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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:43:32 GMT 5.5
update 28
Rat ho gayi suntet to dekh nahi paye chalo rat ki tare hi dekh aye
Rubi : ha chalo ham taiyar ho jate hai
Tabhi veer ko apni ma ka chehra najar aata hai veer turant apna hath jod khada ho jata hai or dhayan lagata hai…
Usko uski ma behosh kamre me padi hui dikhayi dene laga..
Waha uske pitaji kisi ko call kar rahe the. . dadi ma ke pas baithi thi . .
ma ko hosh me lane ki kosis kar rahe the.
Veer apni mansik tarango se apne ma ke mastisk me kehta hai..
Veer.. Ma ma main thik hu ma
Ma ke sarir me halchal hone lagti hai ma hosh me ane lagti hai..
Veer.. Ma main thik hu mujhe kuch nahi hua
Tabhi ma veer kehti hui chikh ke uthke baith jati hai ..
Dadi .. Beti sab thik hai veer thik hai use kuch nahi hua..
Veer… ma main thik hu app chinta na kare ….
Ma.. Veer veer veer beta beta kaha hai tu.. Kaha hai..
Veer.. Ma main thik hu goa me hi hu main apke dimag me bol raha hau telepathy se..
Ma.. Beta tu thik to hai na
Veer.. Ma apke bete ko kuch ho sakta hai kya app chinta ko tyag de ..
Ma … kya karu beta ma hu na kuch bhi ho jaye beta kitna bhi takatwar kiu na ho ma ko chinta hoti hai.
Veer .. Ma miss u i love you ma aap aaram kare main jald hi lout ayunga…
Ma.. Thik hai beta .
Vikram.. Shalini tum thik ho
Shalini.. Haa main thik hu bete se bat ho gayi aab main thik hu..
Vikram .. Wo kaise uska to call nahi aaya..
Veer.. Papa main mansic tarango se bat kar raha hu..
Vikram ke hotho pe muakan agayi..
Veer..thik hai papa aap aaram kare main badh me bat karunga.. Ma papa.. Thik hai beta .
Veer apni ankhe kholta hai to dekhta hai sab usse hi ghur rahe the koi hil bhi nahi raha ..
Veer. Ab mujhe hi ghurte rahoge kya.chalo jao ready ho jao…
Sab muajurate huye chale gaye ..
Fir kuch der bad sabhi taiyar hoke bahar agaye firse beech pe isbar sabhi tandi hawa or samundar ke lehroka maja lene lage
Fir jab sab thak gaye to wohi ek jagah baith gaye tabhi koi aya Ye koi or nahi nilam thi ..
Nilam : hello sir ap logo ko maja araha hai na
Biswa: ji maam hame bahut maza araha hai waise app yahan
Nilam : ohh mai yahan is time roj ati hu tandi hawa ka maza lene
Asish : app yahi rahti hai hotel me ke ghar hai ass pas hai
Nilam : hotel me hi rehti hu staff quarter mai
Waise mam kya app dono ab bhi mujhse naraj hai airport late pahuchne ke liye
Veer man me ( app tumko kaise samjhayu ye dono uske liye nahi ye jo tum adaye dikha rahi ho mujhko is liye naraj hai )
Rubi : nahi ham naraj nahi hai galti ho jati hai kabhi kabhi
Nilam : sir aaj apsab ke liye special diner ka intezam kiya hai ap sabhi jarur ayiyega ab mai chalti hu bye
Veer or sabhi : bye
Neha manme ( achha hua chali gayi warna is samundar me dubo ke marti )
Veer ki hasi Putti jati hai ye sunte hi
Par kisiko kuch samajh me nahi a raha tha veer kiu has raha hai
Rubi : guddu has kiu rahe ho
Veer : kuch nahi di bas kisike bato ko sunke hasi agayi
Biswa: bhai yaha to kisine hasi wali bat nahi kahi
Veer: kahi hai par wo sirf mai hi sun paya
Asish: konsi bat jara ham ko bhi to batao
Veer neha ke mind me : kiu di bata du app kis ko dubo ke marne ki planing bana rahi hai
Neha : pehle to chok gayi fir veer ki awaj sun ke normal ho gayi
Neha : jo batana ho bata do mai nahi darti wo agar fir ayi na to mai sach much usko dubo dungi
Veer sabse : kuch nahi bas personal hai kisiki
Fir kuch bat nahi hoti sabhi lout ate hai hotel diner ke liye
ready hote hai fir chalte hai diner karne jaha rat rango me duba hua tha
Dining hall me dance or music ka arrangement tha or adhe se jada foriener girls the jo sexy sexy dress me floor ko apne mordern dance se sexy adao se mast kiye huye the
Sabhi apne tebil pe baith gaye fir sabne order kiya
Khana aneme time tha tabhi ek ladkio ka group veer ke pass ake usko dance ke liye bulane laga..
