me lete hai
Fir uske hath ko faila ke hatheli dikhate hai
Guruji : ye dekho Iske hatheli me rekhao ne swastik ka nishan banaya hai Isko iswar ka ashirwad hai aisa bacha kabhi kabhi paida hota hai
Magar ek paresani hai
Shalini tadap ke : kya guruji kya paresani hai
Guruji : beti aise bachhe ke Jivan me khatre hote hai kiu ke ye achhayi ke sath hota hai to uske Jivan me sankat ate rahenge isko isliye taiyar rahna padega
Vikaram : WO kaise guruji isko kaise taiyar karenge
Guruji : dekhiye abhi to ye bachha hai par jab bada hoga to iske dusman badhenge
tab isko apni atmraksha karni padegi
Vikram : ye apni atmaraksha kaise karega
Guruji; agar meri mano to jab ye 12 bars ka ho to usse mere guru sri ramanand ke pass bej dena 6 baras ke liye
iski siksha or atma raksha ki kala ye wohi sikh sakta hai guru ramanand atmraksha ki kala me mahir hai
or WO Simla ke sabse bade vidyalaya me sikshak hai unhone hi mujhe atmraksha ki kala shikhayi hai or wo mere hisab se sabse uttam honge veer ke liye
Iss batse shalini ke akhome asun ajate hai apne jigar ke tukde ko apne se dur karne ke nam se
Dadi ka vi wohi hal tha Vikram thoda majboot dil ka tha to usne guruji ko ha kardi
Kiu ki WO janta tha ke is duniya me jina hai to majboot hona hi padta hai or jab koi anokha ho to orbhi Jada Jo sirf sachhai pe chalta ho
Guruji chale gaye
Ghar me avi mahol kuch gamgin tha jo ghar kuch der pehle khusise jhum raha tha abhi bichadne ka dukh fail gaya
Vikram sannata ko todta hua kehta hai
Vikram : jo kal hona hai uske liye aaj ko kiu itna soche ye to dekho iswar ne hame
ek anokha beta diya hai Jo sadio me paida hota hai hame to khusi manani chahiye
Ye ham pe badi jimmedari hai ke ham isko achhi siksha de Jo iske jiban ke laksya ko pura kare uske liye agar hame kuch dukh uthana pade to ham ko us chij ko khusi khusi Kabul karna chahiye
Shalini : ji app thik kah rahe hai
Dadi : mera anokha pota ham to dhanya ho gaye aise bachhe ko pake
Chalo babut rat ho gayi hai khana khate hai bachhiya bhi intezar me hai apne gudde ki
Fir sabhi bahar agaye Wohi dusri taraf guruji apne asram pahuch gaye jaha koi unka intezar kar raha tha
Admi : aao mere bachhe tumne apna kam bakhubi kiya unko utna hi bataya jitna jaruri tha
Guruji : dhanyabad gurudev
Shaitan sadhna me baitha tha apne akhe band karke kisise bate kar rahatha
Shaitan : pitaji mujhe dharti pe bahut hi badi sakti ka ahsas hua hai
Adharm: mere bete devta bahut hi chalak hai jarur koi na koi sadyantra racha hoga unhone tum sabdhan rahna or pata lagao who konsi sakti hai uske samne anese pehle
uske bareme puri suchna malum karo ke WO kon hai usme kon konsi sakti hai fir uske samne Jana
Shaitan : ji pitaji Maivi to Kali saktio ka malik hu mujhse saktisali kon hoga
app chinta na kare mai devtao ke kisivi chal ko kamyab nahi hone dunga isbar aphi jitoge
Adharm : mujhe tumpe pura bharosa hai
Shaitan : pranam pitaji
Edhar ghar me dono bachhiya lage huye the veer ke sath khel ne kabhi veer ke hath ko chute kabhi gal ko kabhi pair ko
Rubi : mama mera gudda bada kab hoga
Ma: beti jab tum badi ho jaogi tab tumhara bhai bhi bada ho jayega
Neha : mai to badi ho gayi ma dekho ( or wo khadi ho gayi ) shalini ki hasi Putti gayi
Ma : beti jab tum mere jitni badi ho jaogi tab
Rubi : thik hai ma mai roj dudh piyungi to jaldi badi ho jayungi na
Ma: ha beta or tum apne bhai ka bhi khayal rakhna
Neha : mai kyayal rakhungi
Rubi : nahi mai khayal rakhungi
Dono ka aisa pyar dekh shalini khus ho jati hai
Samay ka chakra chal ta raha ab veer 5 sal ka ho gaya aj uske school ka pehla din tha
Ma : beta abhi subha ke 5 baje hai abhi time hai beta school jane me school 10 baje khulega
Veer utsuk tha apne school jane ke nam se issiliye subha 5 bahe hi uth gaya
or apne mommy ko bhi utha diya or jid karne laga
Veer : mama late ho jayegi jaldi utho na school jana hai
Ma: beta abhi time hai so jao beta mai jaga dungi tujhe sahi wakt par
Veer : nahi ma sab so rahe ho late ho jayenge utho na
Mai didio ko utha ke ata hu
Fir veer chal pada apni didio ke pass
Darbaje pe khada ho
Veer: didi did utho na ( veer ki awaj sun dono uth jate hai hadbadate huye or dodte huye darwaja khula)
Dono eksath : kya hua guddu kya hua dono ke chehre par paresani saf saf pata
chal rahi thi dono thi choti par apne vai ke liye dono ka pyar hi kuch or tha
Veer : didi late ho raha hai ap dono so rahi ho
Rubi : der kis bat ke liye
Veer : hame school jana hai na
Dono eksath piche mudke wall clock dekhti hai fir dono ki hasi Putti hai
Neha : guddu abhi time hai aaja room me
Fir dono guddu ko room me late hai
Rubi : guddu abhi time hai aja hamare pass soja ham sahi time pe tumko jaga denge
Veer : didi mujhe nind nahi arahi utho na
Dono veer ko hug kar ke let jate hai bechara veer ab kya kare apne didi ki bat manna hi pada
Rubi or neha veer ke dono baju pakad ke lat jati hai or ektak veer ko delhte rahte hai nind dono ko nahi arahi thi ab to bas dono veer me khoye the
Shalini vi uth chuki thi or fresh ho chal padi Nasta banane
fir Jab wo dono betio ke room me gayi unko uthane to dekha
Bechara veer dono behno ke bich fasa hai dono uske do baju pakde sulaye huye hai
Ma: beti kya kar rahi ho uthne do use kabtak aise usko sulaye rakhogi
Rubi : ma mera gudda hai meri marji
Neha : ma guddu hamara hai ham iska kyayal rakhengi aap jayiye
Ma : pehle khud to apna khayal rakh liya karo
Fir shalini ne tino ko taiyar kia or naste ke liye le ayi
Rubi avi 9 sal ki thi neha 7 sal or veer 5 sal
Dono ladkiya thi to choti lekin the bahut hi samajhdar bas ek mamle ko chod kar or wo tha veer ko lekar
Nasta karke chal pade school ki or
Aaj veer ka pehla din tha school ka issiliye shalini khud gayi usko school chodne
Veer ko school ke gate pehi teacher ke hato veer ko shop deti hai
Par jabtak veer akhose ojhal nahi ho jata usko dekhti rahti hai shalini ki akh nam ho chuki thi
Bacho ke jivan ke ye kuch pal hote hai jab bachhe jindagi me age badhte hai to ma ke akhome asun chalak hi jate hai
Shalini bacho ko chod ghar lot ati hai ghar ki ek louti bahu jo thi jinnedariya bhi thi
Veer ka school ka pehla din bahut hi utsukta se bita par loute wakt veer ko ek bachha dikha
jo school ke gate pe khada ho school ko nihar raha tha par wo school ka bachha nahi tha
Veer bade gour se us bachhe ko dekh raha tha tabhi ak teacher ate hai or puchte hai
Teacher : veer ke sarpe hath ferte huye kya hua veer beta kya dekh raheho
Veer : teacher wo dekhiye wo ladka school nahi aya bahar kiu khada hai
Teacher : beta wo school me nahi padta maine usee roj dekha hai roj wo yaha khada rahta hai
Veer : kiu teacher
Teacher : lagta hai wo garib hai wo school li fees nahi de sakta