veer ne bahut mana kia magar wo nahi mane to veer ne chalaki se rubi neha ko bhi apne sath dance floor pe le aya dance ke liye
fir suru hua dance ladkiya to veer se chipak ne ka bahana dhund rahi thi magar veer neha or rubi ke sath dance karne laga aisehi dance khatam hua or wo bapas tebil pe agaye
Biswa : bach gaye bhai warna aaj to kayamat aajati
Veer : hmm sahi kaha kitni chipku thi wo ladkiya agar app dono na hoti to mai fas jata
Rubi : achha hua sath le gaye warna tumhari khar nahi thi
Neha : hmm aisehi rehna samjhe guddu
Veer : samajh gaya ab diner kare bahut bhuk lagi hai
Fir sab ne diner kiya or kuch bate kar sab chal pade sone Veer dono behno ko bahome bhar so gaya
Edhar
Shaitan apni saktiya badhane ki kosis kar raha tha issi liye wo abhi veer ke piche nahi tha magar apne gulamo ko lagaya hua tha
Salaka : bhai apne dekha us veer ki sakti kya app usko hara payenge abhi wo sayad goa me hai
Saka : tu chinta na kar meri behen mai usse jarur hara dunga
Salaka : mujge appe pura ekin hai Firvi app apne sath 10 sabse takatwar sipahio ko le jao
Saka : thik hai meri behen chalta hu
Next morning
Veer jagta hai to dono behne pehle hi uth chuki thi
Ye surprising tha kiu ke veer sabse age uthta tha sadhna ke liye par aaj dono pehle uth fresh bhi ho gayi
Veer unko dekh raha tha dono salwar kamij me khule or bhige balome
Kya roop chadha tha dono me
veer to unki khubsurat or masum chehre me kho sa gaya
dono ke awaj lagane se veer ko hosh aya
Rubi : kya dekh rahe the
Veer : bas roshni ki us kiran ko jo din ki suruwat karti hai
Neha : or kya dekh rahe the
Veer : pani ki us bund ko jisme duniya ki sari sitalta hai
Rubi : bas bas bahut dekh liya ( or sarmane lagi )
Neha : ab uth bhi jao ( sarmate huye kaha )
Veer : uthke dono ko bahome bhar leta hai or unke mathe ke chum ke bathroom me chala jata hai
Rubi neha ki to sanse tezz ho gayi thi kahi kiss na karle magar veer ko apni hade bakhubi malum thi
Veer bathroom se fresh hokar sadhna me baith jata hai
Fir sadhna se uthke ready ho ke nikal padta hai sab ke sath goa darshan or moj masti ke liye
Sabhi Pura din beach pe mouj masti karte rahe or rat ko sabhi pahuch gaye night life dekhne pub pe
Sabhi pub me entry karte hai andar loud music chal raha tha veer ko ye sab pasand nahi tha
magar usko duniya ka har rukh dekhna tha kiu ki wo ab tak in sab chijo se dur raha hai
Log ladkiya pub ke music me jhum rahe the veer rubi neha biswa or asish ek taraf khali table pe baith gaye sabne soft drink order ki
Veer : di kya apko dance karna hai
Rubi neha : karna hai magar tumhare sath tum chaloge
Veer : ok chalta hu app dono ke liye ok
Rubi neha khus hote huye : ok guddu
Veer : biswa or asish ke taraf dekh ke tum dono ko dance nahi karna kya
Biswa : nahi bhai tum jao ham yahi hai
Veer uth ke chala gaya dono behno ke sath music ke tal me tino nachne lage dono veer se chipak ke dance kar rahe the ki kisi ki najar rubi neha pe padi
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:47:38 GMT 5.5
new story update 29
Ek ladko ka group wohi nase me dhut tha unhone rubi neha ko dekha
Ladka 1 : kya mast item hai
Ladka 2 : chalo thoda masti
karte hai waise bhi hame kon rok sakta hai. Rk ka beta hu india me koi ankh utha ke nahi dekh sakta ..
Ladka 1..ha lokesh tere bap ke hote huye hame kiska dar hai.. Chal chalte hai..
Lokesh.. Chal kya dikh rahi hai dono mast hai ek dam ..
Pura group dance floor pe chala gaya veer ne unki bat sunli thi par wo sahi mouke ka intezar kar raha tha ….
Sabhi dance kar rahe the group ne tino ko charo taraf se gher liya
or dance karne lage ek ladke ne neha ke kamar ko hath lagane ke liye hath badhaya magar wo touch kar pata usse pehle na jane kisne ek mukka uske pet me mar diya
koi dekh nahi paya kisne mara wo waha se dard ke mare hat gaya fir lokesh ne rubi ke hip ko hath lagane ke liye hath badhaya tabhi kisine usko ek kik mari ghutne pe wo dard se langradata huya hat gaya ..
kisiko kuch samajh me nahi araha tha..
Ladka.. Are tum logome se kisine dekha kisne mere pet me mara..
Baki ke ladke..nahi yaar hamne nahi dekha..
Lokesh .. Yaar mujhe kisine mere ghutne pe mara kon ho sakta hai kahi wo to nahi jo dono pario ke sath dance kar raha hai.
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Ladke.. Nahi wo nahi ho sakta hamne usko apni jagah se hilte nahi dekha..
Lokesh… ohhh ma kiski itni himmat ho sakti hai Rk ke bete pe hath uthaye..
Agar pata chala uska akhri din hoga.. In pario ko badh me dekhunga.. Aahh ma..pura group waha se chala gaya..
jab rubi neha thak gaye dance karte karte veer or wo lout aye sabhi bahar chale gaye
un ladko ko kuch samajh me nahi aya hua ka ek to itna loud music itna shor low light ..
Veer ne sabko apni speed se maza chakhaya..
Veer neha rubi biswa asish masti me hotel lout rahe the car se..
Tabhi rubi neha ko wk icecream parler dikha..
Rubi.. Guddu wo dekho ice cream parler please mujhe ice cream khani hai..
Neha.. Ha guddu mujhe bhi..
Veer.. Itni ratko ice cream khaogi. Tabiyat kharab ho jayegi didi
. Neha.. Please guddu..
Veer.. Thik hai ..chalo..veer ne car ice cream parlar pe roki Sabhi ander chale gaye..
Rubi neha .. Ham stobery flevor khayenge..
Biswa. Mujhe orange
Asish.. Mujhe pineapple
Veer.. Thik hai abhi aaya order deke..
Veer pahuch gaya counter pe order kar ke bapas apni table pe aa hi raha tha ke tabhi..
Veer ko hawame kisi ke mansic tarango ka ahsas hua…
Veer ne untarango ki pakda..
Apne mind se wo tarange kisi ke awaj thi .
Awaji… veer the super hero agar tum me takat hai to main tumhara intezar south beach pe kar raha hu ..
Tumhari mout..
Veer muskurakar bapas apni behno ke pass agaya….
Fir sabhi ne milke ice cream khaya or lout chale hotel..
Sabhi hotel lout aye diner kiya fir room me chale gaye sone …
Rat ke 2 baj rahe the ki veer uthke baith gaya ….
Veer room se nikal chat pe agaya or apni bahe failake apna costume pehen udchala south beach ke taraf..