Veer : to kya mai meri fees de sakta hu ( masum bachhe ko kon samjhaye duniya dari )
Teacher : beta tum kiu doge fees tumhare papa hai na wo bahut amir hai
Veer : kya wo iski bhi fees de sakte hai
Teacher : ha wo to bahut amir hai wo chahe to aise hajaro lakho ki fees de sakte hai
Veer ke man me ye bat ghar kar gayi
Tabhi waha rubi or neha bhi agai fir tino gadi me baith ke chal pade
Ghar ki or gadi or driver or security onka gate pehi intezar karti thi roj
Edhar shaitan pure gusse me tha aj panch sal honeko hai firvi us sakti ko Wo dhund nahi paya nahi uske shaitani sena jo puri duniya me faila hua hai
Shaitan : aise kaise ho sakta hai kya use jamin kha gayi ya asman
Raka : malik ho sakta hai wo lout gaya ho jahase aya tha
Saitan : aisa nahi ho sakta wo devta nahi ho sakta kalyug me devta dharti par nahi asakte
jarur koi or hoga jis ko devto ne sakti di hogi lekin wo gaya kaha khaha chupa jisse maivi nahi dhund paraha hu
Veer jab ghar pahucha to pura pariwar uska intezar kar raha tha
Shalini : agaya mera lal kaisa raha school ka pehla din
Veer : bahut achha ma Vikram : aaja mera sher or app to bade ho gate school jane lage Veer : papa kya apke pass bahut paise hai
Vikram : ha beta paise to bahut hai magar ye tum kiu puch raha hai
Veer: papa aaj maine ek ladke ko dekha jo school ko ghur raha tha to teacher ne bataya ke wo school me nahi padta kiu ki wo school ki fees nahi de sakta
Teacher ne bataya apke pass bahut paise hai ap chahe to bahut sare ke fees de sakte hai to wo padh sakte hai
Kya ab us bahhe ka fees denge take wo padh sake
Sabhi veer ki bate sun mantra mugdh ho gaye kiu ki kisi 5 sal ke bachhe me itna sochme samajhne ki sakti nahi hoti
Dadi : guruji ne sahi kahatha ye koi amm bachha nahi hai abhi se apne naam ke anurup hai jab ye bada hoga to kya hoga
Shalini apne bachhe ko gale laga leti hai mera anokha bachha
Vikram : Mere bachhe ki har ichha puri hogi mai kalhi us bachhe ki admission ki bat kar lunga
Veer : thank u papa
Vikram : or itnahi nahi mai ek sangsha vi banata hu jaha garib bacho ki siksha ka pura intezam ham karenge
Us sangstha ka nam veer pe hoga
Fir din me kuch kas nahi hua rat ka diner hua or sabhi so gaye
Kal ka din kya lane wala tha veer ke jindagi me kya pata
Ye janne ke liye bane rahe or intezar kare agle update ka
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 1:37:17 GMT 5.5
new story update 4
Dusre din veer rubi neha taiyar hoke chal pada school ki or School pahuch ke veer class me chala gaya or rubi neha bhi
Abhi lunch time honewala tha ke school me ek naye bachhe ke sath head misstress ne entry li
HeadT : students ye hai biswa kumar aaj se ye apke class me padhe ga
Ladka dekhne me bahut hi garib ghar ka lag raha tha uske kapde bhi purane the
hath me ek purana kitabo ka jhola tha koi modern bag nahi purana basta kahsakte hai
HeadT chale gaye wo ladka rah gaya wo ladka kuch darte huye age badha jaha bhi baithne jata dusre ladke use dhutkar dete
Ye sab veer se dekha nahi gaya veer age badh uske hath pakad apne paas bench pe baitha leta hai ye bachha or koi nahi wohi bachha tha jo roj school ko dekhta tha veer ne use pehchan liya tha
Baithne ke bad
Veer : mera nam veer hai didi mujhko guddu bulate hai Kya mujhse dosti karoge
Biswa : mera nam biswa hai kya sach me tum mere dost banoge
Veer: ha issiliye to mere pass baithaya hai Tabhi lunch break ho gaya veer ne apne bagse lunch box nikala or uska hath pakad bahar chal pada apni behno ke pass
Veer lunch se jada apne dost ko apni didio se milwane ki utsukta thi Edhar rubi neha bhi lunch break ki hi rah dekh rahethe jaise hi break hua dono chal pade veer se milne Charo raste mehi mil gaye
Veer : di dekho mera pehla dost school me
Rubi : achha to kya nam hai iska
Veer : biswa
Fir sabhi ek jagah baith gaye sabne tifin kholi
Neha : biswa tumhara tifin kaha hai
Biswa : mere pass nahi hai koi tifin
Veer : koi bat nahi tum mere tifin se kha lo itna bol ke veer ne pura tifin biswa ko badha diya
Rubi or neha ko isse koi fark nahi pada dono khud kha kam rahi thi veer ko khila jada rahi thi
Veer : kya hua biswa khao na dekho kitna kuch to hai Biswa bhi bhukha tha to wo bhi khane laga
Rubi neha veer ko khila ke khus veer dost ko khila ke khus or bisw aisa dost pake khus Lunch break ke bad sabhi chale gaye apne apne class me In the class
Teacher : bachho math ki book nikalo or page no 5 kholo Veer ne book nikal li magar biswa ne nahi
Teacher : biswa tumhara book kaha hai
Biswa darte huye : wo mere pas book nahi hai
Veer khada hoke : teacher ham ek book share karenge Teacher kuch nahi bolti bas veer ko dekhti rahti hai
5 sal ki umer me aisi soch dekh hairan thi school khatam hua Veer biswa ko lekar bahar aya jaha uski bahne intezar kar rahi thi
Veer : chalo di chalo biswa tumhe ghar chod denge
Biswa : nahi nahi mai chala jayunga najdik hi to hai ( biswa veer se 2 sal bada tha) par veer nahi sunta usko car me baitha hi leta hai
Car chal padti hai biswa bas veer or car ko hi dekh raha tha ye sab uske liye naya tha car ek anath asram pe ake ruki biswa uter gaya Veer chal pada ghar
Aisehi samay bitta gaya Veer or biswa gahre dost bangaye Ab veer 12 sal ka hone wala hai kuch hi din baki hai
Shalini dadi vikram sabko ko apne bachhe se bichadne ka dukh satane laga
Is bare me abhi bhi rubi neha or biswa ko kuch pata nahi tha Unka pyar dekh kisiki himmat nahi horahi thi inko bataye
Veer : ma nasta do hame late ho raha hai aaj result nikalne wala hai jaldi jana hai ma
Ma : rukja beta abhi layi tu late nahi hoga abhi time hai
Rubi : ma hato aap mere guddu ko late kara dogi
Neha : ma guddu ka khayal ab ham rakh sakti hai Fir dono veer ko apne hatho se nasta khilati hai
Shalini apni betiome veer ke liye pyar dekh khus bhi thi or paresan bhi Kiu ki ab bas khuchi dino me veer ko jana hoga simla pure 6 sal ke liye Kal hi veer ka janm din tha or dusre din veer ko guruji lene ayenge kud
Tino nasta kar nikal gaye school veer class me hamesa first ata tha or biswa sccond kiu ki veer apni sari chije biswa se share karta tha
Biswa ko pata nahi tha ke uska padhai ka pura kharcha veer ke papa ne jo sanstha banayi hai veer ke nam se usse milti hai
Teeno jaldhi anath asram ke gate ke pass pahuch gaye jaha biswa inkahi intezar kar raha tha jab wo aye to biswa gadi me baith gaye
Biswa : good morning di good morning veer
Veer or didiya: good morning biswa
Veer : to bhai aaj kya lagta hai kaisa result ayega
Biswa : pata nahi bhai hope for the best
Rubi : tum dono to best hi ho mera guddu to top hi karega firse
Neha : ha guddu top karega firse ham sabse jada akal hai isme ekbar jo padh liye fir nahi bhulta iska mukabla ham nahi kar payenge