Rat ka andhera uspe samundar ki lehro ki awaj charo aur na admi na kisi ke hone ka sabut bilkul sunsan
Veer hawame khada south beach pe pahuch gaya..
Veer.. Mujhse chupne ki jarurat nahi main tum sab ko dekh sakta hi…
Tabhi ek saye mese ek admi nikla bahut hi hatta katta takatwar .. .
Admi.. To tum aahi gaye mujhe malum tha mera sandesh tumtak pahuch jayega
Veer.. Tumne mujhe ladne ke liye lalkara tha ..
Admi.. Hahaha tum mere liye chiti ke saman ho main hu saka..
Veer.. Achha ek chiti pata nahi kitne hathi ko nach nacha sakta hai..
Saka … dekhte hai .. Itna bolke saka apne hath me aag ka ek gola bana ke veer pe feka..
Veer samne se hat gaya..gola samundar me me gira or ek chota dhamke ke sath bujh gaya
.. Veer niche aagaya dono ek barabar jamin pe aagaya..
Veer.. Tum bas yahi kar sakte ho kya..
Saka.. haha ye to bas ek jhalak thi.. Tumko niche bulane ki .aab dekho itna bolke veer ke taraf apni puri raftar se badha or veer ke sine pe ek punch mara..
Veer apni jagah se hila bhi nahi..
Veer.. Bas itna hi dam hai main to socha to tum kuch to alag hoge bakio se..
Tabhi veer ne ek puch saka ko mara saka udta hua dur ja gira..
Saka khada ho ke gusse se veer ko dekhne laga uski ankhe kali ho gayi uske dono dant bahar agaye dekh te hi dekhte saka ek vayankar nag me madal gaya
jiski hight karib 40 fit ki thi veer ke hight se dubble hight pe saka ka fan tha jiske muh se aag baras rahi thi..
Veer… tum to vampire nahi ho to tum kon ho..
Saka.. Hahaha ham nagendra hai nago ke raja or ye vampire hamare gulam hai..
Hahaha…
Veer.. Tum ko main ek mouka de raha hu burai ka sath chod do warna …
Veer kuch aur bolta ke sakane veer ko apne puch se lapete me le liya..
Veer ko pakad saka uspe agg fekne laga lekin veer apna hath age kar aag ko rok deta hai..
Tanhi veer apna akar chota karta hai or saka ke puch se bahar ajata hai..
Veer.. Bahut hua aab aur nahi itna bol veer apna akar bada karne lagta hai veer apna akar saka se 3 guna jada kar leta hai fir veer hath age kar saka ke fun ko pakad leta hai..
Veer.. Ab bhi main tumko ek mouka de raha hu pata nahi kiu mujhe tumme abhi bhi achhai dikh rahi hai..
Jao yaha se apne gulamo ko leke or meri bat pe dubara sochna ..
Burai ka sath chod do warna pachtao ge dusri bar main nahi chodunga.. Itna bol saka ko utha ke dur fek deta hai .
Sare vampire bas dekhte hi rahte hai unko koi adesh nahi mila tha abhi tak..
Saka apne insani roop me aagaya ..or waha se chala gaya sath me apne vampire gulamo ko bhi le gaya..
Veer bapas lout aaya or bed pe bapas let gaya..
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:49:31 GMT 5.5
new story update 30
Next morning
Veer utha or fresh hoke sadhna me baith gaya issi bich rubi neha jag gayi or fresh ho gayi or veer ke jagne ka intezar karne lagi tabhi veer ke mobile pe call ayi call vikram ki thi
Rubi ne call pic kiya
Rubi : ji papa kaise hai
Vikram : thik hu beti veer kaha hai
Rubi : sadhna me baitha hai
Vikram : thik hai ye batao trip kaisi chal rahi hai beta sab thik Hai
Rubi : bahut hi achha chal raha hai
Vikarm : nehu beta kaha hai usse bhi to bat karao
Neha : ji papa mai yahi hu mai thik hu papa app kaise hai
Vikarm : sab thik hai beta veer uth jaye to call karne ko bolna
Tabhi veer ki awaj ati hai tino ke mind me
Veer :papa mai yahi hu kahiye
Vikram thoda hadbadate huye beta tum kaha ho phone se to tumhari awaj nahi arahi
Veer : mai apke dimag me bol raha hu papa kahiye
Vikram : beta tujhko thanks bolna tha
Veer : kisbat ke liye papa
Vikram : factory’s ko bachane ke liye
Veer : papa bap bete me thanks kaha se ageya wo to mera farz hai agar mai nahi karunga to kon karega apka beta hu
Vikram : sahi kaha beta chalo trip enjoy karo
Veer neha rubi eksath : thik hai papa bye take care ham juld hi lout ayenge
Fir veer sadhna se uth gaya or fresh hone chala gaya Fresh hone ke bad
Aaj ka yaha akhri din tha to tino ne aaj ka din shopping or moj masti me gujar gaya rat ko sabhi diner kar rahe the tabhi nilam agayi
Nilam : sir ye apka yaha akhri din hai kal to app bapas ja rahe hai
To kya mai apsab ke sath join kar sakti hu diner me
Veer : ha kiu nahi
Nilam : thanks sir
Nilam : sir app log mujhe bahut yaad ayenge
Rubi : aisi kya bat ho gayi ye to apka roj ka hoga
Nilam : ha wo to hai lekin khas log kabhi kabhi ate hai ( nilam ki najar veer pe tha )
Neha ne ye dekh liya par veer ke karan shant rahi
Aisehi bato ke sath diner khatam hua sabhi room me ja rahe the ki nilam ne veer ko bulaya
Sir kya mai apse bat karsakti hu akele me
Veer : ha kiu nahi ( veer ka itna kehna tha ke neha rubi usse ghurne lagi firbhi khamosi se room me chali gayi )
Veer : ha kahiye
Nilam : sir app kal ja rahe hai fir milenge ya nahi nahi pata lekin app mujhe bahut achhe lagte hai I think I fall in love with you
Veer : maam pehli bat mai kissi or se pyar karta hu or mai apke jazbat ki izzat karta hu magar mai kisiko or ko dil nahi de sakta wo to mere pass hai hi nahi meri lover ke pass hai
So we can just be friends not lover ok
Nilam : nam ankhose apka pyar na sahi apki dosti hi sahi friends
Fir veer nilam ko good night bolke room me chala ata hai jaha dono behne uspe chadh jati hai
Rubi : kya kaha us chudel ne
Neha : kiu bulaya akele me
Veer : kuch nahi , kah rahi thi mujhse pyar karne lagi hai
Rubi : fir apne kya kaha
Veer: kaha mera dil mere pass hahi nahi wo to mere lover ke pass hai kisi or ko kaise du
Itna sunte hi dono veer se lipat gayi thanks guddu hame itna pyar karne ke liye
Veer : thanks apka jo mujhe itna pyar karte ho
Fir veer age badh dono ke sath bed pe let gaya dono ko baho me bhar unke hotho pe kiss karta hai fir so jate hai
Next morning sabhi nikal te hai hotel se nilam ne unko personally airport drop kiya nilam ki ankome nami saf sabhi dekh sakte the magar kisine us topic ko nahi cheda fir veer and team chal pade punjab trip pe sabhi plen me baith gaye
3 ghante me sabhi pahuch gaye punjab
Veer or sabhi airport se bahar nikalte hai
Bahar hi kuch log in sabhi ka intezar kar rahe the
Admi : aphi danveer singh ho
Veer : ji mai hi danveer singh hu
Admi ne ishara kiya or tin cham chamati hui car unke samne ake ruki
Admi : sir chaliye
Rubi : kaha chalna hai hame
Veer : hamare ghar jo yaha punjab me hai hamara purkho ka ghar gao me
Neha : kya ham gao ja rahe hai apne bataya kiu nahi pehle
Veer : ham apne pind aye or gao na jaye ye kaise ho sakta hai or hamne apna gao to kabhi dekha hi nahi chalo bahut maza ayega
Biswa: wahh wahh pinjab ka gao sach much maja ayega Sabhi gari me baith gaye gadi chal padi kuch hi der me gadi city ko chod gao ke elake me enter hui
Yaha ka najara hi alag tha milo tak faila hua khet khaliyan bich se hote huye ek pakki sadak dil moh lene wala drisya
Khuchi der me gadi pakke raste ko chod kacche raste me chal padi or ant me ek chote se makan ke samne ruki
Makan bahut purana tha lekin achhi tarah dekhval kiya hua tha
Sabhi ghar ke gate khol ander chale gaye ghar me koi nahi tha
Ye veer ke purkho ka makan hai delhi jane se pehle veer ke dadaji or dadi yahi rahte the
Veer ko is ghar me bahut apna pan sa mahsus hua samne diwar pe veer ke dada dadi ki tasbir lagi thi
Veer ne unko pranam kia waisehi rubi neha sabhi ne pranam kia
Admi : sir app yaha kitne din rahenge
Veer : 3 din fir ham lout jayenge
Admi : sir yaha sari wabasta main ne kardi hai ek aurat ayegi apka khana bana degi or kisi chij ki jarurat ho to mujhe bula lijiyega
Veer : thik hai app jayiye
Wo admi chala gaya
Veer : chalo apna apna kamra choose karlo fresh ho jao gao ghum ne chalenge
Asiah : bhai ye batao yaha hamlog karenge kya 3 din
Veer : vai pehle ham gao ghumenge fir town me shopong karenge fir golden temple pe matha tekenge ghumenge firenge khayenge
Asish : bas bas bas samajh gaya yaha bahut kuch hai karne ko
Chalo fresh hote hai
Fir sabhi fesh hokar chale aye niche kamwali nasta banachuki thi sabne paratho ka nasta kiya or nikal gaye gao ke chakkar lagane
Chalte chalte sabhi pahuch gaye gao ke panchayet me jaha kuch bate chal rahi thi
Admi : sarpanch ji aab aur bardast nahi hota un logone firse hamare kheto se anaj kat le gaye hamari mehnat ko wo le gaye ab ham kya kare
Admi 2 : ha or yahi nahi unke pass hatiyar bhi hai
Police ko bataya to wo unlogo ko pakadna to dur unko dhund bhi na payi kabhi
Sarpanch : ye to badi muskil hai jab police kuch na kar payi to ham kya kar payenge or unke pass hatiyar hai mai kisike jan ka khatra na le sakta
Veer or sabhi ne unki bat suni or chal pade gao dekhne tabhi unko sarpanch ne pukara
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:51:45 GMT 5.5
new story update 31
Sarpamch : tum log kon ho beta pehle to gao me na dekha Veer : ji mai vikram singh ka beta hu ye dono meri badi behne hai or ye dono mere dost hai ham apna gao dekhne aye hai
Sarpanch : kya tum delhi ke vikram singh ke bete beti ho Veer : ji ha
Sarpanch : vahut time ho gaya kaisa hai mera dost mai or vikram bachpan ke dost hai lekin jab wo yaha se gaye fir mulakat na hui
Veer ne jhuk ke sarpanch ke pair chue rubi neha ne bhi Sarpanch : are bachho khus raho aaj kal kon itni ijjat deta hai pair chuta hai achhe sanskar diya hai vikram ne Tum log jarur ana mere ghar
Veer : ji jarur ancle ab ham chalte hai
Sarpanch : ha jao par sham se pehle ghar lout ana tumne suna to hoga yaha ki halat
Veer : ji ancle
Fir veer chal pada kheto ki or jaha log kheto me kam kar rahe the
Rubi neha bahut khus lag rahi thi khusi dono ke chehre se pata chal rahi thi ye khushi jagah dekhne ki thi ya veer ke sath ki ye bata pana muskil tha
Dono veer ka hath pakad kheto me ghum rahethe agar koi inhe dekhta
Aisa lagta naye premi ghum rahe hai
Biswa ne khet se ek ganna tod laya or khane laga asish bhi issi tarah gao or khet ghumne ke bad sabhi ghar lout aye Abhi rat ke 10 baj rahe the bahar sannata fail chuka tha waisevi gao me log jaldhi so jate hai