Biswa : sahi kaha di ham dono ekhi notes ekhi book padhte hai magar ye hamesha top kar jata hai mai sccond hota hu kuch to bat hai isme
Veer : koi bat nahi hai thoda jada padh liya kar tu bhi top karlega Mai koi asman se gira farista thodi hu
Fir aisehi bate karte huye school pahuch gaye School me result out ho chuka tha jab sabne result dekhe to as expected veer ne top kia tha biswa sccond tha Rubi or neha vi 5 to 10 rank me thi apni class me
Sabhi khusi khusi ghar lout aye biswa ko shalini ne sham ko anekeliye kaha tha veer ne bata diya Sham ko sab baithe the siting me biswa bhi achuka tha
Sabhi hasi majak kar rahe the ki vikam ne charo par bomb foda
Vikram : bachho aaj tum sabko ek raj ki bat batana chahta hu
Rubi : konsi raj ki bat hai papa
Vikram: beta bat ye hai ki ab veer ko simla jana hoga padhne 6 sal ke liye
Rubi : papa ye aap kya kah rahe hai guddu ko kiu jana hoga yaha bhi to padhayi ho sakti hai nahi papa mai guddu ko nahi jane dungi
Neha : papa ap aisa kiu kar rahe hai guddu ko mai kahi nahi jane dungi guddu mera hai apnehi to guddu ko hame diya tha mai nahi jane dungi
Ye kehte huye dono veer se lipat ke baith gayi jaise agar chod dengi to veer ko dur vej diya jaye ga dono ke akhome asun agaye
Unka pyar dekh shalini dadi ke bhi ankhome asun agaye
Vikram : beta ye jaruri hai veer ek anokha ladka hai isko bahut kuch sikhna hai jisse ye apni jindagi me sab jagah abwal ho or apni sursksha bhi kar sake iski jingagi me bahut khatre hai
Rubi : kya khatra kaisa khatra Neha: papa mai apne guddu ko kuch nahi hone dungi
Vikram : beta isko sab sikhna hoga warna ye apni raksha nahi kar payega ( vikram puri bat kisiko bhi batana nahi chahta tha )
Rubi : thik hai papa mai apne guddu ke sath jayungi Neha : maivi
Biswa : ancle agar aisi bat hai to mai bhi jayunga veer ke sath Mujhe bachpan se hi ehsas hota raha hai ye ham sab se alag anokha hai
Vikram : biswa tum sahi kehrahe ho Rubi neha biswa tum veer ke sath nahi ja sakte waha veer ki traning hogi padhayi vi hogi hard life hogi ye sab tum dekh nahi paogi
Rubi neha : mai kuch nahi janti mai jayungi apne guddu ke sath fir rote rote room me chale gayi or door lock kar liya
Vikram : beti suno to sahi puri bat suno to sahi par dono nahi rukti Veer ko to kuch samajh me hi nahi araha tha ho kya raha hai bas itna samJh aya usko simla me padhne or traning karne jana hai
Veer: papa kya mera jana jaruri hai
Vikarm : ha beta warna ham tujhko khud se dur kiu karte teri ma teri dadi jo asun baha rahi hai kya wo tujhse pyar nahi karte
Jo bi kar rahe hai teri balayi ki liye hi kar rahe hai
Veer : thik hai papa mai didio ko mana lunga app chinta na kare
Fir veer chal pada apni behno ke room me
Veer dor nock kar ta hai Veer : didi darwaja kholo mai hu Dono verr ki awaj sun ke jhat se darwaja kholdeti hai
Veer donoke ankho me asun dekh nahi pata uske bhi akhe nam ho gayi
Veer : didi mai app dono ke ankh me asun nahi dekh sakta please ap dono rona band karo dekho mere ankh me bhi asun agaye
Rubi : apni akhe saf karte huye guddu ham nahi rah payrnge tere bina
Veer: didi kya mai rah sakta hu apke bina
Neha : to papa kiu bej rahe hai tumko hamse dur
Veer : papa ko meri chinta hai issiliye papa ne mujhe bataya mujhe ye jaruri hai
Rubi : lekin ham nahi rah payenge apne guddu ke bina
Veer: apko kiss ne kaha app mere bina raho mai 6 sal ke liye ja raha hu naki hamesa ke liye
Apdono mujhse pyar kar ti ho na didi to ap dono mera intezar karna mai jald hi bapas ajayunga
Neha : par guddu
Veer : bas didi our kuch nahi ap donoko meri kasam
Rubi : guddu kasam kiu di thik hai ham tumhari kasam nahi tod sakte
Neha : hame bhool to nahi jaoge na
Veer: ye kaise mumkin hai didi aap dono to meri jaan ho
Chalo niche sab hamara intezar kar rahe hai diner ke liye Fir teeno niche agaye lekin udasi sabke ankhome thi
Jaise taise sabne khana khaya kal ka din khas tha kal veer ka janm din tha
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 1:40:06 GMT 5.5
new story update 5
Agle subha veer utha tab uski behne uskohi nihar rahi thi Veer uthte hi dono
Rubi neha: happy birthday guddu
Veer : dono ko gale laga kar thank you di
Rubi : guddu ye lo birthday gift
Veer : isme kya hai di jo bhi ho mujhe sabse pyara hoga
Veer jaldi se paket khola usme ek loket thi
Neha : guddu ye tumhe hamari yaad dilati rahegi
Loket ek love ki sakal me tha or wo khulta tha jisme veer or rubi or neha ki pic thi
Veer : dono ko gale laga leta hai Tabhi shalini dadi vikram bhi agaye happy birth day beta
Veer : thanks ma papa dadi
Beta ajao taiyar ho jao aaj puja rakhi hai guruji ayenge
Veer : thik hai papa abhi aya veer uthke bathroom me chala gaya
Sab niche agaye or aaj ke puja ki taiyaria karne lage biswa ko bhi bula liya tha
Khuch hi der me veer niche agaya ready hoke
Fir kya tha veer or biswa lag gaye batome baki sab puja ki taiyari kar rahe the karib ghante bar bad 10 baje ke karib guruji agaye
Dadi : Pranam guruji aiye guruji puja ki taiyariya ho gayi hai app bisram kar lijiye fir puja suru karte hai
Guruji : sada khus raho thik hai fir guruji ko bithaya gaya
to veer ki jane ki taiyariya ho gayi kal subha hi nikalna hai
Dadi : nam akhoke sath ji guruji ho gayi hai
Tabhi waha veer rubi neha or biswa agaye
Sabhi : pranam guruji
Guruji: khus raho bachho Fir suru ho gayi puja or puja ke bad guruji chale gaye
Sabne milke khana khaya fir veer chala gaya apne kamre me
Edhar sahilini ro rahi thi kya karti bechari thi to ma bete ki judai ke nam se hi ankhone barasna suru kar diya
Vikram : tum aise rowogi to kaise chalega
Shalini : kya karu ji ma hu na
Vikram : mera bhi to socho mera beta jigar ka tukre ko bejna pad raha hai par mai apne man ko majboot karke ye kar raha hu
take hamara bete ki vabisya surakshit kar saku
Inki bate hoti rahi or rat ke khane ke wakt bhi ho gaya aaj kisine veer ko akela nahi choda khane ke bad sabhi eksath ek hi room me soye veer ko to dono behne chipki so gayi thi
Agli subha sabne veer ko roti akho ke sath bida kiya khud guruji le gaye the apne sath veer ko
Guruji or veer agli subha hi simla pahuch gaye Veer ka admission to pehle hi ho gaya tha veer ko gruji le gaye sidhe apne gurudev ke pass jo abhi apne kamre me yog sadhna kar rahethe
Kamre ka darwaja khula hi tha jaise malum ho koi anewala hai
Guruji veer ko leke sidhe kamre me chale gaye ye school ke pass me hi pahadi pe ek khule maidan me bani thi
Guruji: gurudev me le aya apke sisya ko
Gdev: thik hai ab tum jao isko pass ke kamre me chod do kal se iski siksha suru hogi
Guruji : ji gurudev
Gurudev dekhne me ek 40 se 45 sal ke lag rahe the unke mookh pe halki kali dadhi thi bahut hi tez tha chehre me Veer ko kuch samajh hi nahi araha tha