Veer or sabhi ne sone ka bandobast kar liya or let gaye sone ko
Rubi neha veer se chipki veer ko dekh rahi thi dono ka man hi nahi varta tha veer ko dekhne se veer bhi dono ko
masum sundarta me mohit ho raha tha magar veer apne man ko kabu karta hai
Lekin rubi neha nahi kar pati or dono veer ke galo ko chom leti hai
Rubi : ab our intezar nahi hota apko pyar karne ko ji chahta hai
Neha : apne hame rok rakha hai warna
Veer : warna kya
Neha ko saram ane lagi to is sawal ka jawab rubi ne diya
Rubi : warna apko papa bana chuki hoti
Veer : ohhh to meri jaan ko jaldi padi hai
Neha : ha hai or app to hame roke rakhe hai
Veer : apdono ke tewar thik nahi lag rahe chup chap so jao Rubi neha veer ke sine pe sir rakh ankhe band kar lete hai Veer dono ke sir pe hath ferta hai dono ko bahut sukun milta hai dono so jate hai
Veer dono ko side me leta ke khud uth jata hai or bahar chala jata hai
Bahar ake veer apna roop badal nikal jata hai
Veer kheto ke taraf udta hua jata hai waha karib 20 log fasal kat rahe the or inko traktar par load kar rahe the Veer niche uter
Veer : ruko
Admi veer ke awaj sun chock jate hai sabhine muh dhak rakhe the sab apne hatiyar nikal lete hai
Unka leader : kon ho tum or yaha kiu ayeho or ab ahi gaye ho to jinda nahi jao ge
Veer : to tum ho insab ke piche
Admi : kya matlab jo bhi ho abb tumko ham jinda nahi chodenge
Veer : kosis kar ke dekh lo
Tabhi do log hath me ganna katne wala hisuya liye veer ko marne aya
Veer pe hamla karne wala tha ke hatiyar hawame atak gaya
Veer ki najar hatiyar pe thi hatiyar niche gir gayi sabhi veer ko hairani se dekh rahe the
Tabhi leader fir bola: tum aise nahi mano ge
Or apni gun nikal li leader ko dekh baki sabne gun nikal li Veer pe tan di
Leader : abb bach ke dikha
Veer speed se sabki or lapka veer ki speed itni jada thi ko kisiko wo najar nahi aya veer ne sabke hath se gun chin wohi purane wale jagah pe agaya
Veer: abb bolo our kya
Sabhi darke mare kapne lage tabhi veer bola
Veer : sarpanch ji bahut ho gaya logo ko lutna abb jel jane ki taiyari karo
Sarpanch : to tum ko pata chal gaya insab ke piche mai hu jab tum jan gaye ho to tumko jinda nahi choda ja sakta
Sarpanch apne admio se : maro isko agar ye jinda bach gaya ham nahi bachenge
Sabhi veer pe tut pade koi kik marta to koi panch lekin veer sabko rokdeta hai
or unko bas ek ek thappad marta hai usime sare behosh ho jate hai
Veer : to sarpanch sahab abb kya kehte ho
Sarpanch : mujhe maff kardo mai lalach me agaya tha please mujhe chod do
Veer : tumhara faisla ab kanun karega Itna bolke veer ne sarpanch ko ek thappad mara or sarpanch behose ho gaya Un sabhi ko wohi ped se band veer ud chala ghar jab veer ghar pahucha to dono behne jagi hui thi
Veer : kya hua jaan soi nahi
Rubi : kaise soti app jo chale gayethe
Neha : appka sparsh se achhi nind ati hai app chale gaye to nind tut gayi
Veer : abb adat dalni padegi mera jivan hi aisa hai
Rubi : ham apke sath hai app jaisevi rakhoge rah lenge
Neha : apke liye ek rat to kya jitni vi rat ho sab jag ke gujar lenge
Veer : uski jarurat nahi aao mere bahome or so jao kal hame shopping fir golden temple jana hai
Fir dono veer se lipat jate hai ek side pe rubi or dusri side pe neha dono veer ke ankhome dekhte dekhte nind ke agose me dub gaye veer bhi unke pyar ke nashe me nind ke agosh me chala gaya
Edhar saka delhi bapas aagaya tha lekin apne behen ke pass nahi gaya usne apne gulamo ko bapas uske behen kr pass bhej diya..
Saka jungle ke bich ek paid pe baith bas veer ke bare me soch raha tha kaise wo shaitan ka hukum manne laga sirf uski behen ke karan.
10 sal pehle..
Saka or uski behen salaka nag vansh ke sabse bhayankar nag the..
Saka... Di di udhar mat jaiye waha khatra hai suna hai wahase shaitan ka samrajya suru hota hai...
Salaka... Mere bhai mujhe shaitan ka koi dar nahi ..
Main usse saktisali hu..
Saka.. Di di jid chodo.lout chalte hai..
Salaka .. Saka mujhe nago ki rani banna hai ..
Chahe mujhe kuch bhi karna pade..
Saka.. Kya ye thik rahega..
Salaka.. Tum apna dimag mat chalao bas mere piche aao..
Dono us ilake me pahuch gaye..
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Post by Sonu Kale on Mar 11, 2018 9:52:29 GMT 5.5
Nice story bhai ek request hai k story ko pura karna
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:53:05 GMT 5.5
new story update 32
Dono us ilake me pahuch gaye..
Tabhi waha ke mousam me badlao ane laga dekhte hi dekhte dina ka ujala rat ke andhere me badal gaya..
Saka.. Behna dekho mujhe kuch thik nahi lag raha achanak rat kaise ho gayi..
Salaka ..pata nahi lekin jo bhi ho main piche nahi hatungi mujhe aur sakti chahiye ...
Saka.. Didi pagal ho gayi ho kya sakti ke chakkar me jaan gawa dogi..
Salaka jo hojaye.. Mujhe bas nagoki rani banna hai..
Jabtak main nahi banjati main nahi loutungi..
Tabhi koi tezise aaya or dono ko punch mar ke chala gaya ..dono niche gir gate.
Saka or salaka khadi ho gayi..
Salaka.. Kon hai kiski itni himmat mujhpe hath uthaye..
Saka.. Bahar aao.. Fir koi tezise aaya or dono ko punch mar ke chala gaya ..
Dono fir gir gaye.. Uski raftar bahut jada thi ..
Salaka.. Aab mujhe gussa aaraha hai.. Itna bolke salaka ek bishal kai nagin me badal gayi karib 40 fit ki nagin thi..
Saka bhi ek bahut hi bade nag me badal gaya salaka ki tarah dono ke fun se aag nikal rahi thi..
Tabhi wo firse tezise salaka or saka ke taraf badha lekin isbar dono chokanne tha salaka ne usko apni puch se ek punch mara..
Wo udta hua ek ped se takra gaya..
Salaka tezise uske aur lapke uske samahal ne se pehle hi usko apni puch me lapet liya..
Salaka.. Aab bhag ke dikha .. Kon hai tu..
Admi.. Tum dono ki mout ..
Salaka... Tumhari itni himmat mujhse jaban lagao itna bolke salake na apne fun ka muh khola usme se aag ki ek lahar si nikli or us admi padi wo wohi jaal gaya..
Hahahahaha.. Salaki bhayankar hasi gunj gayi..
Saka ko ye sab pasand nahi aaraha tha lekin wo apni behen ko akela nahi chod sakta tha..
Tabhi unko ek awaj sunai di..
Awaj.. Bahut khub salaka .. Bahut khub ..tum sach me takatwar ho..
Jab dono ne us aur dekha waha asman me bas ek kala saya lehra raha tha..
Salaka.. Kon ho tum ..
Saya.. Main is puri duniya ke kali saktio ka malik shaitan hu..jisse tum milne aarahi thi..
Salaka.. Achha main kaise biswas karlu..
Saya.. Ne apna hath age kiya or dono ko apni sakti se hawa me utha liya.. Aab biswas aaya..
Salaka.. Shaitan mujhe aur sakti chahiye.. Kya tum mujhe sakti de sakte ho..
Saya.. Hahahahaha ... Bas itni si bat lekin mujhe kya milega..
Salaka.. Kya chahiye tumhe..
Saya.. Tum tumko mera gulam banna padega..
Salaka.. Mujhe manjur hai..
Saka.. Behen tum ye kya keh rahi ho tum gulami karogi..
Salaka.. Sakti ke liye kuch bhi karungi..
Saka... Di aap aisa na kare..
Salaka.. Tum shant raho ye mera faisla hai kya tum mere sath nahi ho..bolo bhai..
Saka Man mar ke apni behen ka sath deta hai wo apni behen ko bahut pyar karta tha..
Saka.. Thik hai didi..jaise apki marji..
Salaka.. Mujhe manjur hai shaitan..
Saya.. Tumne abhi jise mara wo vampire ka raja tha aaj se main tumko vampire ki rani banata hu..
Sath me tumko sakti bhi deta hu.. Akar dharan kar sakti ho..
Saye ne aur bhi kuch sakti salaka ko diya..
Itna bolke shaitan ne apna hath age kiya tabhi uske hath se ek lal rang ki roshni nikli or dekhte hi dekhte salaka me shama gayi..
Salaka shaitan ki gulam ban gayi.. Lekin saka bas apni didi ke sath deta raha..
Fir dono ne milke nago pe apni tabedari ka dava kiya
salaka ke samne baki koi bhi nag nahi tik paya or salaka ban gayi nago or vampire ki rani..
Or saka bhi ban gaya nago ka raja.. Dono bhai behen sath me raj karne lage..
Present time..
Lekin saka kabhi salaka ke burai ka hissa nahi bana
lekin veer ke mamle me apni behen ki nakamyabi ke karan wo veer se ladne ke liye taiyar ho gaya..
Next morning
Veer time se uth gaya apna yug sadhna purn kar fresh ho gaya
dono behne bhi fresh ho gayi jab tino bahar aye to asish or biswa bhi ready the
Nasta lag chuka tha sabne nasta kar nikal pade market ki aur
kuch hi der me sabhi gao ka rasta chod pahuch gaye city me
veer ne mall ka pata laga liya tha sadhna se city ko scan kar ke to wo sabhi pahuch gaye mall
Mall bahut hi sandar tha punjabi logo ki vid lagi thi sath me bahut different culture ke log bhi the kuch bideshi bhi the
Veer dono behno ko leke ledis section me pahuch gaya
Rubi neha ne punjabi suit lene lagi
Veer : app dono suit or jo bhi pasand hai dekhlo mai or biswa asish apne liye sherwani dekhne ja rahe hai
Rubi : thik hai app jayiye
Fir veer chal pada dono asish or biswa ke sath mens section me
par jate wakt hi biswa kahi ruk gaya jab veer asish ne dekha to biswa kisiki ur dekh raha tha
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:57:25 GMT 5.5
Nice story bhai ek request hai k story ko pura karna Main pinto bhai ke kahne pr xp se copy kr post kr raha hon bad main wo is pr update post kre ge intzar kro jaldi hi is pr update aie ga
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 9:59:53 GMT 5.5
update 33
par jate wakt hi biswa kahi ruk gaya jab veer asish ne dekha to biswa kisiki ur dekh raha tha .