kya ho raha hai kuch bhii spast nahi tha,wo room me agaya karne ko kuch tha nahi guruji vi chale gaye to veer bhi so gaya
Thak thak thak Darwaje pe hui dastak se veer ki nind khuli
Veer ne darwaja khola samne gurudev khade the
Veer : pranam gurudev
G dev : chalo beta khana khalo Jab ham khane pe pahuche to waha bas vej food hi the fal adi or chawal or dal sabji
Veer ne man mar ke khana khaya fir kya tha kuch karne ko tha nahi to Bahar ke najaro ka luft uthane laga ye ek pahadi tha
ghar ke samne ek khula maidan maidan ke bad ek dalan rasta city me jata hai jaha ek school hai jaha veer ko padhna hai
ghar ke piche pedo ka jal bana hua tha as pas kisi or ke rehne ki koi gunjais nahi thi
Najaro ka luft uthatne ke bad veer ghar lout aya sham jo gayi thi tabhi gurudev ne veerko kamre se awaj lagayi
Veer dhire kadmose kamre me ghusa samne gurudev ek kursi pe baithe huye the tabhi gurudev ki awaj ayi
G dev : veer beta tumhe pata hai tum ko yaha kiu laya gaya hai
Veer : gurudev pitaji ne bataya tha mujhko ap siksha denge take mai vabisya me apni raksha kar saku
G dev : sahi kaha par mai tum ko bata du ye itna asan nahi hoga
Veer: ji gurudev mai apni puri koisis karunga
G dev : thik hai dekhte hai kal subha 5 baje se ham siksha aramv karenge
Veer : ji gurudev Fir veer chal pada sone
Subha 5 baje veer ko gurudev ne uthaya
Gdev : Kisivi chij ko sikhne ke liye ekagrata honi chahiye or ekagrata kebal yug sadhna se ati hai to jaise mai karta hu waise hi karna
Veer : ji gurudev
Fir gurudev asan laga ke baith gaye back pura sidha or fir om ka nam lene lage
Veer ne vi waise hi karne ki koisis par 5 min me hi ekagrata tut gayi Eisa kai bar hua tabhi gurydev ki awaj ayi
G dev : har mat mano beta karte karte hi kar paoge Veer waise hi karta raha karib ek ghanta sadhna karne ke bad gurudev ne fir kaha
Gdev : ab is maidan ke 3 chakkar lagao jabtak pura nahi kar lete dodte rahna Veer bhi kya karta dodne laga bahut muskil se 2 round lagaya or thak ke haftne laga
Gdev : veer rukna nahi hai . ..jaise taise veer ne round pura kia
Gdev : abhi ke liye kafi hai jao taiyar ho jao school bhi jana hai Veer bhi chala gaya fresh hone aaj to gurudev ne thaka hi diya tha veer ko
Veer fresh hoke taiyar ho gaya or chal pada school gurudev ke sath School bhi bahut hi sant tha veer apne classroom me gaya or class atend kia Veer ka man nahi lag raha tha yaha
use reh reh ke apni didio ki ma papa dadi biswa ki yaad arahi thi Aisahi hal veer ke ghar pe bhi tha dono behne sabke samne normal rehti thi lekin akele me apne bhai ki tasvir se ghanto bate karti thi
Sayad ye bhai behen ke pyar se kuch jada hi tha Samay ka chakra ekbar fir chala veer ki traning din pratidin badti ja rahithi
ab usko atma rakhsa ki kala bhi sikhaya ja raha tha har sham ko kulhadi de di jati ghar ke piche ke jungle se lakdi kat ni padti
Ek taraf school me modern life ko jita tha wohi gurudev ke sath satwik jivan jisse uska man or sarir se saktisali hota ja rahatha ab 1 sal beet gaya
veer bhi is jivan ko apna liya par apne pariwar ki yaad khaskar uske behno ki yaad usko satati thi Veer or gurudev sadhna me lin tha tavi veer ne gurudev ki awaj suni
G dev : mere bachhe tum ne aaj siksha ka pehla padaw par kar liya hai Veer itna sunte hi chock ke apni ankh kholi or gurudev ki ur dekhne laga
Veer chock kiu gaya kya janne ke liye wait for next update
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 1:50:46 GMT 5.5
new story update 6
Ghabrao nahi mere bachhe ye mai hi hu mai tumse mansic tarango ke jariye bate kar raha hu
Veer : par gurudev ye kaise ho sakta hai
Gdev: is duniya me kuch bhi asambhav nahi
Veer: ji gurudev mai samajh gaya
G dev : ab hum dusre padav me jayenge iske liye tumhari saririk or mansik saktio ka pura istemal karna padega
Veer: ji gurudev ap jo bhi bolenge mai wo karunga
G dev : jao or is maidan ke 10 chakkar lagao or ye lo is patte ko apne pairo me bandh lo
Veer : ji gurudev fir veer ne us patte ko apne pairo me bandh liya or dodne laga par wo 5 chakar me hi thak gaya lekin ruka nahi dodte raha akhir kar usne dod puri ki thakawat se veer ka bura hal ho gaya
Jab wo patta kholne laga to gurudev ne mana kar duya
G dev : usse dinvar aise hi pehne rahne ko kaha
Veer ne bhi waise hi kiya aisehi kuch din beet gaye
Subha sadhna fir dod fir school uske bad marsal arts fir lakdi katna
Ab to veer ko bhi patte ki adat pad gayi
ab koi fark nahi pad raha tha aisehi 6 mahine beet gaye tab jake gurudev ne patta nikal ne ko diya
Veer ki gati badh gayi thi sarir se majbut ho gaya tha veer aise hi din beet gaye
Aaj veer ko 3 sal ho gaye traning karte huye veer apne parwar ko bahut yaad kar raha tha uske hothome smile or akhome asun agaye
G dev : mere bachhe kya pariwar ki yaad arahi hai
Veer : ha gurudev bas unko yaad kar raha tha kitna pyar karte the mujhse
G dev : pyar karte nahi the pyar karte hai unka wo pyar hi tumhe is muskil jivan ko jine ki sakti deta hai
Veer : ha gurudev app ne sahi kah rahe hai unki pyar ki sakti hi to mujhe sab karne ki prerna deti hai
G dev : veer ab tumko apni sarir ke akhri had tak mehnat karni hogi jisse tum apne sarir or man par kabu kar sako
Veer : ji gurudev
G dev : udhar dekh wo jo hal hai jisse jamin ko chir ke anaj paida kiya jata hai usko tum ko kechna hai or is pure maidan ko bij lagane layak banana hai
Veer : ji gurudev ap jo bolenge wo mai karunga
Veer chala gaya or us hal lo uthake apne kandhe pe rakh kichne laga
Veer apni puri takat lagakar usko kichta hai tab ja kar hal thoda age badh ti hai
Veer apni takat ki akhri had tak mehnat karta hai
Aisehi veer ko kadi mehnat or training karte huye aj 5 sal ho gaye the
veer ka baktiwa hi badal gaya tha gyan sadgi se varpur jawa mard banchuka tha
Gdev : veer ajtak maine tumko saririk or mansik siksha di hai lekin tumhari asli siksha to abb aramv hogi
Veer : ji gurudev
G dev : veer ab jo sikhsha mai tumhe dene ja raha hu isse tumhara jivan hi badal jayega
Veer : gurudev apki agya mere liye iswar ki bani hai
Gdev : khus raho mere bachhe to soro karte hai
Veer : ji gurudev
G dev : ye duniya 5 tatwa se bani hai tum batao wo panch tatwa kya hai
Veer : ji gurudev agni jal hawa dharti or asman
Gdev : agar in tatwa pe kisine kabu kar liya to wo kuch bhi kar dakta hai
Veer: kya in ko kabu karna sambhav hai
G dev : ha sambhav hai lekin iske liye hajaro salo tapasya karni hoti hai
Aaj Tum ko tumhare jivan ka uddeshya or wo raj batane ja rahahu jo tumhare Mata pita ko bhi nahi pata
Veer tum koi sadharan insan nahi ho tumko devtao ne chuna hai duniya se ek bhayanak shaitan ko khatam karne or duniya me prem or iswar pe astha ko failane ke liye
Tumko panchtatwa ke devtao ne apni sakti ka ansh tum me samil kiya hai