Veer ne uske najro ka picha kiya to wo koi ladkio ka group tha
lekin biswa ladkio ko nahi ladki ko dekh raha tha
Asish : kiu bhai mast ladkiya hai na koi pasand to nahi agayi
Biswa : hadbada kar nahi nahi bas aisehi najar pad gayi ( biswa ne bat samhali )
Lekin veer samajh chuka tha mamla kya hai lekin abhi sahi wakt nahi tha usse ye bat karne ki
Veer : chalo chalte hai shopping nahi karni hai kya
Biswa : ha ha chalo
Fir sabhi ne milke shopping ki or nikal gaye mall se lekin biswa ke ankhome udasi dikh rahi thi
Sabji bahar nikal chal pade golden temple
Golden temple barat ke punjab rajya me Amritsar me stith hai ,
Yeh sikh samudai ka pabitra stan hai , is mandir ka itihas kehta hai ke isko kai bar toda or har bar iska punar nirman kiya gaya , golden temple ka nirman magan mughal samrat akbar ke sashankal me hua tha jo sabhi dharm ka purn adar karta tha ,mandir ka gubad sone se dhake huye hai
Amritsar sthit golden temple ko harmadar sahib ya darbar sahib ke nam se vi jana jata hai ,yeh sikho ka pramukh dharmic kendra hai , is pabitra mandur ka nirman karya guru arjan dev ji ki dekh rekh me purn hoa tha
Sabhi ne temple pe matha teka or fir lout aye lunch time ho gaya tha bhuk sabhi ko lag gayi thi
Rubi : guddu bhukh lagi hai
Neha : Ha guddu pet me chuhe kud rahe hai
Biswa : ha veer chalo dhabe pe lunch karte hai
Veer : ha chalo
Fir bahi dhabe pe car roki
Veer or sabhi khane ke liye baith gaye or order kar diya
Wo log khane ka intezar hi kar rahe the ke ek police van ake waha ruki ..
Waha kuch manchale bhi the jo desi daru pi rahe the unki najar rubi neha pe padi
Ladka : ehhh roshan dekh kya mast mal hai re
Roshan : are ha yar in pario ke liye to mai kisika khun hi kardu ..
Dekh to kya nashila badan hai ..
Ladka : bhai dekh kya katil badan hai kya mast jisam hai isne to sarab ka nasha utar diya
Roshan : chal ab aur intezar nahi hota
Ladka : rukja yaha dhabe pe nahi kitne log hai or wo dekh police bhi hai ..
Roshan : thik hai chal age chal ke inke ane ka intezar karte hai apne admio ko bula le in pario ke sath tin kate bhi hai ..
Ladka : chalo fir wo chale gaye ..
Par veer ne unki bate sun li par khamosh raha ..
Sabhi ne daba par khana khaya ..
Fir chal pade kuch hi dur gaye the ke raste me do gadi khadi thi or karib 10 log the jinme wo ladka or roshan nam ka ladka bhi tha ..
Veer biswa asish bahar agaye
Biswa: kya bat hai aise rasta kiu roka hai
Ladka : un londiyo ko hamare hawale karde or chala ja jaan bach jayegi ..
Veer : achha chal nahi karta kya karlega biswa asish tum dono gadi me baitho mai abhi aya ..
Ladka : lagta hai ye khud ko tis mar kha samajhta hai nikal do iski sari hero giri ..
Sabhi ladke lathia liye age badhe or veer pe hamla kar diya ..
Veer kud ke unke hamle se bach gaya in logo ne fir se hamla kiya..
magar veer ne pehle do ladko ko ek ek kick mari dono udte huye do or ladko ke uper gir gaye unko bahut chot ayi ..
Do or ladko ne veer ke sir ko nishana kar lathi chalayi
magar veer jhuk gaya or unka var chuk gaya veer ne unke pet me daradhar punch mar diye
unke muh se khun nikal gaya wo wohi pet pakad ke baith gaye
Baki bache 4 wo sab ki halat dekh bhag kade huye ..
Veer : tum sabko mai akhri mouka deta hu chup chap chale jao yaha se
Mai kisiki jaan lena nahi chahta jab tak jaruri na ho ab vago yahase jao
Ladke darke mare gadio me baith vag khade huye .. Veer bhi gadi me baith gaya ..
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 10:01:28 GMT 5.5
update 34
Veer bhi gadi me baith gaya ..
Biswa : tumne apni sakti ka istemal kiu nahi kiya ..
Veer : jab tak sakti ki jarurar nahi hoti sakti ka istemal uska durbabhar hota hai..
or gurudev ne mujhe yehi sikh di hai sakti dikhawa karne ke liye nahi logo ki rakhsa karne ke liye hoti hai ..
Asish : sahi kaha ..
Rubi : I love you guddu
Neha : I love you too guddu ..
Asish or biswa hasne lage ..
Veer : I love you too di ab chalo ghar chalte hai aaj bahut ghum liya ..
Kal ka din tour ka akhri din hai fir ghar wapsi karni hai
Fir veer gadi age badha deta hai or sabhi ghar pahuch jate hai
Jab wo gao me pahuche to sabne dekha sarpanch ko hathkadi laga Police le ja rahi thi ..
Rubi : sarpanch ko police kiu pakad rahi hai ..
Veer : yehi hai wo jo kheto se fasal kat ke le jata tha kishano ka ..
Neha : achha to rat ko app isse hi pakadne gaye the ..
Veer : ha di
Fir sabhi ghar pahuch gaye sab apne apne kamre me chale gaye tabhi veer ne biswa ke mind me kaha bhai fresh hoke mujh se milna akele me ..
Biswa: thik hai bhai
Veer room me aya sab bari bari fresh huye ..
Veer : di mai jara bahar dekh ke ata hu app dono rest kare ..
Neha : kaha ja rahe hai hame akela chod ..
Veer : di mai bas bahar tahalne ja raha hu biswa ke sath samjha karo ..
App ek pukar doge to dodta kya udta chala ayunga ..
Rubi : thik hai jao or udas ho ke baith gayi ..
Veer rubi ke najdik jake usko apni baho me bhar leta hai aur uski ankome dekh ke ..
Veer : jaan tum udas kiu ho tum dono to meri dilke do hisse ho kya mai tum dono se dur rah sakta hu ..
Mujhe bas kuch bat karni thi biswa se please smile karo ..
Rubi or neha dono smile ke sath veer se chipak gayi veer dono ke khusbu me khone laga ke tabhi ..
Biswa : bhai mai ready hu niche ajao ..
Biswa ke awaj se veer or dono ki tandra tuti ..
Veer : jaan jayu ..
Rubi neha : jao or jaldi ana ham intezar kar rahe hai ..
Veer : thik hai
Veer niche agaya or biswa ke sath bahar chal pada ..
Kuch dur jake veer ne biswa ko kaha..
Veer : aab bata teri udasi ki wajah kya hai ..
Biawa : mai kaha udas hu ..