Veer: mujhme kiu mai hi kiu
Gdev: isliye ke wo tum hi ho jo us sakti ko dharan kar sakte the tumhara janm maha purnima ke bramha muhurt me hua hai
tum me achhai bhari hai panchtatwa kewal usike pass ho sakti hai jo is sakti ka durupyog na kare issiliye devtao ne tumhe chuna hai
Veer: par mai hi kiu devta khud us shaitan ko mar sakte the na
G dev : nahi beta ye sambhab nahi jai kiuki Devta bidhi ke bidhan se bandhe huye hai jiske anusar kalyug me koi bhi devta dharti par nahi aa sakte issiliye tumhe chuna gaya hai
Veer : par gurudev mujhme to koi sakti nahi hai
G dev : hai beta wo tumhare ander chupake rakhi gayi hai jab tum 18 ke ho jaoge tum us sakti ka pura istemal kar paoge
Veer : gurudev mere ander us sakti ko chupaya kisne devta to dharti par a nahi sakte
G dev : maine
Veer : kya apne par kaise
Gdev : jab tumhara janm hua tha maine us sakti ko tumhare ander bandh diya
Veer : devtao ke sakti ko aap kaise bandh sakte hai
kya app me bhi sakti hai aap kon hai aap jo dikhte hai wo hai nahi kiu ki devta ki di sakti ko koi devta hi band sakta hai aap kon hai gurudev
G dev : bahut achhe bete tumne sach much mere gyan ko dharan kia hai Mai parsuram hu ,
Veer : kya app wohi parshuram hai yodhao ke yodha guruo ke guru vagman narayan ke avtar
Parshuram: ha mai parshuram hu Veer ne jhuk ke unke pair chuye veer ko param param anand ki anubhuti hui
Veer : apne to mera jivan dhanya kar diya mujhko apna sisya banake apka darshan pana hi moksh prapti hai apne to mujhe apna sisya bana liya dhanyabad gurudev koti koti dhanyabad
Parshuram: mere bachhe insab ki koi jarurat nahi ye to bidhi ka bidhan hai Ab tumko apni saktio par kabu pana hoga
to taiyar ho jao tumhare jivan ki sabse badi siksha ko grahan karne ke liye
Veer: ji gurudev mai apni puri kosis karunga Fir dono maidan ke bicho bich agaye
Parshuram: veer mai tumhari saktio ko abhi puri tarah mukt nahi kar sakta par mai is maidan tak
tum ko tumhari sakti istemal karwa sakta hu is pure maidan ko mai bandh deta hu take tumhari sakti ka istemal tum sikh sako
Fir parshuram ne hath ghumaya or ek roshni si unke hath se nikli or pura maidan bandh gaya ab veer ki sakti uske uspar nahi ja sakti thi
Parshuram : ab tumhari sakti ko mukt kar raha hu fir kuch mantra padhke hath veer ke mathe pe lagaya to veer ko ek jhatka laga
veer ki ankhe blue ho gayi or sharir me asim sakti ka ahsas hone laga veer ka jisam halka garam ho gaya
Fir gurudev ne ek patte ko maidan ke bich me rakha Parshuram,: veer apne ander jhako or sirf hawaki sakti pe dhayn lago fir hawa ki sakti is patte ko kabu karo par dhayan rake patta maidan se bahar nahi jani chahiye
Veer: ji gurudev fir veer ne ankhe band kar apni saktio par dhayan lagaya or sirf hawa ki sakti ko bahar ane diya
or usse patte ko kabu karne ki koisis karne laga magar wo hawaki sakti ko niyantrit nahi kar paya or patta maidan ke bahar chala gaya
Parshuram ne fir se patta rakha or khud us patte pe ko hawa ki sakti se kabu karke dikhaya or patta thik maidan ke thik kinare ruk gaya bahar nahi gaya
Fir veer ne kia magar wohi hua aisehi pure ek mahina bit gaya veer ne ab hawa ki sakti par kabu kar pa raha tha
Fir veer ne hawa ke sakti se bahut sare dusre tarike se abvayas ki or 2 mahine me wo hawa ke sakti me mahir ho gaya
G dev : bahut khub tum ne hawaki sakti ko kabu kar liya ab bari hai Jal ki sakti ka fir gurudev ne ek patra me jal la kar rakha
Veer is jal ko tum kisvi akar me dhal sakte ho bas socho tumhe isee kya akar dena hai or jalki sakti se ka niyantran karo
Veer nevi gurudev ke kahe anusar hi kiya or kuch 1 mahine bad hi wo jal ki sakti ko puri tarah kabu kar liya
Parshuram : bahut sandar ab bari hai dharti ki sakti ka To suru ho jao kosis karo dhart ko niyantran karne ka or khud dharti ke tarah rup badal sakte
ho kisivi bakt dharti ko apne isharo pe nacha sakte ho par ye asan nahi hoga to suru karo
Veer bhi lag gaya dharti par kabu karne pure 3 mahine lage usko dhart ki sakti par kabu karne me
Parshuram: ab bari hai sabse muskil tatwa ko kabu karne ki agni ko Agni chahe sab mita sakta hai chye bana sakta hai
Tum ko badi sabdhani se is sakti ko kabu karna hoga
Veer lag gaya agni ko kabu karne usko kabhi jada agni paida karne kabhi kam agni ko kabu karte karte 4 mahine lag gaye ab bari thi akash ki
Parshuram: akash anant hai bishal hai akash Akash me sakti ke sath tum apni akar badha sakte ho ya ghata sakte ho Kabhi bhi adrisya ho sakte ho firse drisya ho sakte ho
Veer bhi lag gaya akash ki sakti ko kabu karne 2 mahino me veer ne sari saktio pe kabu kar liya
Parshuram: sabash mere bachhe tumne sari saktio par kabu karliya par abhi bhi tumko apni kundlini jagrit karni hogi warna jab sari saktiya eksath tumme jagrit hogi
pure samay ke liyr to tumhara sarir usko sayad hi jhel paye tumhara sarir batti ki tarah garm ho jayega koi bhi tum ko chuyega to jal jayega
Veer: to gurudev mai apni kundilini kaise jagrit karu
Parshuram : yug sadhna se Iski bidhi mai tumko bata dunga chalo aaj school nahi jana kya
Veer : ji jana hai fir veer or gurudev fresh hoke chal pade school
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 2:01:53 GMT 5.5
new story update no.7
Ab bas ek mahina baki tha veer ke ghar lotne me veer bhi apni ma papa dadi or sabse jada behnoko yad karta tha
in 6 salo me na hi koi veer se mila nahi veer ko milne diya gaya bas bich bich me guruji akar halchal puch chale jate the
Udhar veer ke ghar
Veer ke aneka intezar sabko tha khas kar dono behno ko samay ke sath sath dono behad khub surat or jawan ho gayi thi
or unka bas ekhi sapna tha veer lout aye in 6 salo ko indono ne gin gin ke kate the
onke dilme veer ke liye pyar badte badte itna badh gaya ke dono usse pyar karne lagi
pyar to bachpan se hi tha magar wo samajh nahi payi thi magar ab badi hogayi thi
or unke dilnee gawahi de di thi ke wo veer se ek lover wala pyar hai bachpan se hi dono veer ko ek mehbuba ke tarah chahti thi
Edhar
Subah gurudev or veer sadhna me baithe the *tabhi veer ke mind me gurudev ki awaj gunji
Parshuram : putra abb tumko kundalini jagrit karne ki bidhi batayunga tumlo uska palan karna hai aam tour pe kundlini jagrit karne me 100 se jada bars lag jate hai
Magar tum khas ho tumme devtao ki di hui sakti hai jis karan tum pehle se hi tumhare under wo urja hai jo kundalini jagrit karne me jarurat hoti hai
Tumko sirf uss urja ko apni yug sadhna se apni sarir ke kendra me ekatha karna hoga
Yani apni rid me us urja ke karan tumhari kundalini jagrat ho jayegi
Chalo abb suru karo
apne dyan ko ek jagah kendrit karo sabkuch bul jao bas apne man ko kendrit karne pe dhayan do apne sarir ki urja ko apne ander ekatha karo
or karo dhayn na tute fir veer pure ekghanta sadhna baitha raha kuch nahi hua ab do ghante kuch nahi hua
Par ye kya veer ka jisam chamakne laga veer ke rid me sato sakra jagrit hone lage or sato chakra jagrit ho gaye
veer hawame uth gaya charo taraf ek roshni ki diwar ban gayi veer ne dhire dhire ankhe kholi wo abhi vi hawame tha fir wo aste aste niche agaya
Parshuram: Mubarak ho beta tumne kundalini jagrit karli Ab hamesa yog karte rahna tumhari kundalini jagrit rahegi
or ek bat jab tumko saktiya miljaye gi to tum usko apne sarir me bandhe rakhna warna shaitan ko pata chal jayega tum kaha ho uskeliye mai tumhe kuch batata hu
fir parshuram ne veer ke kan me ek bidhi batayi jisse shaitan usko kabhi dhund nahi payega uski sakti tarango se
Veer ab bas 2 din bachhe hai 18 sal hone me tum mujhko bachan do achhai or sachhai ka sath nahi chodo ge mere 3 sisya
Visma dron karn *insabne bachan or apne swarth ke liye adharm ka sath diya
Hamesha yaad rakhna sachhai achhai prem or manabta se badhkar kuch nahi
Kisivi mulya pe inka tyag anuchit hai
Veer : ji guruji mai apko bachan deta hu mai hamesha acchai ka sath dunga
Parshuram : mai tumhe ek bardan deta hu jobhi sachhe dil se tumhara sath dega usko kabhi kuch nahi hoga
or tum or tumhare honewale jivan sangini hamesa jawan rahoge umra ka koi fark tumpar kabhi nahi ayega
Veer : sukriya gurudev apvi mujhe bachan dijiye jab bhi mujhe apki margdarshan ki jarurat hogi ap mere sath honge jivan ke kisivi modpe
Parshuram : jarur mere bachhe jarur mai bachan deta hu
Veer : dhanyabad gurudev gurudev apki guru dakshina
Parshuram : tum bas sachhai or manabta ke rah pe chalo yehi meri gurudakhina hogi
Veer: thik hai gurudev *gurudev ekprasna baki rah gaya mai khud ko duniya ke samne kaise chupayunga jab mai saktio ka prayog karunga to wo mujhko pehchan lenge
Parshuram : bas itnisi bat jab tum apni saktiya dharan karoge tab panch tatwa ke ek ek nishani tumpar bastra or
abhusan ke roop me tumse jud jayegi or ek nakab mai tumhe deta hu fir
Parshuram ne ek sunehra nakab veer ke *mathe se laga diya
Parshuram : ab ye nakab hameshake liye tumpar lag gaya ye tumhare ichha par prakat or adrisya ho jayega
Abb or koi sawal nahi jao jane ki taiyariya karo
Veer: jo agya gurudev
Fir veer chala gaya apne kamre me apna saman sametne kal uske ghar jana hai parsho usko birthday hai wo 18 ka ho jayega or usko uski saktiya mil jayegi
Subha 5 bajeh hi guruji agaye veer ko lene aaj ke veer or 6 sal pehle ke veer me jamin asman ka fark hai
aaj veer 6 fit lamba chouda sina gatjila badan nili ankhe sundar pravabsali vaktitwa ka noujawan ban gaya tha
*jisse dekh ladkiya behose hi ho jaye
Veer : gurudev hame jane ki agya de
Parshuram : jao mere bachhe apne jivan ka udesya pura karo duniyame prem or iswar pe biswas fir louta do
Veer : apko nirash nahi karunga apni puri kosis karunga
Fir Dono gurudev se milke chal pade ghar ki or 12 ghante ki safar ke bad sham 6 baje veer or guruji pahuch gaye delhi veer ke ghar
Guruji ko dekh watch man ne darwaja khol diya magar veer ko pahchan nahi paya dono main gate tak pahuch gaye
Gurujike aneki suchna kal ki thi to kisiko guruji ke abhi aneki koi anuman nahi tha
Guruji ne bell bajayi kuch der me Naukar ne darwaja khola guruji ko dekh unko ghar ke ander bula liya or chal padi dadi ko bulane
Guruji or veer sitting me baith gaye kuch hi der me dadi jaldi se chalte huye ayi
Dadi : pranam guruji app abhi ap to kal anewale the mere pote ke sath mera pota kaha hai wo nahi aya kya, kya wo kal ayega boliye na
Dadi ne veer pe koi dhayan nahi diya kiu ki inko unke swalo ke jawab jaldi chahiye the
Guruji : shant ho jayiye sab bata ta hu.. tabhi shalini bhi agai unhone bh guruji ko pranam kia
Jab unki najar veer pe padi to bas ektak veer ko *dekhne lagi fir pata nahi kya hua wo behos hogai veer ne age badh apni ma ko tham liya
Ab to veer se bhi ruka nahi gaya or bol pada
Veer: kya hua ma kya hua ma dekho ma tumhara veer agaya ma akhe kholo ma dekho tumhara veer agaya hai
Veer ne samne padi hui panike jug se kuch pani leke veer ne apni make chehre pe mara to shalini ko hosh agaya
Shalini : tu mera veer hai na tu mera veer hai na
Veer: ha ma mai tumhara veer hu
Shalini : veer ke gale lag betahasha rone lagi *mera betaaa mera beta
Dadi : mera anokha pota mera pota tu agaya mera veer *tu agaya aja mere bachhe teri dadi taras gayi he apne jigar ke tukre ko gale lagane ke liye mere bachhe aja Wo bhii veer ke gale lag rone lagi
Veer ke ankhome bhi ashun agaye
Veer ne unko rone se nahi roka ye to wo dukh tha jo pichle 6 salo se dilme chupake rakhe the jo abhi akhoke raste nikal raha hai ashun banke
Guruji : lijiye apki amanat jo pichle 6 salo se mujhe shopi thi ab mai ajad hu ab mai chalta hu kal puja ke wakt ayunga
shalini or dadi : dhanyabad guruji apne apna wada pura kia hamare bete ko is ghar ke chirag ko sahi salamat siksha ke sath sath takatwar or majbut bana ke bapas diya bahut bahut dhanyabad
Guruji : iski koi jarurat nahi ab mai chalta hu fir milenge Fir guruji chale gaye
Veer kabse aya hai magar usne apne behno ko nahi dekha nahi papa ko
Veer : ma ab app kiu ro rahi hai mai agaya hu na abb mai apke pass hi hu
ma papa or meri behne kaha hai
Ma : beta wo dono tere papa ke sath tere liye gift lane gayi hai abhi thodi der me ajayengi
Veer : thik hai ma
Ma : Chal beta tu thaka hua hoga safar se aya hai na chal tujhe tera kamra dekha deti hu
Fir shalini veer ko uska kamra dekha deti hai or khud chali jati hai apne bete ke liye special khana banane
Veer apne kamre ko gour se dekhta hai har ek chij salike se rakhi hui hai
Room ko kafi achhe se sajaya gaya tha
Magar bed pe bahut sari takiye rakhe huye the room to ek ke liye tha itne *takiye kiu
ye sochte sochte veer ke *hotho pe smile agayi usko yaad agaya kaise uski dono behne usko apne bich me leta ke dono baju se chipki rahti thi sayad ye *takiye unhi dono ke honge
matlab is kamre ko veer ke didio ne sajaya tha abhi veer inhi socho me gum tha ke bahar se awaj ayi bagut hi surili awaj
Awaj : ma ham ghar agayi ye kehte huye dono veer ke kamre ke taraf anelagi
Shalini : beti suno to beti rubi neha suno to sahi par dono nahi rukti *or pahuch jati hai veer ke room me
Dono room *me anter hote hi chok ke ruk jati hai
Samne ek ladka uske bhai ke room me tha
Ladki 1 : tum kon ho jo mere bhai ke kamre me ghus gaye yaha sirf ham dono hi a sakti hai ya hamara bhai
Par veer to kahi or hi khoya hua tha dono ki khubsurti me dono ka jisam sanche me dhala tha chehre pe duniya ki masumiyat tikhe nayan naksh gulabi hoth sone se chamakta hua chehra *tabhi
Ladki 2 : kya tumhe sunai nahi deta hamne kya kaha tum yaha kya kar rahe ho