Veer : dekh tujhe pata hai mujhse kuch chupa nahi sakta tu
nahi batayega to mai khud tere dimag me jhak ke dekh lunga
Biswa veer ke gale lag rone laga ..
Biswa : bhaii bhai mai nahi ji payunga or nahi jiya jata ...
Veer : chup hoja mai hu na bata kya hua ..
Biswa : bhai wo hai na mai usse bahut pyar karta hu ...
Veer : kya naam hai uska kaha hai woo ..
Biswa : bhai uska naam paridhi hai meri pari mai usee bahut pyar karta hu ..
Veer : to problem kya hai or tu usee kab mila kaise pyar ki suruwat hui sab bata suruse ..
Biswa : bhai ye tab ki bat hai jab tu simla chala gayatha ..
Tere jane se mai bahut akela rehne laga ..
Aisehi kuch mahine beet gaye mai bahut udas or akela hota gaya ..
Tabhi paridhi ne school join kiya
Mai usko dekh ke kho sa gaya tha
Mai padhai me bahut achha tha is liye teacher ne mujhe pari ki help ke liye kaha
Mai bhi uske karib jana chahta tha fir hamari dosti suru hui ..
Mai usko padhai me help karta tha dekh te hi dekhte ham achhe dost ban gaye
Lenin mai dosti se age badh gaya usko chahne laga ..
Mujhe uske bare me kuch pata nahi tha usse sirf school me hi mulakat hoti thi..
Aisehi 4 sal beet gaye ..
Ab maine usko parpose karne ka pura man bana liya tha ..
Wo din school ki chuttiya suru hone wali thi ..
Mai gharse usko propose karne ka pura man banake nikla tha ..
Lekin jab mai school pahucha to dekha
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Post by hamza123 on Mar 11, 2018 10:02:30 GMT 5.5
update 35
Lekin jab mai school pahucha to dekha
Paridhi ke ma baap aye huye hai dikhne me wo bahut amir lag rahe the
Jab mai pari ke pass gaya to usne meri taraf dekha bhi nahi apne mammy papa ke sath chali gayi
Wo din uska school me akhri din tha fir wo kabhi bapas nahi ayi ..
Bas aaj mall me usko firse dekha to dil ke jakham taja ho gaye ..
Wo bahut amir ghar ki ladki hai itna mujhe pata chal chuka tha school se
Wo to chali gayi lekin uski yade mere sath rah gayi din din uaki yaad me mar mar ke jita hu ..
Ab aur bardast nahi hota ye pyar jitna khubsurat hai utna hi dard bhi deta jai ...
Veer : samhal apne apko tune pyar kiya hai na agar kabhi mauka mile to us pyar ko pane ki kosis karna usee dur rah kar kuch nahi hoga
Biswa : ha bhai agar kabhi fir mile to usko jarur apne pyar ka ehsas karayunga
Veer : bas to thik hai mood thik kar jo hoga dekha jayega mai hu na tere sath
Biswa: thanks bhai
Veer : chal ghar chalte hai
Fir sab ghar ajate hai fir kuch khas nahi hua rat ka diner kar sab so jate hai
Agle din sabhi ghum fir se chal padte hai airport fir plan se sabhi delhi pahuch jate hai
Veer biswa or ashish ko hostel drop karta hai or ghar ki or chal deta hai
Ghar pahuch sab se milte hai
Shalini : beta bahut miss kiya tujhko
Veer : ma maine bhi bshut miss kiya
Vikram : beta rubi neha trip kaisa raha apne bhai ke sath
Rubi : bahut khubsurat bahut sandar
Neha : bahut exiting tha papa veer ne to kamal kar diya
Dadi : mera pota hai hi anokha
Veer : kya app sab bhi in bato ko leke baith gaye chalo di fresh ho jate hai
Fir veer chala gaya sabhi apne apne kam mai lag gaye Kuch hi der me diner lag gaya sabhi diner pe agaye
Vikram : beta trast ka kuch socha hai
Veer : papa mai ne biswa or asish ko is kam me lagaya hai Unse behtar koi nahi meri najar me
Vikram : sahi kaha
Rubi : papa kal se ham guddu ke sath collage jayenge
Shalini : nahi usko problem hogi
Neha : ma ham guddu ko disturb nahi karenge
Veer : jane do na ma
Vikram : ha jane do veer ke sath rahte inki chinta nahi hogi
Shalini : man marke ha keh deti hai ( man me aab apko kaise samjhayu ye dono veer se kitna jud rahe hai samaj ko kya kahenge )
Veer apni ma ki man ki bat sun leta hai lekin kuch nahi kehta abhi sahi time nahi tha sabko khul ke bataneka
Fir diner ke bad sab room me chale jate hai sone Aaj dono behno ko alag kamro me sona pada
Agli shubha
Veer utha sadhna karke chal pada jogging me
Veer jogging kar raha tha ke tabhi usko kisi ne pukara
Veer piche mudke dekha to samne roshni khadi thi
Roshni : veer ji kaise hai
Veer : ohh app ji mai thik hu ap batayiye
Roshni : mai bhi thik hu app dikhe nahi kitne dino se jogging me
Veer : ha wo mai or mere dost or behne ghumne gaye the
Roshni : achha chaliye jogging karte hai
Fir dono sath me jogging karne lage
Dono achhe dost ban gaye the
Veer ghar bapas aaya or apne room me pahuch gaya ro usko bed pe hi uske kapde rakhe dikhe
Veer samajh gaya dono behno ne hi kia hoga
Veer fresh hoke wohi kapde pehen ke taiyar ho jata hai or niche ajata hai
Age ki kahani veer ki jubani..
Main jab niche aaya mujhe waha sab dikhe ma papa dadi rubi neha dono taiyar thi collage jane ke liye..
Main unke sath baith gaya..
Rubi man me.. Aaj mera guddu kamal ka lag raha hai collage me kaise isko bachayu ladkio se..
Veer rubi ke mind me.. Jaan mujhko bachane ki jarurat nahi main to app dono ka diwana hu..
Rubike hotho pe smile agayi..
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