Tabhi veer ke muhse nikla
Veer : didi
Ab age kya hoga janne ke liye intezar kare next update ka
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 2:07:33 GMT 5.5
new story update 8
Pehle to dono chock gayi
Didi sunke dono ka dil dhadak utha dono ke ankhome ashun agaye *dono *veer ko gour se dekhne lagi
fir jab dono ka dhayan veer ke gale me latke loket pe gaya dono ki ankhome ruke ashun ki bandh tut gayi
dono bhag ke veer se lipat gayi
Rubi : tum agaye guddu tum agaye guddu
Neha : hichkiya siskiya lete huye … guddu tum hame kiu chod ke chale gaye the guddu
Rubi : tummmhe hamari yaad nahi ayi koi aisa bhi karta hai kya
Veer : bahut yaad ayi didi bahut yasd ayi roj har pal yaad ayi lekin mai majboor tha didi App sab ke liye dil bahut rota tha
Neha : abb hame chod ke jaoge to nahi is bar ham nahi ji payenge guddu Bahut tadpe hai bahut tadpe hai tunhare liye
Veer: nahi didi nahi jayenge ab kabhi nahi jayenge abtak enki bate vikram gate pe khade ho ke sun rahe the unki amkho me bhi ashu agaye the *jab rah na paye to bol pade
Vikram : mera sher lout aya hamse nahi miloge apne is bap ko bhi thandak dedo
Veer dono bahno ko samhal ta hai or bed pe baitha deta hai fir age badh apne papa ke gale lag jata hai
Vikram : dil ko thandak pad gayi tujhko sine se lagane ko mai bhi bahut tadpa hu yar apne betese dur rahkar
Veer: apko bahut miss kiya maine papa
Vikram : mainevi mere bachhe
Vikarm chal fresh hoja teri ma tujhko bula rahi hai khanepe
Veer : ata hu ap chaliye fir piche mood didi apbhi fresh ho jayiye
Rubi : tu ja fir ham jayenge mai yahi pahra dungi agar tu fir chala gaya to
Neha : maivi
Veer : nahi di ab mai kahi nahi jayunga agar gaya vi to ap dono ko sath le jayunga
Rubi : wada
Veer : pakka wada ab jao fresh ho jao mai abhi aya fresh ho ke fir ham sath niche chalenge khane thik hai
Rubi neha : thik hai fir dono chali gayi apne room me dono bachpan sehi ekhi room me rehte the sayad iski wajah tha veer
Dono ekdusre ke dil ka hal achhe se janti thi or dono me banti bhi thi Fir tino fresh hoke niche ajate hai jaha unka hi intezar ho raha tha
Vikram : are beta kitni der kardi aao baitho khana thanda ho raha hai
Veer : ji papa
Shalini : aaj mai apne bete ko apne hathose khilayungi
Rubi neha : ham bhi khilange *jaha tino khila rahi thi waha baki ke dono kaha piche rehne wale the fir sab ne milke veer ko khana khilaya
veer ko apna hath istemal karna hi nahi pada Diner ke bad sab sitting me baith gaye
Vikash : to beta kya sikhaya hai gurudev ne
Veer : bahut kuch itna ki koi soch vi na paye
Vikash : bahut khub kal tumhare janmdin or lout ne ke khusi me party rakhi hai puja ke bad
Veer : papa party ke vajay agar us party ke liye diye gaye paise se garibo ko khana or kapde bate to mujhko jada dua milegi hai na papa
Shalini : sahi to keh raha hai mera beta
Rubi neha : ha papa
Dadi : thik kahta hai mrra pota vijram kal party nahi garibo ko kapde or khana khilaya jayega *or rahi bat veer ko sab se milane ki to kisibi business party me mila dena
Vikram : thik kahti ho ma tum vsise vi mera beta anokha hai ye sab bate yehi soch sakta hai
Chalo bahut rat ho gayi hai sone chale kal puja bhi hai
Veer : papa wo biswa kaha hai aj kal
Vikram : Beta 18 sal ke bad asram me bachhe ko nahi rakha jata hai abhi wo hostel me hai ata rahta hai yaha
kal to pakka ayega usko bhi pata hai kal tu anewala hai lekin tu aj hi agaya
Veer : thik hai papa chale sone chalte hai
Good night dad good night ma good night Dadi Chalo didi chalte hai Fir veer chal pada apne room ki aur Room ke gate pe pahuch veer dono behono ko dekh
Veer: good night didi
Fir veer room me agaya par tabhi rubi or neha bhi room me agayi
Veer: kya hua did nind nahi arahi kya bate karni hai
Rubi : chalo so jao fir dono bhi bed ke dono side let gayi Veer hairani se donoko dekhne laga
Neha : aise kiu dekh rahe ho ajao so jao rat bahut ho gayi hai
Veer : di app dono kya yahi soyengi
Rubi: *veer ka hath pakad bich me sulaleti hai … chup chap so jao thik hai fir dono veer ke dono baju pakad so gayi
veer bechara Kya kare na hil sakta hai na uth sakta hai dono ko niharte niharte nind ki agose me chala gaya
Subha 5 baje hi veer ki nind khul gayi ye uske traning ka natija tha
Jab veer uthta hai to usko upne sine pe bojh mahsus hoti hai
Veer ke sine pe dono behne apna sar rakhe so rahi thi Veer dono ke masum chehre ko niharta rahta uska dil apni behno ke liye pyar se bhar jata hai lekin jada dair wo nahi rukta *usko uthtna tha
usne dono behnoke sir ko samhal ke takiye ke upar rakhta hai fir khud uthke bathroom chala jata hai fresh hoke sidhe chat pe chala jata hai
waha ek yuga mat bicha ke sadhna me baith jata hai
Aaj wo 18 ka hone wala tha subha ke pehli kiran ke sath
Veer sadhna me lin tha tabhi surya ki pehli kiran uske chehre pe padi tabhi kisine uske sir pe hath rakha
Veer ne apni ankhe kholi samne parshuram the unhonne veer ki saktio ko mukt kar diya tabhi veer ka jisam garam hone laga veer ka jisam vatti ke tarah tap gaya
Veer ne kuch mantra padha dhire dhire uska jisam normal ho gaya magar veer ko apne ander bahut asim sakti ka ahsas hone laga
Parshuram ja chuke the veer ke akho ke samne se gayab ho gaye Veer dobara sadhna me lin ho gaya Mind to mind
Veer : dhanyabad gurudev
Parshuram: vijayi bhawa
Edhar Shaitan baitha apne numindo se bate kar raha tha tabhi shaitan ko firse usi sakti ka ahsas hua lekin fir wohi hua shaitan us sakti tak pahuch ne se pehle hi sakti tarange khatam ho gayi
Shaitan : phir phir mai nakam raha tumko dhundne me par jis din tum mile tumhe wo mout dunga murde bhi tauba karenge
Raka apne admio ko khabar dedo wo abhi bhi yahi hai dharti par dhunde usse
Raka : ji malik
Veer jab sadhna se uthke niche jane laga tabhi niche se shor gunj gaya
Rubi : bhai kaha hai ma pura ghar dund liya
Neha : ma ma guddu fir to chala nahi gaya na
Shalini : na meri beti dekho edhar kidhar hoga kaha ja sakta hai tum dono sant raho Veer sidhiose niche ane laga or kaha
Veer : kya hua ma di aplog itne pareshan kiu hai maine kaha na mai apko kabhi chod ke nahi jaunga
Rubi or neha veer ke gale lag : or ham jane bhi nahi denge Tumme hamari jaan basti hai tum gaye to ye bhi chali jayegi
Veer : dono ke muhpe hath rakh ..ye sab kya kah rahi ho di agar app dono aisi bate karogi to mai app dono se bat nahi karunga
Rubi neha : nahi guddu aisa mat bolo ham wada karte hai ham kabhi aisi bate nahi karenge
Veer : thik hai chaliye ja ke fresh ho jayiye mai bhi ho jata hu phir puja hai
Rubi : guddu tum the kaha hamne tumhe pure ghar me dhund liya
Veer : di mai chat pe tha yuga kar raha tha ye meri har din ki adat hai Fir jogging bhi jata hu aaj puja hai to jogging nahi jayunga
Neha : thik hai guddu chalo Fir sare chale gaye Shalini lag gayi kam pe lekin apni betio ka ye junun dekh soch me padh gayi
Karib adhe ghante bad sabhi fresh ho ke agaye or baith gaye sitting me Sabhi veer ka pehnawa dekh khus ho gaye usne ek white sirt or pajama pehna tha
ajkal ke ladke itni sadgi se taiyar nahi hote the uperse veer Tha vi ek handsome good looking muscular charming ladkio ka sapne ka rajkumar
Jab veer niche aye to sabhi usee dekh rahe the
Veer ne chonk ke sabki ur dekha
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 2:11:27 GMT 5.5
New story Update 9
Veer un sab ke man me ho rahi bate sunai de rahi thi
Pehle to veer ko hairani hui par jaldi yaad agaya uski saktiya jag chuki hai puri tarha
Sabhi ki soch :
Shalini : mera beta kitna sundar ho gaya hai apne bap se vi jada
Rubi : haye mera guddu kitna handsome hai abb mai apne guddu ko kahi nahi jane dungi I love you guddu
Neha : kinti achhi body hai mere guddu ki ji karta hai chipak jao fir kabhi alag na ho
Veer sabki soch sun mand mand muskura raha tha
Fir veer ke papa ne guruji ke ane ka bataya
Sabhi ne guruji ko pranam kia fir suru ho gayi puja puja ke doran ek ladka aya or sabke sath baith gaya
veer puja me baitha usko hi dekh raha tha or wo ladka bhi veer ko dekh raha tha
Puja ke samapti ke bad veer sidhe us ladke ke pass gaya
Veer : tum biswa ho na
Ladka : ha mai biswa hu tumhara dost
Veer biswa ke gale lag kitna badal gaya hai mere bhai Mere dost bahut miss kiya tujhe
Biswa : tujhko bahut yaad kia mere dost tere liye dil bahut tarapta tha
Veer: aab agaya hu na aab hamara sath nahi chute ga
Fir sabhi milke khana khaye
Veer : or bata kya kya kia in 6 salo me
Biswa : kuch khas nahi study karta raha 2 sal pehle asram se hostel chala gaya or kuch khas nahi kia or mai karta vi kya mera dost jo mere sath nahi tha
Veer : tu chinta mat kar ab mai agaya hu na sath colege chalenge sath masti karemge
Biswa : thik hai our tu bata tune kya kya kia waha
Veer : yar puch mat pure 6 sal traning or study hi ki or kuch tha nahi karne ko
Biswa : tabhi body itni achhi banai hai
Veer : ye to aisehi ban gaye tabhi veer ke papa ki awaj ayi
Papa: veer beta chalo bahar garibo ko kapde bat do jaise tumne kaha tha
Fir mandir chalte hai waha garibo ko khana khilana hai
Biswa beta tum bhi chalo veer ki madat kardo
Biswa : ji ancle
Fir veer or biswa bahar agaye jaha garibo ki lambi line lagi thi
Veer ne bade shanti se sabko kapde bate Ye sab dekh ke dadi ki ankho me ashun agaye
unko apne pote pe gurv ho raha tha Fir sabhi car se nikal pade mandir ki aur Mandir jada dur nahi tha sabh jaldhi pahuch gaye
Mandir ke sidiome bahut sare vikhari the unko dekh veer ka maan var aya
Sabne vagwan ka darshan kia fir bahar mandir prangan me hi sabhi ko khana khilane ka program tha to sab ne khana khilana suru kiya
Par veer nahi tha waha
Vikram : ye veer kaha hai abhi to yahi tha
Rubi neha : kaha gaya mera guddu
Dadi : dekho khojo mera pota kaha ja sakta hai yahi hoga
Sabhi veer ko khojne lage
sabse pehle vikarm ne veer ko dekha jo ek patile me khana liye apahij vikhario ko khana de raha tha
jo mandir tak nahi ja sake sidhi pe hi rahe Ye dekh vikram ka sina garv se ful haya
fir vikram ne bhi veer ko join kiya khana dene me sabhi ne veer ko dhund liya sabhi veer ki soch or narm dili ka kayal ho gaya tha
Rubi neha to pehle sehi apne guddu pe fida thi ab usko apna hero manne lagi
Garibo ko khana khilane ke bad sabhi bapas agaye ghar fir biswa laut gaya apne hostel or veer apne room me chala gaya
Veer dhayan lagata hai apne kamre me lekin room ka door lagana vul gaya
Veer dhayan me leen tha tabhi koi veer ke room me ghusa or veer ko gour se dekhne laga tabhi veer ki awaj ayi
Kya hua didi app mujhko aise kiu ghur rahi hai
Rubi : guddu bass tumko dekhna achha lagta hai
Rubi ki ankhome beshumar pyar tha veer se ye chup na paya veer unki man ki bat sun sakta tha rubi manme
( kya mai abhi guddu ko bata du guddu mai tumse pyar karti hu i love u ) veer rubi ka dhayan dusritaraf karne ke liye bolta hai
Veer : didi neha di kaha hai
Rubi : niche hai mammy ke pass guddu aaj tumhsra birth day hai or maine abhi tak tumko gift nahi diya
Veer: aap mere liye kisi gift se kam thodi ho
Rubi : guddu mai.
wo bas itna hi bol payi thi ke neha room me enter hui
Neha : di apne bataya kiu nahi ke app guddu ke pass arahi hai mai vi ajati
Rubi : wo mujhe dhayan nahi raha age se aisa nahi hogi thik hai
Neha veer se : chalu guddu niche ma bula rahi hai diner pe
Fir tino chal pade niche jaha sabhi baithe the Vikram : to beta age kya karna hai
Veer : kya matlab papa
Vikram : matlab tumhe kya padhna hai hai kaha padhna hai
Veer : papa mai apka ek louta beta hu to mujhe apki help karni chahiye issiliye mai b com karunga take age chal ke ap ka sath de sako
Vikram : that’s like my boy dekha shalini hamara beta kitna samajhdar hai
Rubi : papa agar bhai bcom karna chahte hai to ham jis college me hai wohi ap veer ka admission karwade
Vikram : thik hai beta ho jayega fir khamosi se diner hua or sabhi chal pade sone
Veer room me jake room lock karta hai or apni yuga mat lagake sadhna ke mudra me baith jata hai
apni ankhe band kar Kuch hi der me veer kisise mind to mind bat kar raha hota hai
Veer : gurudev mujhe saktiya to mil gayi lekin ye kaise pata chalega ke mai in saktio ka istemal kab or kiss pe karu
Gdev: putra tumhare ass pass ghat rahi koi bhi burai ko tum dekh sakte ho wo kuch pal ke liye tumhare ankho ke samne se gujregi
or fir agar tum uss ghatna ko dekhna chahte ho to apni ankhe band kar ekagra chit hoke us ghatna par dhayan kendrit karna
tum ko wo ghatna dekhni suru ho jayegi lekin putra apni saktio ko istemal me sabdhani rakhna
jaha uski jarurat na ho kabhi istemal mat karna
Veer : ji gurudev pranam
Fir veer apni sadhna se utha hi tha ke door pe nock hui
Veer ne apni dristy tez ki to usse diwar ke ar par dikhne laga bahar rubi neha thi hath me takiya liye
Veer ko hotho pe smile agayi
Veer ne door khola didi app log yaha Rubi neha bina kuch bole agayi bed pe or apna apna side le liya sone ke liye
Veer : didi ap dono yaha soyengi to papa mammy gussa karenge
Rubi : karne do ham apne guddu ke pass hi soungi
Neha : chahe koi bhi kuch bhi bole ham nahi jane wale
Tumko problem ho to bol do ham chale jayenge
Ye bat unhone nam aankhon se boli thi sidha sidha emotional blackmail tha
Veer kya karta manni padi unki bat beshumar pyar jo tha inme koi kisi se dur nahi hona chahta tha
Veer bhi door lock karke donoke bich apni jagah so gaya rubi neha bhi apne bhai ki dono bajo sine se chipka so gaye
Ab dekhte hai age kya hota hai agle update me
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